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-Candz-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: priya713
Wow Candy...so utterly beautiful. You know sometimes I forget you're just a normal person and Im not reading an excerpt from a real published book. You're that good...Im not kidding. And thanks for giving us a rain romance :) ...even though it was so sad...bittersweet was the perfect word for it. :)
PS... I want that anarkali suit...so pretty!!

Thanks Twin 😳

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

hey tis is amazing...

luv it...

its superb...

beautifully written...

thx fr the pm...

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-Candz-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: HallyH
Candyyy OMG man
I didnt expect it to be sad too but I LOVED IT
Aaw man u write amazingly hun
I should take some tips on how to write from u man
Btw i recommend u do the OS contest of ASYA coming up
Cos u r great at writin OS's n all
Amazing OS candy
Btw i miss you 🤗

Thanks Hally and I miss ya too 🤗

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sonia

@sonia125

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Luved it...n the dress is also awsm...
Write more...

Do read my ss ...The Truths Out..

Two shot...on ayra n zooe...Thank you Bajji..

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Mishti

@MayurnASYA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Awesome OS👏👏

Beautifully written

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

OMG, that was just PERFECT! 👏 👏 👏 Sooo beautiful! ❤️ I loved it to death! Why are you SO amazing? 😉 😆

-Fari 😳 ❤️

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-Candz-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-
OMG, that was just PERFECT! 👏 👏 👏 Sooo beautiful! ❤️ I loved it to death! Why are you SO amazing? 😉 😆

-Fari 😳 ❤️

Fari you're gonna make me get a big head with all the flattery 😳 Glad you liked it 😉

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: cclove

Fari you're gonna make me get a big head with all the flattery 😳 Glad you liked it 😉

I am sorry but you absolutely MUST continue this to give at a happywala ending. Like the one where asad and zoya met at a party and ... Naughty things happened and she met him four months later.

You can make it kind of an epilogue ... Two years later, etc. and fill up the back story with lots of burning romance between asad and zoya. Its the only thing that will keep me alive! Come on, dont you want to save lives? 😳

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...MonaCo...

@...MonaCo...

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Great post Candy! No doubt you are my favorite writer!!! Love the song choice and how you interplay it with your story!!!! What a welcome relief in contrast to all the stupid articles floating around here.

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-Candz-

@-Candz-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

@Oldestfan, it's an OS. It kinda ends there 😆 for me to give them a happy ending I'd have to invest and make the story a SS or a FF and I don't have the time to plus I have two FFs in dire need of updating 😆

I'm sticking to OS and TS for now . . . but I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much 😉