MISSING YOU.....ASYA OS

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This is my imagination on how the scene could play.its a very short os..hope you enjoy this...


Its yet another gloomy day for asad and zoya.it has been a month zoya left to siddhique mansion .zoya is maintaining a facade of happiness while asad kept himself completely engrossed in his work.

Zoya's pov

Its my dream to meet my abbu and I finally met him.now I am staying with him.i have spend my childhood thinking how my father could be.i dreamt of sleeping on his lap,listen stories from him,eat by his hand.god fulfilled all my wishes now.but am I happy now?how can I be happy .i've lost him,my asad ,whom I love , with whom I've planned to spend the whole of my life who stood by me in times of need,,who brought back me from death for a man who left me all alone at a tender age .destiny played a cruel game with me.but what can I do?i was deprived of mother's love,am I wrong in craving for my father?am I wrong in chosing him when I saw the same feeling in his eyes?

Asad's pov

What happened to me?i can't concentrate on my work,not able to meet any anyone.how can i?when I lost the one who taught me to see the world in a different perspective,who made me laugh,who fulfilled all my wishes,who filled the void in my life .she left me..left me all alone in this massive world.now my life went back to the time when she had not entered my life,it became more darker.how can she walk away from me?am I not important to me?she chose her father over me.

Zoya's pov

How can he let me go from him?he know about me.how hastily I take decisions without giving a thought.cant he explain me?cant he stop me?he guided me for every thing I did,he corrected me,he reprimanded me for every small mistake.but this time ,when I committed such a great mistake by chosing my father over him,he just agreed.its my fault,I agree.but cant he stop me?cant he shout at me that you are mine and I can't let you go.d oesn't he know he have every right on me?doesn't he know how much I love him?i know asad u love me and u have done this for my happiness but how cant u think once that i cannot live without you?

Asad's pov

How can she go like that.i know her well,how she craved for her father's love, infact I too helped her.her only dream is to meet him.she came all alone to india for the same reason.how did I forget althose at that time.its my fault to keep her in a situation to chose between me and her father.what else she can do?its all my fault. How did I forget she once given her dream to remove me from the clutches of tanveer,how did I forget the things she done to keep me happy.to fulfil my wishes.can't she scream at me for what I did?cant she ask me to change my decision?but what have I done?cant I stop her?even though I know she will stay for me if I ask I just let her go.i know zoya even though you want to stay with me you left me thinking about my rivalry between your father and me.but how could you think I can live with out you?

Zoya'pov

Its enough asad. i cant stay away from you anymore.i know my father willnot agree to my decision but I don't care about it.you are my life.i am coming to you asad..

Asad's pov

I cant stay anymore without you. No one can stop me not even your father.I will fight for you zoya.you are mine,only mine.i am coming to get you zoya..


thanks for reading my work..

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...lakshmi...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww. nice awesome. loved it.plzzz continue soon
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Go get your Ms. Musibat, Mr. Khan

Great OS, I hope you continue this!
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Wow..Its awesome😃 Can yo pls continue this with their reunion😳
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Wow so beautiful... POV.. for both ❤️ ❤️
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AWESOME OS LAKSHMI...KEEP IT UP...
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Loved it...it was beautiful 😊
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Awesome work pls cont it further
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It was beautiful. Please continue soon.
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Nice story hope u continue it.

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