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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: monaco

Great post Candy! No doubt you are my favorite writer!!! Love the song choice and how you interplay it with your story!!!! What a welcome relief in contrast to all the stupid articles floating around here.


Thanks Mona! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: cclove

@Oldestfan, it's an OS. It kinda ends there 😆 for me to give them a happy ending I'd have to invest and make the story a SS or a FF and I don't have the time to plus I have two FFs in dire need of updating 😆

I'm sticking to OS and TS for now . . . but I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much 😉

No...! *cries inconsolably in corner*

Maybe as the show goes on( you know it must 😆) you will get ideas on a sequel ...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
It was amazing! It turned out great. 👏
The entire last paragraph. My fav part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
heart rendering os...
pain in seperation and when together..
and rain added to their proximity. .
loved it till the last full stop..
thanxs for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
This was beautiful. You potrayed their emotion very beautifully.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
beautiful...asya's pain was perfectly penned 👏
it made me enthusiastic for the upcoming track...thanks to u!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
U know its nice but then current track is rendering me all just gloomy grr :/
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
very very beautifully written...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
"Where she'd been barren and numb before she now felt warm and filled with love."
Magic with words!!!
Beautiful!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
you have such a gift with words! lovely story!

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