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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
i think anything happened with zoe, may be she died...
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Storyline padhke main darr gayi...😭 Jaldi bata phir kya hua...

Love your writing style so much...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love your work and thus I am in

the beginning.. addicting

guess... many saying Zoya being dead... let me try another one

how about both from different planets 😆

watever it is

i am in


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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi.
here i am with the first chapter.😊 By the way, where did i mentioned that its gonna be a sad story😉? nobody guessed the story line correct except MjhtFan_Mahima. Well... its gonna be a supernatural story😆😆😆 😆 here you go with the first chapter.



Chapter 1



Do you believe in super naturals? Do you believe in life in other planets? Do you believe that there is a force which controls all of us? Well, whatever may be your answer, Zoya Farooqui definitely did. She was a normal girl with extra ordinary ambitions. She doesnt live to fit in the crowd. A girl who would not go blindly behind fashion. She was definitely the example for beauty with brain.

It was just another busy day for Zoya. She hates morning because it constantly reminds her of the loss. Being an orphan, she had lived her whole life practically alone. She never repented it though, but sometimes she missed her parents who were died in a car accident. Growing up all alone was not her choice, but it was her fate. Even after suffering a life time of agony in tender age itself, she never gave up her enthusiasm towards life. In fact her zeal to live the life had grown more over the years.

As she walked through the busy roads of New York, she couldnt help but to notice the unusual clouds hovering in the sky. Being a climate change specialist in an MNC, she herself was confused with the sudden formation of clouds as she hasnt seen anything special in the weather forecast. As she looked closer towards the sky she saw a flock of birds flying towards a certain direction. That evoked the scientist in her. She could foresee an unknown danger lurking over them. Deciding to look upon this matter she increased her pace to reach her office. Various thoughts plagued her mind. She recalled giving a positive information report about the climate to her MD the previous day. She couldnt help but to wonder what caused the sudden change in climate.

She was not long gone when she heard screams from backside. She looked back only to find the people running towards her. She stood there confused to see the commotion. Her eyes grew wide as she caught the source of the commotion. She could see huge bugs which had the size of a car running behind the people and eating them. Eating? She was mortified to see the situation. All she could think of at that moment was the various alien invasion movies she has seen so far in her life. She felt like she was reliving all those movies. Apart from bug she could see human shaped strange creatures that were clad in some sort of metallic outfit. That reminded her of the alien in the movie Predator.

She was brought back to reality as she saw an alien killing a human with some kind of weapon. Gathering herself she held onto her dear life and ran for cover. She witnessed many of the other people being victim to those creatures. She felt nauseated seeing blood and body parts everywhere. She could see the humanoid aliens had weapons which resembled guns. At an instance, she felt like she would be the next victim in the hands of those aliens as she risk fully rescued a one year old child. But God was her side as she could flew away before those creatures could capture her.

She ran aimlessly holding that kid close to her chest. She was panting due to the tiredness but resting was not in her agenda. Why to think about the impossible! May be luck was her side. She managed to tackle those monsters vision and got into a building. As she eyes the entire building, she could see many people like her who had escaped from those creatures clutches and made the building as their hide out. She joined them with tears still trickling through her eyes. She looked around as she settled in a corner. Everyone had their eyes wide in fear. They were even controlling their breaths afraid of being exposed. She could see many of them were bruised. Many were crying over the loss of their loved ones. But what she could see commonly was the fear. The fear of being hunted. The fear of death.

She tore her eyes away from others and looked at the child in her shoulder. It was a beautiful baby girl. She was looking at Zoya with her big doe-eyes. Zoya couldnt help but to wonder what could have happened to her parents. She didnt had the courage to think further as she painfully realized that there is only lesser chance for them to be alive. It watered her eyes. She held on to the kid tightly and started humming lullaby to her making her sleep. The tiredness betrayed her body as she herself fallen asleep with the kid in her arms.

How many hours had passed, nobody knew. Everyone in the room was sleeping due to the tiredness. It was looking as if God has given the humans the ability to sleep so as to forget about all the tiredness and problems facing in the everyday life.

A loud noise outside the building broke their sleep. Like others, Zoya also got up from her sleep. Painfully everyone realized that their death is not far away. That might be their last moment on earth. Everyone started panicking and crying. But Zoya being Zoya was not ready to give up. She would die but not before fighting for others. She was not ready to back down, not yet. She handed over the kid to a person who was standing nearby. Her gaze fell on an axe which was fixed in the wall. With trembling hands she took hold of the axe. Till now she hasnt hurt even a fly and here she is being ready to kill someone. She could help but to chuckle at this irony. She self-pacified herself telling that this was her destiny. She went and stood in front of everyone facing the door with axe in her hand. Her grip on axe tightened as her knuckles turned white.

The door was opened with a brightening light which momentarily blinded everyones eyes. They had closed their eyes tightly as if protecting themselves from that light. It was Zoya who came back to her senses first. She turned her head to look at the door. There were 4 figures standing in the door clad in a black outfit. They had some of sort of helmet in their head. In the belt there were some weapon which resembled sword and guns. They slowly walked into the room guided a by a figure who looked like a leader.

Instinctively Zoya took a step towards them showing her axe while the other humans took a step back. The fire in her eves showed that she wont be letting the intruders pass so easily.


Stop. Dont take even a single step. I will I will kill you. You make a step, and then you are gone. You can reach to my friends only over my dead body. Move back.


She knew it was futile to talk to them, she didnt even had an idea whether can understand whatever she is blabbering. She was relieved for a moment as the leader stopped his gang from moving further. But she was again back into panic mode as she saw the leader alone approaching her. Fear engulfed her body and unknowingly her grip on the axe tightened.


I told you. Dont come near to us. I will have to kill you them. Please spare us.


But the leader was not giving any heed to her warnings and pleas. He neared her. Without thinking anything, she swings the axe directing towards the leader. But to her bad luck, the leader had caught hold of axe. She used her full strength to get it out of his grip, but failed ultimately. The figure picked up the axe from her hand and threw it aside as if its a grass. Even though she was unarmed, Zoya was not ready to give up. She jumped upon him and started attacking him with her nails and teeth. After a minutes of her futile struggle, the leader scooped her in his shoulders and walked towards the other survivors. Everyone was scared to death seeing the scenes in front of them. It scared the hell out of them knowing that their death was an arms length away.



Hmph... I am done with the first chapter. i know its bakwas.🤢 but please bear with me😳

PS: Next update will be probably on monday as i am busy in my cousin's wedding😊

Edited by rosamale - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

I love your work and thus I am in


the beginning.. addicting

guess... many saying Zoya being dead... let me try another one

how about both from different planets 😆

watever it is

i am in



awe. thank you dear🤗and yes, you are correct😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Yipee... I guessed it correct

Being a science student actually helped

Light Years gave you away

I had not thought that death or heaven could be connected to it

😊

also i kind of know your style now...

your story Now or Never is one of my favs... I have read it twice... or maybe thrice

and i loved Moments in time too

and this one has me glued already

Zoya was amazing

well... supernatural and aliens concept is not new (when it comes to movies)

but reading it on I-F on a serial couple would be unique

to see romance between people from different planets... wow


Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

intrstng...unique concept..lukng forward to d stry..update soon..thnks


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: teddy25

Storyline padhke main darr gayi...😭 Jaldi bata phir kya hua...


Love your writing style so much...❤️


Darne ki koi zarrorat nahi hai meri bachi😆
I love your writing style more😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Linsie

Is ir going to be sad story... did any one of them passed away...


you never know😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cindrella3

So Zoya is dead???!!!😲 You are making me cry from the beginning itself😭 I don't like sad endings. But since I know that it is your story, I'll definitely read it. But don't make me cry too much.🥺 Please continue soon...😔


What you think, based on my previous track records, will i make Zoya die in my story?😉

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