AsYa TS: More Than A Wish - Part 2 Page 12!

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jasminerose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Really nice and continue soon.

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anushreemishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

This was very sweet and I loved how in the end asad pulls zoya towards him...
I am excited for 2nd part...continue soon 😊

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

hey tis is superb...

luv it...

beautifully written...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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JASLEEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Superb start ...
Looks beautiful..
Wonder what Asad is gonna do next...
Thanx 4 d pm n update the part 2 very soon...

~JAZ~

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nikki.171

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Surprise this sure is !

I loved the starry night in the show but I felt a teensy bit disappointed when they were tooo far apart. They needed to be a little closer.
So anyways, I love where this is heading and I am excited too . Just like our Asad Miya ! Continue super soon.

P.S This is sadistic you know, stopping it at a moment when I am anticipation Asad's next move !

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grad2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

really nice plzz do update soon!!!

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@metoyou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Monicaaa, oh my darlinggg!!! 😃

You are back in the game girl!!! Me so happy now

Really, its so good to see you back and coming back into your element. That starry night was indeed very nicely done. I can't wait for your next update to read how your versions is going to be like.

Tears in Zoya's eyes were like drops of acid on his heart (Wow, beautiful)

After all, being physically comfortable with each other was also important. (Gul madam, aap sun rahe ho na???)

Without further delay, he slowly let go her extended hand, and pulled her closer with the other. (Oh ho, Mr Khan being bold and all)😛

Once again, very happy to see you back!!! 🤗