FF: Making Her Mine || (Part 2, p.5)

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serendipity.

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Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

LOL. you guys are just too nice. Thankyou very much everyone, much appreciated, i shall update sooony! ;))

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princess101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I loved it please add me on ur PM list and update soon :D:D:D

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ManmarziyanTeri

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Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

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I like the way it looks! 👍🏼

I must admit I've only skimmed through it, but it looks good! I'll come back and leave a long ass comment! 😛

Edit:

Love it! You write really well! I like the way this story has been started off, it seems completely different.

So Dilshaad has passed away and Rashid is actually his step-father. I like it already. But more than anything I think I like this new character; Laiba. I like that she's so close to him and she's not scared to just tell him off and that for a change Asad actually listens to her 😆.

I'm really intrigued and really want to find out what the hell this guy has done now and why Zoya has left. Really looking forward to seeing this story shape out! Great work! 👍🏼

Pinks x

P.S. ohmygod! Karan Wahi is the extra brother! Woohoo I was keeping my fingers crossed that he'd be casted as Aayan when they were looking for a replacement bcoz I just love KSG and Karan Wahi's camaraderie! Seems like you've made that possible through this FF at least 😆.

Edited by DropofDew - 12 years ago