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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

yaar..i am actualy smiling with tearful eyes..

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

It was beautiful...It has an awesome 'feel good ' thing about it.loved it.

happy birthday Taniya. :)

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manognasai

@manognasai

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Very well written Sadie...I loved it😃
Happy Birthday to Tanya🤗
Always keep smiling...live happily.
God bless u Tanya😃

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

This was a very very beautiful piece of work...I love how you describe each and everything in so much detail and that just makes the setting so beautiful...its like I could see and experience everything...and the way you describe emotion is truly remarkable...and the ending was so sweet...they finally got their happily ever after 😃

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

this was blissful and BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!

it was so emotional i was in tears struggling to read forward!!

keep up the fantastic work!

thanks for the pm.

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

hey tis is superb...

luv it...

amazing...

luv the way asad made zoya understanding the true meaning of life...

beautifully written...

thx fr the pm...

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Wow!👏👏👏

Breathtakingly beautiful..I loved that poem...and initially I was going to comment on the concept.

I HATE SUICIDE TRACKS...even failed attempts...there can be N no: of justifications to it...but I really hate it. More than infidelity...😆

Until I came across that poem, and realised that everything could be forgiven for that wisdom...😳

That even though suicidal personalities should not be sympathised with ..your OS had a great message..against the same.😊

THANK YOU.🤗

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MissReadingFaye

@MissReadingFaye

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

That was beautiful and Happy Birthday :) xxx

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

LOVED IT!!

The garden was described so beautifully, and I had a hunch Asad was the owner 😆

The way you described her pain, her hesitation, her train of thought was so good. (Still not outshining your Mangalpur 😛, but really good!)

Loved how you kept it simple. So excessive physical contact, just the right amount. Just the right touches for them, in order to put across the point of the story. Loved it hun. Really well written. 😳

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago