A guide to writing an erotica! (: MORE ADDED ON PAGE 15 - Page 3

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Did u know when i first started reading fifty shades i was so grossed out that i slammed the book shut and threw it away. but since i had already spent 350 bucks for it i read it slowly slowly skipping out a lot of the ahem ahem stuff!

This is a genre which very few can write perfectly

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

50shades was long back dear uske baad bhi i have read bared to you, reflected in you, entwined with you (its a trilogy) ooh and also there's this new book in the market called the accidental call girl! but you should try the Bared to you series! awesome it is, better than fifty

then i buy 3-4 M&B every month! ive got a huge rack of M&B in my library! i'm a sucker for erotica 😆

Originally posted by: MisZoobieDoobie

Its starstruck and not starstuck 🤣

Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes

Writing erotica is an art because one can easily cross the line between sensual and gross...so unless one is completely sure of themselves, this genre is best left alone..so thanks for making all those points Sadie...👏..even E.L.James hasn't got it right despite her series being a bestseller...😃

Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes

I had it as a soft copy...my gang of girls used to sit together and read in in the lab coz alone we found it so boring😆...I skipped the so called erotica part after a while coz it made me fall asleep😆...it was so repetitive...am glad I did not spend money on it

Originally posted by: MisZoobieDoobie

M&B was better before but i dont like the new ones much

I'll try these new ones

I just hope they are not like 50 shades cause in middle i had to skip some pages they were just too much to read !

But i still finished the series i was happy when they got married at last 😆

Originally posted by: delena90

EL James should be sued for misrepresenting an entire community and for her shoddy English. Terrible series. I find Joey. W. Hill to be much better despite her lack of best-sellers.

Part of the problem with teens/young-adults writing erotica is their lack if knowledge about it. There two kinds of horrible erotica -

1. The flowery, ber romantic version where the woman just lies there and let's be man do whatever while she whimpers:

2. Or violent ones bordering on rape.

*facepalm*

Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes

Oh man..don't even get me started on the language and grammar...a school student with an above average command over english could write better🥱..she portrayed BDSM like a joke..TBH...

What's worse is that they call it erotica...