AsYa TS: More Than A Wish - Part 2 Page 12!

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bindasss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Just perfect! It was amazing! Absolutely loved it! Please continue soon!! :)

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CrazyBilli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Awww...it was cutely beautiful!!! ;)

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rutu83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

aw shucks - i didn't know you were not feeling good. now i feel bad about asking for the update. hope you feel better...

awww- it was very..cute😳 i know i should say beautiful (because it was) or sensual (because it was) but their first kiss and it was so very sweet and cute
wanna know where asad will take her but take your time. health above all😊

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Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: rutu83
aw shucks - i didn't know you were not feeling good. now i feel bad about asking for the update. hope you feel better...

awww- it was very..cute😳 i know i should say beautiful (because it was) or sensual (because it was) but their first kiss and it was so very sweet and cute
wanna know where asad will take her but take your time. health above all😊

Woh, Actually this was the last part 😛 *dodges a chappal*

It is a TWO-SHOT *ducks from an egg*

But aww it's ok! I actually felt horrible today. Last night I was fine. But something came up and I couldn't finish writing it. But today being at home like a sick lazy ass haha gave me time to finish it 😃

Really happy you liked it 😳

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jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

It was really beautiful. Loved it.

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Curiousmind

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

This is exactly what the real scene was missing...their first kiss! But we can't have that in Indian television so thanks for this wonderful TS and making the scene more momerable for us.

By the way feel better:)

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Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Curiousmind
This is exactly what the real scene was missing...their first kiss! But we can't have that in Indian television so thanks for this wonderful TS and making the scene more momerable for us.

By the way feel better:)

AWW thanks!! I'm so happy you liked it

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rajnid68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

play with the words ...amazing. .

light, frothy yet stylish. .

he finds her mature and at times childish. .

his six packs...definitely hers..

absolutely adorable. ..

thanks for the pm

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love.asad.zoya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Beautiful ... Amazing ... Loved it 😳

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anushreemishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

I hope you get well soon...
This was just beautiful...hot but sweet,romantic with a hint of amusement...I loved how they were eyeing each other and tracing and practically memorising every feature of eachother with their eyes and man that kiss was hawwt 😳 and the way he trailed kisses along her neck and jaw line and she caressed her six packs made me blush so hard...
I love how they just lay beside each other their fingers entwined...
This was perfect