'the other part of me' an asya fiction part 14 11/11 updated

THE OTHER PART OF ME

This is a story about two different people fall in love and how destiny play a game with these love birds
character sketch:-

ASAD AHMED KHAN:-

He is 27 year old male and owner of DILSHAD CONSTRUCTION.He doesnot believe in love because his dad left his mother for someother women,he saw his mom struggle when his father left him and took a oath that he will never make his mom suffer again and who knows it was oath he took against happiness

ZOYA FAROOQUI:-

23 year old female, she is very independent and daughter of NAWAB family in hyderabad,her father is one of the richest person but she is very down to earth and she grew up in london(I selected london because I knw that place better )with her sister ZEENAT after her mom died.She believes in love and hides her pain and she always try to help others.she is doctor and she also did 1year fellowship in computer science so that she can earn her pocket money

AYAN AHMED KHAN:-

Half brother of asad and loves his brother a lot and has very good sense of humor

DILSHAD :-

Mother of asad and najma,very loving and caring.loves her children a lot

NAJMA:-

Sister of asad and she loves her brother and mother a lot,she is symbol of innocence

ZEENAT:-

ZEENAT is elder sister of zoya,zeenat is zoya ammi elder sister daughter,she got married to anwar and lives in london, she took care of zoya as her own daughter

ANWAR

Zeenat husband and zoya jiju and loves zoya like his daughter

AKBAR ALI KHAN:-

Father of zoya and lover her but never showed and he slowly drifted away from his daughter once his wife died

ZARINA FAROOQUI:-

Zoya mother and loves her daughter a lot and an IAS officer.she met zoya father on some legal matters fell in love with him and married,she was transferred to bhopal and akbar(zoya father) was using his influence to get her to the hyderabad meantime she died of fire accident when she was in bhopal

Other character

NIKHAT,NOOZAT:- both her half sister of asad
RASHID:- father of asad
SHiREEN:- second wife of rashid

SIDDIQUE:-brother of shireen

RAZIA:-wife of siddique
HUMAIRA:- daughter of siddique and razia

CHAPTER 1:-BACKDOOR PILOT

"Ammi!! Lets go,u promised me to show bhopal today in bus" told 10 year old zoya playing with her barbie doll in her mother office."ha zoya v'll go and please don tell your dad that I'm taking you In bus"

Zoya noticed someone standing near door and told "ammi!!" . "kya hua" asked her mother
"someone is standing at the door" told zoya. Zarina looked at the door and was furious now

"please do come in!!" told zarina,. Middle aged man with long beard wearing fully framed glasses came inside and gave smirk "saalam walikum zarina ji" zarina showed him a chair which was in front of her tabel "what a pleasant surprise!! I never expected you at my office siddique saab"; "what to do our work brought us here" said siddique. Zarina closed her file and said "well, from tomorrow you wont be having much of work,as u'll be in jail" . siddique gave a evil smile "I ve come here to talk about it,drop the case and I'll give you how much ever money you want" . zarina started laughing " it was never about money and you should know that my husband is very rich but its about being righteous and doing our duty " and zarina stood up and told "you will suffer for your sins, allah!! Will never let you go, and I'm going back to hyderabad before that I'll do right thing by sending you to jail" "you can leave now" told zarina showing him the way out.. "soooch loo" told siddique and turned back "pyari bachi, aapki??" zarina looked at her and told " ha" , siddique went near door and told

"aaj mausam kharab hai and I think you should be carefull when your going out for sightseeing bhopal" told siddique and left..

After few hours
"ammi!! This is so exiting,bus is so amazing why dad never allows me to go in bus and always insist me to go in car" told zoya to her mother.zarina was mesmarised by her chirpyness and excitement."
zarina was busy playing with her daughter and forgot where bus was going

"ammi!! Why abbu did not come here with us?? I'm angry at him and you know what I told my friends that I'll be spending time with my parents but abbu did not come here " started crying zoya
zarina "zoya!! Don't cry. We will never get everything we want in our life, we have to loose few to get few and if your abbu was here he never allowed us to go in bus "
zarina took her daughter in her lap and rubbed her cheeks which had stains because of crying "zoya!!remember we will always have sad and joy in our life and only way we can fight sadness is by happiness that is around you". "see your sad today because your dad is not here but happiness around you is that you got to enjoy bus ride so think about it enjoy"

Suddenly zarina saw that bus was in some deserted road "driver, where are we?" asked zarina she then noticed that people who are in bus started moving towards her.she was scared she told zoya to hide under the seat which was in front of her and zarina ran towards the other end of bus
"pakkodo ise" told a fat dark bald man, "leave the kid, we will think about her later"medium built man told

Around 5 men surrounded zarine and one of them slapped her "how dare you go against siddique saab?"seeing this zoya ran towards her mother "ammi!!" . zarine got scared and told her "don't come here beta". Fat bald man told "pakkodo use" and one of the guy who was dark round face and was covered with scar mark from nose till the left ear lobe caught zoya but zoya caught his shirt pocket and bit him on his hand " aaaha!!" shouted that scarred man and threw her to relieve from pain and zoya head hit one of the rod which was there to support for people who are standing in bus, she fell unconscious, in mean time they tortured zarina and zoya who gained conscious saw same scarred guy stabbing her mother with what seems table knife straight into her chest as soon as she opened it was bleeding and zoya was trying to move but was still dizzy. One of the guy went out and bought kerosene cans threw all over the place and on zarina and lit the fire.
Once fire started all of them left, zoya dragged to wards zarina but couldn't go near her because of the fire and she saw how slowly fire spread on to her mom who was sleeping as if her life was drained out of stab injury. "amii!! Amii!!ammmiii!! started crying zoya

There was a middle aged women with her son was walking by the desserted road.He saw how his mother was sweating and but still was trying to smile after heavy work then he told "ammi!! After I grow up I'll make sure that you wont suffer like this and I'll make sure that you will always travell in car and I'll buy a very big bunglow for you". She was overwelmed by her son words told to him that "asad beta !! I'll be happy when you and najma are happy".

After walking for some distance dilshad saw a bus burning and ran towards it "asad challo"
and went near bus saw a small girl crying "ammi!!". "ya allah!! Who left this girl alone in burning bus". Dilshad climbed two steps near the door and was searching the whole bus but unfortunately zarina and entire end off the bus was burning so dilshad couldn't find anyone so she showed her hand to zoya and told "aao beta" but zoya was scared to move. "come to me beta!! I'll take to your parents" zoya was to scared and then asad got into bus to see what was happening and he saw his mom waiting for the small girl to come near her but was scarred so he showed taviz which was given to him by maulwi in badi masjid, "allah reham kare" was written on the taviz..zoya after seeing taviz she moved towards them once she came near dilshad,dilshad pulled her towards them and all three of them got down from bus and suddenly saw bus burning with huge flames.

"allah!!lak lak shukar" dilshad turned towards zoya but zoya was holding asad hand and other hand she had some photo which was unnoticed. "beta! Thumara naam kya hai?kaha se beti?" but zoya was too scared to answer and she was crying "ammi!!" ..then dilshad notcied very weird gold chain which had pendent with diamond symbol "z"and understood that she was from rich family so decided to take her to police station

Dilshad took her to police station and told the entire story and SI remembered seeing zoya in administrate office and called office and informed to RAVEENA who was zarina PA so they told her that they'll take care of her and dilshad did legal formalities and was about to go but zoya was not ready to let go of asad hand so asad decided to give taviz to her "keep it!! Allah will save you" and he left but zoya started to cry and went and hugged asad after which dilshad decided to stay till her parents come back when zoya broke from hug but her gold chain was stuck to asad shirt so asad took out gold chain and tried to remove the knot between his shirt and chain in mean time dilshad was talking to constable about taking her to her home but then zarina PA came to police station

"My name is RAVEENA I'm zarina PA"told to subinspector and then they showed zoya and told her whole story RAVEENA recognised zoya and told to SI about her and told her she don't know anything abot zarina and she is trying to contact her but unable to do so

Zoya saw raveena and recognised her and ran towards her and hugged her and forgot about gold chain which was in asad hand. "acha is ladki ka ammi ayya, hum ab chelana chahiye najma is all alone in home " she left with asad.

After 1 week

Police investigated zarina death and reported as "death occurred due to burns which caused by fault in the bus".
even though zoya tried to tell what happened her abu akbar was not ready listen to it as he was devastated with her death. Akbar took his daughter to her palace in hyderabad
zoya had photo pulled from the scarred face man shirt pocket in the bus and taviz which she got from asad saved it with her..

After 1 week
its been two week since her mom death and zoya never slept and was crying all the time so akbar decided to send her to london to zeenat.

chapter 2: is down

chapter 3:- page 3

chapter 4:- page 4

chapter 5:- page 5

chapter 6:- page 6

chapter 7:- page 8

chapter 8:- page 12

chapter 9:-page 17

chapter 10:-page 18

chapter 11:-page 21

chapter 12:-page 22

chapter 13:0page 24

chapter 14:-page 26

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CHAPTER 2:-TIME TO FACE IT

AFTER 13 YEARS

"such a beautiful climate" she thought while travelling in bus.. "wow!!i'm in love with this amazing place ammi" zoya looked at women sitting next to her and then that women put her hands on the head and rubbing it softly "haan beta". Zoya looked out of window suddenly she started smelling as if some thing is burning and she looked everywhere her ammi was missing now then she started searching but and she could feel intesity of heat increasing her throat dried up and she felt like her lungs were ripped of fire and she felt burning sensation in her right elbow join and she turned back and saw lady is on fire and tried to gain strength and shouted "ammii", "it was a dream" she thought breathing heavily and got down from bed and was searching for water and went downstairs opened fridge and drank water and sat on the dinning table which was near the fridge " its been 13 years and I'm getting this dream its time that I face it and I 'm goin to india and thanks to god that anwar jiju some how talked to aapi and she accepted it but I've to talk to abbu about coming back to india

Next morning, "ya allah!! Is ladki phir is chair mein soo rahi hey", "zoya!! Zoya utto"

"Aapi I'm sleepy, pls let me sleep" told zoya struggling in chair and anwar came down seeing zoya their "wake up sleepy head". "jiju I'm sleepy pls" but then anwar told "your abbu will be free now so that you can ask him about goin back to india, if u don't want then fine" zoya got up in a brink of a second and told "aapi!! Apka gallati I told you to wake me up but you did not" and was searching for phone zeenat "ya allah!! Meri galati, don't try to blame me"
zoya then said "haha allah sunlega lekin aap meri baat nahi sun rahi hey, mujhe pata tha that you'll do same thing again and jiju what about you ?? even you din wake me up..aapi please I need pizza fr my breakfast,don prepare any toast for me and you jiju did u fill fridge with diet coke ,,jiju what about your project?" zeenat sat on the dinning table "ooph!! Kitna bat karthi hey ladki", anwar "arrey zoya!! Call your abbu and how much do you talk" zoya saw her jiju "mujhe pata hai…." Anwar broke her and told " call!!"

Zoya called her abbu "pls,pls,pls,pls pick up the phone" . "hello!!zoya beta" akbar in his harsh voice. "how are you?abbu"ashed zoya. "I'm fine and you?" asked akbar." I'm fine, acctually I called to ask something…" " and what?" asked akbar " I want to come back to india and do my post graduation" "oh!! Sure, I'll see all the best colleges in india for you post graduation and which one you want is it medicine or surgical branch?" akbar was very happy that his daughter coming back but did not show in his voice … "abbu I want to go to bhopal and I'll like to prepare for my PG" said scarred zoya.. "but zoya that place…"but zoya immediately told him that "abbu!! It reminds me of my ammi and I want to spend there as I ve my last memories with my ammi, pls,pls abbu" akbar thought for a minute and was happy that his daughter took first step in building father-daughter relation which was lost after zarina death so accepted immediately "beta ok!! I'll tell my PA to search home for you in bhopal so that you can stay" zoya was happy and shocked "abbu nahi!! Don't buy house for me pls,and I don't like it and infact jiju knows family their I'll stay with them and I don't have to live alone so pls" akbar was worried but since she mentioned she is going to stay with family he accepted "teek hai beta". Zoya was happy

After zoya ammi death she went to london and never visited india and her abbu was busy in work trying to forget his wife with time they drifted but occasionally calls and talk since her abbu accepted zoya was happy and scared at same time and she was also very independent she did her undergraduation in merit and she also did part time job for her pocket money she was topper in her university and intrested of becoming pediatrician sice its been 2days her abbu gave permission to go to india . she did her shopping packed her bags and was thankfull to her jiju since he knew a women named dilshad from bhopal and requested her and now zoya can stay and she knew this was one of the main reason her abbu accepted

In the airport, she hugged everyone and departed
"here I come india" she said

India

Dilshad told her son that a girl is going to stay with them but he was unhappy but never went against his ammi. Dilshad and najma were very excited about zoya . asad was very independent and thinks that girl should be properly dressed and everything should be perfect from cleaning to arranging things in his home.asad likes to be silent while having dinner, lunch or breakfast..its been years anyone has seen asad smiling and dilshad is waiting for someone to make her sone smile

(I just wrote this chapter in a hurry so that I can jump into asya)
next chapter:-asya n fun
I'll gve a clue -zoya is a chatter box

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