#3|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 13 to Chp 17)

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#281

zoya is safe

asad realised his mistake

it will be intresting to see how he will convince every one

esp zoya

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

it will b a very difficult task 4 Asad 2 win back Zoya's love & trust

well written part,will wait 4 nxt part

thnx 4 PM

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

loved this update...asad is finally back...poor zoe ...she has to endure troubles again n again...but she made a gud decision by letting asad stay...he already regrets his actions!!!
loved the mother-son convo...hope he'll win everyone's trust soon...continue soon...as I'm eager to know what will happen now...
n yes the song selection is amazing...apt for the situation as always!!! 😛

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

you captured everyone's emotions related to zoya..brilliantly. .

each within their space and limitations. ..

even dilshad was caught up. .

asad wanting to make amends..

but difficult to be trusted again. .so soon. .

calling out for ammi..after knowing the facts..

got a long way to go...

brilliantly written. ..

thanks for the pm

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Ankita Grover

@HoityToity

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

lovely update

mangalpuri zoya i mean asad in danger ahead i think

Edited by hottytotty - 12 years ago

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Shabana0786

@Shabana0786

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Superb update like always!!..

Zoya's decision about Asad..I didn't see that coming..

Definitely understandable to how everyone treating Asad..hopefully he soon will be forgiven..who shall take that step first??...

Thanks for the pm..

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Naziah Siddiqua Choudhury

@Dragon_Aries

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Its going gr8. Awesmazing. Plz continue...ASAP😉

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

hey tis is superb...

totally fabulous...

a very heart touching update...

asad realise hw much he love zoya n he wants to win her back n nw he have to win her trust n all of his group trust too especially his father...

luv the way u describe hw is everybody feeling...

luv the way dilshad n asad chat with each other n he ask her for the truth about his mother n he still call dilshad his mother...

wonder wat will asad do nw to win back his love his zoya back...

totally luv it...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#289

That was awesome.. Zoya risked her life for padfoot.. That was so touching.. Finally Asad realized his mistake and love for Zoya.. A very sweet moment between Dilshaad and Asad.. Love how he starts to call her Ammi.. Eager to know what happens next..:)

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
OMG!! Mahi finally u updatd 🤗
wow lovd it..!!

Poor Asad nobody is thr 4 him..!!

But his Ammi is thr 4 him!!

Finally got 2 no wht happen in d past!!

Hmmm so its tough time 4 Asad!!

wel cnt wait 2 read more Mahi

❤️ 😉

Yup tough time for Asad