#3|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 13 to Chp 17)

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Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Hilarious, edgy and poignant!

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princess101

@princess101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

I loved it the Dilshad and Asad convo was soo emotional I loved it thanx for the Pm and update soon :D:D::D

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Awesome update! Loved it! Lets see how Asad plans to get zoya now!

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aman

@aman93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

wow... awsm update asad got to knw full truth... dilshad is really nice..

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

A looong comment for my sis! 😉

OH EM GEE, MAHI! 😲 YOU FINALLY UPDATED! 🥳 🤗 *Dances* 😆

Gosh, that was SO intense! 😲

The flashbacks with Shireen, Rashid, and DIlshad...omg! 😲

Oh, my amazing Zoe, she saved Padfoot! ❤️

I'm so glad she's okay! 😳

I loved how you showed everyone's relationship with Zoya and how they were all feeling. That was beautiful. 👏 👏 👏

An awesome, fantastic, fabulous, amazing, superb, emotional, intense and beautiful chapter! 👏 👏 👏

BTW, I loved Asad's words at the end. And how Dilshad is supporting him. 👍🏼 ❤️

Continue super-soon, Mahi! 😉 😛 😃

I love you, sista! 🤗 *Blows kiss* ❤️

-xoxo, Fari 😳 ❤️

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

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It was awesome. You potrayed beautifully everyone thoughts and emotion. They love Zoya so much. So the truth is out and Asad would feel more guilty. I knew she/they wouldnt forgive him easily. Update soon :)

Edited by Chipmunks. - 12 years ago

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reyna winget

@reyna.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

it's awsome !!

loved asad praying for zoe...!!

poor asad 😭

son-mom scene was nice...!

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

read the full story.

it was awesome update.

continue soon.

and thanx for pm.

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Nisha

@nisha150

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

finallyyy u updatedd...😃

superbbb updatee lyk alwayss👏👏👏

loved d scene where asad saves zoya from fallingg❤️

poor asad,no one is listening to him...but atleast his ammi listened..😊

happieee to know dat d story is moving faster😊😊

in short loved d updateee🤗

updateee nxt prt soonn,cnt wait to read moree😳😳

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

goSh mAHiii!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

i WUd HAAVE KILLEd u,, if u haD not done Dis!!!!!!

U updated!!!!!!! yayyy!

I'm so haPPy dat u made things alright!!!!!!! muwahhh fo dat... 😳 😳 😳

Thank God...Zoe is fine...i was hell scared!!!!!! 😃 😃

Asad's stubborness...manna padega! 😆 😆 😆

I know Zoya's not gonna forgive Asad easily...and she should not!!!!!!!!!! Should not means shouuld not!!!!! make him pay for everything he has done...

Dilshad forgave him!!!! Awww... Mom can never remain angry with her child...a perfect illustration.. 😃

PADFOOT- Asad scence...please do add...wanna know how wud padfoot react at Asad now!!!!! 😉

In a word...loved It... 😳

It was Fabulous!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏