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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
Kash Humari Bhi Parwah Kisi Ne Ki Hoti,
To Ye Duniya Humse Ruswa Na Hoti,
Agar Aata Aap Jaisa Muskurana Humein,
To Humse Bhi Kisi Ne Mohbbat Ki Hoti...

these were my fav lines

i just read part 5 and 6
too bad it ended so soon
but I totally loved it
waiting to get something new from you

Thank you soo much dear🤗 by the way, the shayri is not my own. as i said in the first update, its from a website. all i had done is read the shayaris and pick those ones which are apt for situation😊

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Oh my goodness. 😲

That was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. I loved it SO much. ❤️ I can't even describe it, but that was simply fantastic. 👏 👏 👏

I'm sad that it's over, but that was an awesome ending! 👍🏼 Fab job! 😳

Now I'll read your new SS! 😉

-Fari 😳 ❤️

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Radhika. | Rads.

@--Radhika--

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

love it..

it ends very beautifully..

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Good things end so soon. So this one also ended😭 I always falls in love with all your stories and this one was no different. The ending was beautiful.❤️But I was just too eager to know that what is the future of their love story since there are many hurdles in their way. Can you please give a short epilogue or another part. Please... And as usual I'm waiting for more works from you. Hope to hear from you soon...😊