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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: delena90

EL James should be sued for misrepresenting an entire community and for her shoddy English. Terrible series. I find Joey. W. Hill to be much better despite her lack of best-sellers.

Part of the problem with teens/young-adults writing erotica is their lack if knowledge about it. There two kinds of horrible erotica -

1. The flowery, ber romantic version where the woman just lies there and let's be man do whatever while she whimpers:

2. Or violent ones bordering on rape.

*facepalm*

BDSM doesn't really go down with me well! it's too violent while M&B is too hearts and flowery. A rich hot-shot billionaire PLAYBOY can only fall so madly in love with a poor girl in movies! they don't show reality! but then i need something for time pass plus in m&b the erotic part is not gross hence i read it!

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GredandForge

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes

Oh man..don't even get me started on the language and grammar...a school student with an above average command over english could write better🥱..she portrayed BDSM like a joke..TBH...

What's worse is that they call it erotica...

She didn't even clear her stand on it. Was she against BDSM or for it? You never know.

And seriously, for all the build up she gave for the scenes, nothing really happens.🥱

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: delena90

The author clearly hasn't researched her subject matter. An absolute idiot. I don't think I got past book 1...hell i didn't even read book 1 properly. Trashy novel and I am being polite!

the worst was the tense she used! she walks, she talks, she laughs, she cries! UGHHH 🤢

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GredandForge

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: --starstruck--
BDSM doesn't really go down with me well! it's too violent while M&B is too hearts and flowery. A rich hot-shot billionaire PLAYBOY can only fall so madly in love with a poor girl in movies! they don't show reality! but then i need something for time pass plus in m&b the erotic part is not gross hence i read it!

And this becomes the inspiration for all aspiring writers.

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: rivya
Good topic...As a rule I dont read erotica on IF. Unless its a author whose other FF/SS I have read and liked their style of writing. But these are very good pointers. Good job!!!👏

Haven't read M&B in a very very long time, but am hoping to find some good books on Amazon to download to my Kindle. So suggestions are welcome.

Also, if you are into Historical Romance (M&B but with a period setting) I have some suggestions for good writers who do regency. These would usually have 1-2 scenes max, which sometimes I skip depending on my mood.
Rivs

i am not so much into historical romance!

the new M&Bs are not that good 🤢