A guide to writing an erotica! (: MORE ADDED ON PAGE 15 - Page 15

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Aaya re aaya Bodyguard 😆

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Hello shello people some of you may know that I always dedicate a thread once in every two-three months for all the amazing writers in the forum but this time my mood has been seriously spoiled after reading three crappy eroticas back to back. eroticas that completely grossed me out. I dont wanna pick up fights so I am not going to reveal which were those stories I am talking about. Apart from those three there are also many writers who have the potential to write a cold shower worthy erotica but need to put up a little more effort. and i have to admit, there are some exceptionally darn good writers (again not gonna take names) they are just brilliant

Hence I as a reader will point out a few things that a writer should keep in mind while writing a mature story. Now before everyone starts throwing jootas or chappals at me let me clarify I am not demeaning anyone and I am definitely not trying to show off, I myself am not an exceptional writer there are far better people hence these guidelines are from me but as a READER and not as a WRITER! I request only people who can take up criticisms to scroll down. I believe it should be in a writers DNA to take up both likes and dislikes, flowers and tomatoes, kisses and stones! A writer should not sulk about criticisms, he/she should hold his head high and read the comments with a smile - That is according to me the first step to being a WRITER in true sense. (although I have to be honest its easier said than done)

So here goes -

Number one - A s**tty Zoya and desperate Asad is a huge turn off. Make them s**tty and desperate and Im well on my way to hit the back button. You can try to make Zoya a little naughty by making her seductive but innocently seductive. Dont make it too obvious. Give her a little subtle moves like accidently slipping off the saree pallu or brushing past Asad, against his hard chest or back trying to feel him up a bit. Remember everything should be as innocent as possible (ofcourse exceptions can be taken in stories where Zoya is bold and experienced but if u are following the QH track or the QH wali Zoya then keep these things in mind)

You can show desperation in Asad in a way that he pulls Zoya flush against him and moves his hip, grinds into her, rubbing his erection on her thus subtly letting her know how desperately he wants her. Or maybe you can put in dialogues like I want you Zoya blah, blah u get the gist. A desperate Asad who practically forces himself on her makes him a rapist not a lover.

Number two and very important - If you are trying to show Zoya as a virgin then please its a request dont use words like blood and all. Its gross man, who talks about blood and stuff in this way?🤢 Everyone has studied biology here everyone knows a woman bleeds when its her first time just dont put in the story. If you really wanna tell your readers she was a virgin then you can use phrases like - He thrust himself deeper into her, breaking her barrier. Zoya felt a sharp sting and screamed both in pain and pleasure. Asad stilled for a moment to let her body adjust him. As soon as pain gave way to pleasure she bucked her hips asking him to move.

See, this way the readers will know it was their first time and they wont be grossed at reading words like blood.

Number three - Sex should be mutual. Please dont make one of them forcing the other into this act either by force or by emotional blackmail. That shows desperation. Of course if they are role-playing then it doesnt imply on this situation. Role-playing totally changes everything.

Number four - do not make either one of them too pliant and submissive. Being innocent is a different thing while being submissive is different. Again an exception is when you are writing something very BDSM (bondage dominance sadism masochism) then submission becomes the crux part of the whole theory.

Number five - DIRTY TALK Im all for dirty talk just it shouldnt be too dirty. It actually kinda increases the passion and acts as a good foreplay. Just dont overdo it, make it simple yet sexy so how about innocently sexy? 😆

Thats all I can remember at the moment but I may add things up whenever I come across them! I hope it helps although I am expecting zero likes and comments and hundreds of reports! People who cant take up some constructive criticism can feel free to ignore it or hit the report button and if its against the IF rules then the mods can feel free to close the topic!

I repeat I am not trying to be offensive here but if anyone felt so then I am really sorry!

Cheers and peace!

Love,

Sadie! 😊

hey saddie thanks for guidence.😊😊 i will use it in my writings

Originally posted by: RiDz_rox

wah wah Ms Agarwal... Asad style 🤣

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan

Love the guide! I don't have the guts to do this kinda stuff

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

AAA gaya ...

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

ooh you are going to write an erotica? i love all ur stories so i'm sure this one will be good as well! best of luck 😃

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Number six - Please stop referring to asad's "ahem" as tools 🤢 or something like he filled his seeds in her! it gives it a very gardening type feeling. i'm sure he is not planting vegetables in her, is he? 😆

Number seven - LINGERIE! first of all this is the correct spelling, i doubt oxford dictionary has changed it 😆

Sexy lingerie is something that can spice up the whole act but again you have to be very careful as to not make it vulgar! Plus again if you are going with the QH track and plan to write asya's suhaagraat, then please i highly doubt Asad will buy a lingerie for her!

If your story is an A/U or a track in which AsYa have been married for many months or years then go ahead with it, it might make the erotic part better! 😉

PS - this post have been on my mind so much that today when my teacher was teaching us some neurotic disabilities and i didn't understand some word so by mistake i asked her "Ma'am what are the EROTIC disabilities" 🤣 I'm glad my voice was low and she couldn't hear it but my friend did and now she is gonna tease me for the rest of my life 😆

PPS - I'm gonna add more if i think of something else 😃

PPPS - thanks for the response! i honestly felt that this post would be reported and closed by now 😆

~ Sadie! 😃

Originally posted by: Meself

Ah like finally after ages I'm able to post a reply!! My classes are getting better of me which simply means no time to be online. Firstly sorry for not being able to comment ASAP...also you might find a lot of typing errors as I am online through my phone which I hardly know how to use...:p

Comming to eroticas...well I really like them...as long as a certain line is drawn and maintained. I've come across a lot many writers who've played up the cotent and made it a happy read but then there are also some who gave me a chill. on my back...for it was absolutely GROSS! I've always liked your eroticas here on this forum for the things are heated up there is still a deep run of sensuality and of course sanity. Now why can't people take lessons from that? I remember I had read a certain OS here that made wanna puke my guts out! There is a thin lne between being vulgar and being sensual...and that is the tricky part...once you get the hook of it, its really easy to sail your boat...I am damn sure after this thread of yours a new improved erotica genre is gonna open up. Best I am hoping for s Master Yoda would say:))

P.S. I had forgot to mention delena lover(hope I've got the name right)! You and her are both spot on while writing eroticas. I so wish people read your works and stop freaking us out!!!!!