'the other part of me' an asya fiction part 14 11/11 updated - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you for the beautiful update...




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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Beautiful update with moments of ASYA and coffee in the garden.😊
Oh no u brought that tanveer. Hope she won't trouble ASYA much.🤢
Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
asad promised to be her..along with ammi and najma..
he made coffee for her..
oh Tanveers entry..
najma not happy...
awesome update. .
thanxs for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hiii😊ur story is sooo aweesommmeee😊and the beginning..o my God!I loved how Asad and Zoya were instantly connected😊please PM me when u update next😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tsering2013

Beautiful update with moments of ASYA and coffee in the garden.😊

Oh no u brought that tanveer. Hope she won't trouble ASYA much.🤢
Waiting for next update.


she'll trouble for good and zoya was quite till now and so now on everytym asad talks bad about zoya she is gonna give them back
asad will b shocked seeing the wild side of zoya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Linsie

thank you for the beautiful update...




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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 7:-SHE IS MY AMMII TOOO

Zoya got irritated how asad and dilshad were talking to tanveer and ignored completely so she got up from dining table and went. Dilshad , asad and najma noticed her going back to her room but ignored her, this irritated zoya more and closed her door so hard that made a BANG!! Sound. Everyone were shocked at her reaction but ignored as both dilshad and asad were busy with tanveer

MIDNIGHT
zoya heard her door knocking "knock!! Knock!!" . zoya "who came at this time?, may be Mr khan" then thinking about asad zoya had a huge smile in her face and she got down from her bed and went towards door "ok!! I should be angry at him now and try to keep angry face zoya" she said to herself and Opened door and she was sad because it was not Mr khan but she was happy too because it was najma.

"come in najma" said zoya and gave her a smile, "did I disturb you?" asked najma and zoya replied "no tamatar I was not sleeping infact I was bored"

Then najma came inside, zoya closed the door and both of them sat on the bed, "what happened to you? Why did you closed the door so loudly?"asked najma , zoya who was surprised at najma because everyone were busy with tanveer and she thought no one noticed at it. "nothing" replied zoya
after few minutes of silence "does your bhaijaan likes tanveer?" najma mouth was wide open "noo!!" she shouted then najma continued "no way , yak!!" she made disgusted face

"why did you ask me that?" najma asked zoya with confused looks "nothing!! Its just the way your bhai was with her, you know hugging and listening to her so.."najma gave a faint smile and said "bhaijaan bachapan ka dost hain" with disgusting look she said "it's the way how she acts, I hate her, you know zoya!! In our childhood whenever she does any mistake she used to blame me and my ammii and bhaijaan used to scold me. i some times feel she is just too fake" zoya was so happy that some one in that house hates her and then they were talking for hours together. Najma felt sleepy and she went back to her room

Then zoya switched off her lights "najma has a reason to hate tanveer but why should I hate her?"thought zoya then she rembebred how asad and dilshad forgot about her when tanveer came home and this made her angry

NEXT MORNING:-

Asad was seated in his chair and dilshad was sitting on the right of asad and najma on left. tanveer and zoya brought dishes from kitchen and placed it on the dining table and tanveer turned towards asad "jammy!! Today me and zoya prepared dishes , bread and jam is especially for you jammy, I know you like that" zoya stared and gave a disgusting glare at tanveer and asad . zoya went and sat next to najma, tanveer next to dilshad .

"so what do you do tanveer?" asked zoya and then tanveer replied "I ve boutique and design my own clothes" and after tanveer took few bite "what do you do zoya?" when zoya was about to answer asad replied "I don't think Ms farooqui is soo educated I think she is done few basic computer course and not much" irritating zoya and zoya replied "mujhey pata hey!! That you don't like me and how come you know everything about me?" asad turned his head and said "aap jaise ladki can only do soo much Ms farooqui" but tanveer interrupted and asked "you tell me zoya, what do you do?" but zoya was irritated with asad judgemental look so said "you jammy said what I do" but najma try to answer but zoya stopped her "no najma don't tell them about my profession let them think whatever they want" asad saw zoya holding najma hands and saked "what happened tamatar why is Ms farooqui is stopping you?" but najma replied "nothing bhaijaan" and asad started praising her mehandi talent and najma couldn't control how her brother praising her best friend so she decide prasing zoya "bhaijaan zoya can speak hindi,english french and other language" zoya turned towards najma and said "german" najma with huge smile "ha german and zoya won many awards in dancing to bhaijann I have seen photos in FB" zoya turned towards asad and said sarcastically "your bhaijaan doesnot believe he thinks girls like us are incapable of such things" and was staring at asad

Everyone continued having their breakfast "jammy!! Pls try this"giving him plate full of bread and jam. Najma came to zoya ears and whispered "inka nautanki shuru hogayi" zoya couldn't control laughter so both zoya and najma laughed out loud

Everyone turned towards zoya and najma "what happened?" asked asad and zoya turned towards asad "Mr khan its personal and why don't you have bread and jam which your tanveer prepared" zoya said sarcastically to asad and asad with angry look "Ms farooqui me and my sister don't keep any secrets" said asad and turned towards najma and najma was tensed and said "bhaijaan!! Wo..." Najma was searching for words and asad was waiting for answer "love..love marriage Mr khan" zoya told and she knew that if Mr khan gets to know that they are making fun of his tanveer then he might become akudu again . Everyone looked at zoya and najma replied "ha!!ha bhaijaan we were talking about love marriage or arrange marriage?" dilshad with surprised look "so what did you decide najma?" najma blushed and said "whatever you and bhaijaan decide" asad gave huge smile at this and zoya turned towards tanveer and asked "what about you tanveer?" and tanveer who was busy in her own thoughts said "paisa wala!!" then she remembered what she said and continued saying "and good guy " zoya with shocked expression "bus? Only maney and good guy?" asked tanveer and asad lifted his head and asked "what else you need Ms farooqui? To get married to a guy other than money and good at heart?" zoya turned towards asad "Mr khan money does not matter to me at all and yes he should be good at heart other than that love is important' Mr khan and I need a person who share my sorrow and happiness and at the same time that person should share his happiness and sorrow with me and Mr khan If he truly loves me I'm ready to take any kind of risk no matter he is vry poor and can afford food once daily but if he loves me I'm happy with that" said zoya proudly and asad saw different zoya someone who is simple and was happy ...

"phoophi" shouted zoya who was busy eating ran towards dilshad . everyone were shocked seeing this and saw dilshad her lips had swollen her face was red, tears were rolling down and dilshad holding her throat and was struggling to breath , this made asad and najma shocked "Mr khan do you have adrenaline injection?" asked worried zoya but asad was motionless seeing his ammii fighting to survive but she shouted "Mr khan" then he saw zoya and said "yes" and ran to dilshad room came back and injected adrenaline but no change "phoophi needs more dosage" said zoya asad said "no more adrenalin" said asad who was in tears . "lets take her to hospital" said zoya and everyone left

IN HOSPITAL:-

"today doctors are on strike all over bhopal" said emergency ward nurse and asad shouted "how can they leave emergency ward without doctors?" nurse was scared and replied "sorry" and asad said najma "I'll go and get my friend who is a doctor" najma who was crying and said "Dr punith?" "ha" said asad and ran towards his car

Zoya saw phoopi who was getting worst by every second and nurse saw dilshad and said "she is cyanosed (bluish colour of the body due to lack of oxygen) and zoya "no time, we have to do tracheostomy(put a tube in wind pipe so that person can get oxygen to body) because she is not responding to adrenalin" said to nurse

Zoya explained nurse and nurse brought a set of surgical instrument which were sterilized and while wearing sterile gloves she gave incision in the neck after few minutes she put a tube in her throat and connected to oxygen and instructed nurse to start with Iv fluid, steroids and antihistaminics

After sometime asad came running with a guy who was in his early 30 then najma showed him the ward were dilshad was resting.he nodded everyone to stay outside while he'll check dilshad

Asad outside the ward remembered that happened to his ammii and went near zoya and slapped her in front of najma and tanveer "because of you my ammii is in hospital, its you who cooked food" asad was staring at zoya and najma was shocked "bhaijaan..."was about to say but he showed his hand to najma telling her to keep quite , tanveer witnessed this and gave a smirk at zoya which was unnoticed by all. Mr khan mein nahi..."zoya went to tell asad but asad said "pls!! khuda ke liye pls get out from here and never show me your face" and zoya ran from their crying

Next chapter covers

(asad hug zoya

zoya almost kissing asad

bitch is getting screwed )

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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting. so zoya is a doctor. want to read more. plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Awesome please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
OMG..Asad is just so arrogant😡anyway,superb update😃please continue soon n PM me!

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