AsYa TS: More Than A Wish - Part 2 Page 12!

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Aw, this is really beautiful!! I started laughing when Asad was asking her to go with him, but she was too dazed to listen to him and for some reason i can't stop!! Honestly, you written it so beautifully and i'm looking forward to reading on, if this wasn't the end, of course. Thank you!! x

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

hey totally superb...

amazing...luv it...

so sweet...

thx fr the pm...

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

I feel fuzzy and good =)

Beautiful one =)

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

SUPERB PART.

LOVED IT.

THANX FOR THE PM. TAKE CARE.

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Monica, I really missed reading your stories. Glad you threw a teaser our way!! 😆

How romantic and absolutely adorable! Wish we could get to see something like this on TV, but alas, Indian show and the lead's contract get in the way! Also, the show is still hung up on Mr. Prude Ahmed Khan! 😛

Loved how you described Asad's face from Zoya's POV: "a snatch of fallen hair on his forehead, the glimmer in his eyes as he gave her the faintest of smiles, very Jahanpana style. She noticed the small, but visible beauty spot under his left eye, the scar he had on his right eyebrow, making a mental note to ask him how he got it." Very nice. I loved the dig at KSG's overgrown thatch, umm I mean snatch of hair!! 😉 😆

Trust Zoya to giggle after an intimate scene!! Only she can pull it off!! Love the AsYa bond! 👏

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

This is so, so, so nice!! I could totally see it happening my head. Oh gosh if only this had really happened in the show!! Monica when you write your versions of scenes in the show, it makes the show itself look bad hahaha leaving us wanting more!! I think it's because of you that my expectations of the show keep becoming higher :p Okay bye I'm going to re-read it now hahahaha.

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

wonderful dr!!! simply beautiful!!!👍🏼

after reading ur updates...i always feel to scream please agar kush aur lines hote to ky ho jata yaar!!!! LOL!!😆

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

lovely...

they were so adorable..

update soon..

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

First things first: WELCOME BACK MONICAAA!!!🤗 It feels good to see you back, albeit not totally fit yet lekin phir bhi Big smile

Dil khushi kardi tunhe with this update. It was romantic, beautiful, sweet, cute and just ☺️

Pehle that hug... How I wish, I was in his arms😳 (this will always remain a dream) 😆

she felt his lips capture hers. (And then...the kiss...)☺️

no, her six packs. (Me being sooo jealous now)

He feathered kisses all over her neck (I don't know about you or others, but a kiss in the neck has a totally different feeling. Uska mazaa hi kuch aur hai...gutter gutter gutter) ☺️

"because, you seem to know what you're doing," (Koi shak...He is Mr. Khan, of course he knows what he is doing)😛

and he slowly moved his lips to her ear.
"Aap ko kya lag tha hai, Zoya," he whispered hoarsely. (Why oh why, do you do this me??? Mr. Khan whispering in your ear is absolutely irresistible) ☺️

Yes, life with his Zoya would be many things, but dull was not one of them. And that made him happier than he ever knew he could be. (Lovely, very cute, sweet and romantic)

Dear, you don't deserve any chappals, tomatoes or eggs. For this update the only thing you truly deserve is a big HUG 🤗
Thanks a lot for this...made me feel all good and happy 😊

Take care and get well soon... your loyal readers are waiting for you 😉