AsYa TS: More Than A Wish - Part 2 Page 12!

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Loved it!!!😳

not fair u ended it there...*pout*😆

cant wait to read the next part!👍🏼

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Nisha

@nisha150

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

wowww...u r finallyy back dear
i soo happiee🤗
dimple wala smile dekhna ...was super cuteee
and zoya saying sabke samne jahapana aur kaneez ke samne senti was superbb daialouge👏
update nxt prt sooonn

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Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Monica! I was so glad to see the PM from you! I knew I can expect something good 😊

Loved this part, the way you described their thoughts, the gap in between their lines in the show 😃

And dimple wala smile line 😳

Can't wait to read what you have in mind for the next part! 😃

Edited by Asya_Maaneet - 12 years ago

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

welcome back sweets..loved it..so gud it is...missed ur stories...& u too...😊😊

continue & pm me

pari

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

I like the beginning of this TS...please PM me when you continue..

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Monica wrote something!!! *shocked*

Yayyiieee!!!! I'm shooo happiiee that you're finally back to writing again!!! 🤗

This was really awesome hun!!! The scene is mostly from the show, yes, but the way you have described every detail and every emotion, makes it more and more beautiful! as though you recreated the scene with ur words...

Please update the next part soon!!!