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Sadie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: chicksoup
Wow!👏👏👏

Breathtakingly beautiful..I loved that poem...and initially I was going to comment on the concept.

I HATE SUICIDE TRACKS...even failed attempts...there can be N no: of justifications to it...but I really hate it. More than infidelity...😆

Until I came across that poem, and realised that everything could be forgiven for that wisdom...😳

That even though suicidal personalities should not be sympathised with ..your OS had a great message..against the same.😊

THANK YOU.🤗

Same here i too hate suicides! i am totally against the idea of taking the easy way out! that just shows how weak and vulnerable and cowardly you are! And it also shows one's spinelessness!

We were studying about Dorothy Parker in our lit class and i was surprised to know the number of times she attempted suicide, thats a different thing she was a psychotic woman but that woman has written several of poems on suicide and even stories! Suicide can never be the ANSWER to the problem it can only be the last resort!

thanks for the comment 😳

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Sadie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: sohu_ksgian
This was so so beautiful😳
Sadiee Im terry😭😆
It was reallly AMAZING❤️

Happy birthday Tanya..God bless🤗

thank wala youuu sohu 😃

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Sadie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
hey tis is superb...
luv it...
amazing...
luv the way asad made zoya understanding the true meaning of life...
beautifully written...
thx fr the pm...

thanks 😊

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Sadie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Enchantress
That was just so beautiful. I am in love with the garden. The way you made me imagine it through your words.. I so feel to have such a garden all to myself. Its a very sweet, emotional and beautiful One shot I'l remember for my lifetime..Loved it.

i'm in love with the garden too! i have always felt at peace with myself in a garden! glad you liked it! 😊

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Sadie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
This was a very very beautiful piece of work...I love how you describe each and everything in so much detail and that just makes the setting so beautiful...its like I could see and experience everything...and the way you describe emotion is truly remarkable...and the ending was so sweet...they finally got their happily ever after 😃

thanks! glad you liked it! I'm glad i was able to write well enough for you to visualize it happening n front of your eyes! it's a huge compliment for any writer! 😳

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Rupali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

beautifully written; I just loved it! I could imagine every scene in my mind because of how well u describe!

oh and happy birthday Tanya! 😊

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Sadie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan
this was blissful and BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!
it was so emotional i was in tears struggling to read forward!!
keep up the fantastic work!
thanks for the pm.

aww don't cry!

thank you so much for the comment

i'm glad you liked it 😃

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GrilledCheese

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

wonderful os...very beautiful...loved reading it!

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

That was SO beautiful and emotional! ❤️

I loved it!

Ugh, can't find words! 😆

I especially loved the garden and the poem! 😳

Very, very, very amazing! 👏 👏

Awesome job! 👍🏼

-Fari 😳 ❤️

Edited by ButterflyKisses - 11 years ago

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Sadie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever
beautifully written; I just loved it! I could imagine every scene in my mind because of how well u describe!

oh and happy birthday Tanya! 😊

thanks glad you liked it 😃