A guide to writing an erotica! (: MORE ADDED ON PAGE 15 - Page 12

Originally posted by: vaishnavi31

good points yu got there! i myself was gunna write an erotica so thanks for the tips😊 but i get what youre saying. some of the eroticas here are just..😕... 🤢 adn thank god i missed that .. um .. blooddy one😆😆😆

Originally posted by: mochhug

Very needed post Sadie. I think I did read that one that you're talking about. But I'm not sure. Anyway, I agree with your pointers. I myself wasn't going to do erotica because I'm not sure how to stay within the lines. And plus I'm not conformable writing such scenarios. However I can appreciate the good ones. I won't name them, but I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought some of them are a little over the top.

And I agree, talking about blood is ridiculously gross. Submission and rape, unacceptable (submission in BDSM is ok, I can appreciate that when it's well written). And I also hate hate hate the guy being overly rough with the girl. Even if it's supposed to be part of the story (even in BDSM. That just borders on rape for me.

But I hope we'll see better eroticas from now on, as well as more from those who are good at it.

And 50 shades. I couldn't even make through the first 130 pages. I haven't touched them since. It's too much and not enticing at all. Repetitive, and just plain disappointing. Ugh.

Originally posted by: DropofDew

Bravo for this post! 👏

Tbh I'm not personally a fan of errotica, if the writer has written about sex more than necessary then I tend to hit the back button and run a mile. I'm pretty sure that to this day I still frown and growl and send highly disapproving looks to anyone that is seen in public reading 50 Shades. But to each their own and I'm sure that I do that more out of the fact that E.L James actually can't write.

Anywaysss... Putting all of that aside, I really cannot stand stories where the writer thinks it is okay for them to portray Asad to be forcing himself on Zoya. Why do you not understand that this is rape and in no way what so ever can it be glorified? It's rape! A heinous act!

Anyway that's my two cents, and also on a serious note. Graphical descriptions in mature content scenes is actually not permitted on IF, if the page is reported then I think they tell you to remove the content. I only have one FF with mature scenes in it and it's only posted on my blog. So tread carefully?

Originally posted by: Sand_Princess

I have a very different outlook to erotica's. If it's a story and you want to write something which is erotic in nature... It doesn't have to end with sex, you should know where to draw the line with the images. I for one am all thumbs up with graphic images, but many readers aren't. They are more closed off. As far as graphic images go one has to be very careful to not make it vulgar! writers have to walk on a very fine line so they've got to be more careful.

Readers have preferences which vary from reading about a submissive to a bold Zoya... When in the timeline of a story they don't like to read two people acting nothing like themselves and jumping into bed together. writers can show them as bold if they are experienced but if they are following the current QH track with asya's marriage and then their SR then i guess they cant really show them as bold because honestly the Asad and zoya of QH are kinda innocent in that matter

Mature scenes have their own time dimension and needs. They can't just pop out of anywhere.

And there was a part about desperation, I think? Desperation is a good thing... it shows much much the characters want each other, but one has to draw a line. If a character is desperate enough to seduce the other at all costs... well and fine, but forcing themselves on someone is a different story. Now I've not read these erotica's which compelled you to make this post, but it was worth reading. i hate desperation in a way that asad is so desperate that he practically raped zoya?

And thanks for mentioning the BDSM part... I think I had a nervous breakdown when you started with the submission. 😛 i knew u wud hence the specification 😆

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

thanks sweetie! i honestly thought everyone might take offense and rape the report button (ah, theres that word again 🤣 )

its good to know people have not started associating me as mean lady 😆

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

PS - this post have been on my mind so much that today when my teacher was teaching us some neurotic disabilities and i didn't understand some word so by mistake i asked her "Ma'am what are the EROTIC disabilities" 🤣 I'm glad my voice was low and she couldn't hear it but my friend did and now she is gonna tease me for the rest of my life 😆

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

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no body wont evn... 😳 coz u r 100% correct...😳

n evn if some1 dared to I wont let them do tht... 😆

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

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btw nice points again!!