'the other part of me' an asya fiction part 14 11/11 updated - Page 3

CHAPTER 5:- TIME CHANGES EVERYONE

After few weeks

As day passed by asad was annoyed or atleast put up a face that he is annoyed by zoya but he actually started liking what seemed annoyance once became his daily dosage of his personal drug and when ever he missed zoya, it would be hell to all his office staff as he was showing his frustration on his employes of missing her. His watchman would watch asad everyday and call up the office staff and inform whether he was in a good mood or bad or perhaps worst..

Zoya was habituated of lisenting to Mr khan words of thezeeb and tameeez , at once she thought €˜let it go€™ and those words even though had effect on her but tried to ignore it€zoya started liking him for his values, his love toward ammi, his love towards najma and his carring nature and she even gave thought of liking him more if he was not so judgemental about her , she would have liked him..zoya received many files from raveena she started making list of all possible names that had motive to kill her ammi

Dilshad was having her best time of life, she saw that asad actually started smiling and she became very close to zoya and liked her a lot, infact they devloped ammi-beti relationship..

Najma found her best friend in zoya and najma shared every problem with zoya and zoya was standing by najma when ever she wanted..

One fine evening:-

€œarrey zoya!! Please call asad for dinner€told dilshad who was busy arranging table for dinner
€œji!! Phoopi€ noded zoya and went towards asad room. Asad who just came from office was busy unbuttoning his shirt and zoya barged into his room with out knocking, asad turned towards the door €œMs farooqui, cant you knock the door€ €œallah miyan!! Whats wrong with you? Mujhey pata hey..wow kya body€ zoya mouth was wide opened and was staring at asad bare body €œ 1..2..3..4..5..6..€was busy counting something on asad body and asad was in confusion on what was she doing €œmashallah six packs€ asad was annoyed and shouted €œMs farooqui€ €œya allah!! Six pack body,,wow€Mr khan you are handsome your so hoo€.!! Suddenly zoya remebered that sh eas was drooling on his body and she knew Mr khan was staring at her so to divert concentration €œMr khan if you really wanted me to knock then you should have locked your room, allah miyan!! Whats wrong with you, how can you change your clothes with out locking your door?€ asad was tooo tired to argue with her after day long work so with stern voice €œwhy did you come to my room?€ and then zoya replied €œmujhey pata hey, that this is your room , mujhey koi intrest nahi hey aapki room main anne ki€.€ Asad cut her off by saying €œMs farooqui€€ €œmujhe pata hey!! Phoopi told me to call six pack€I mean, jahapa€.i mean, €˜ya allah!! How can I for get his name€™ , ya allah I mean phoophi is calling you for dinner€ and she turned and ran away closing the door. Zoya stood outside asad door and €œMr akudu ahmed khan is jahapana six pack€ she said and smiled . asad after locking his door and was thinking about how zoya was droolng over his body and gave a smile

At dining table:-

Asad came near dining table and was looking at zoya and zoya lifted her head was staring at asad but dilshad broke them up from their lost the world kind of look by saying €œasad sit down€..everyone was having their dinner and zoya who was sitting next najma started wishpering in her ear €œnajma!! Is your bother like this from childhood or did he had any head injuries and he became like this?€ najma with confused look €œlike what zoya?€ €œlike this akudu never smile n all€€replied zoya and najma couldn€™t control any more and laughed and zoya joined her..

Asad turned towards najma asked €œkya hua?€ najma stopped laughing €œkuch nahi€€ zoya interupted €œMr khan its not good manners asking about personal conversation€ and Mr khan turned towards zoya €œnajma will never hide anything from me€ zoya €œok fine,I was asking her whether you had some kind of head injury in your chilhood that you are like this€ asad stared at her and he left his dinning table and while asad was few steps away everyone broke into laughter even though it annoyed him he was happy that his mom was laughing actually happy after zoya came to his house so he gave a smile and went to his room.

Next morning:-

Zoya came to dinning table and noticed that phoopi and najma were sad though they try to hide her pain it was clearly visible in dilshad eyes so zoya started cracking jokes even though they laughed but their pain was clearly visible..after breakfast zoya went back to her room and logged in to her facebook account, mean while asad had some work so planned to do it in home today, dilshad was cleaning table and najma was sitting on sofa in hall lost in her own thoughts.

Zoya €œnajma happy birthday€ came running hugged najma and dilshad,asad looked at each other and remembered its her b€™day and wished her..zoya €œnajma when is the party? I want treat today, after all tamatar just turned 18 today€ and asad was angry and shouted €œaaj koi party nahi hogi€ and went to his room, najma ran crying to her room and she also noticed dilshad crying

Zoya went to najma room sat beside her €œI€™m sorry!! If I ve hurt you€ najma stopped crying €œaapki koi galati nahi hey€ zoya wiped najma tear €œif you don€™t mind can I ask you something?€ najma €œI know what you want to ask, why I wont celebrate my b€™day? Why bhaijaan got angry when you told party?€ zoya noded and najma continued €œbecause my abbu left me on my 1^st year b€™day for another women for the sake of money and my b€™day remindes me of my abbu so bhaijaan never celebrated my b€™day€. Zoya was shocked listening to this and she left her room

Zoya went to dilshad room €œphoopi please forgive me€I did not know that najma abbu left you for money on this day€ dilshad called her in €œzoya don€™t ask sorry please I know you justed wanted to cheer us up, I noticed you trying to cheer me up when we were having breakfast€ zoya noded but couldn€™t control her tear €œthis day asad abbu left me and went and I never asked any help from him and I worked hard, I was stiching clothes for living and asad saw me and he promised me that he never let me suffer and it was the last day I saw my children happy esspecially asad never smiled in this 17 years after you came I ve noticed asad smiling so I ve to say thank you€ €œthank you!! For coming into our life€ zoya rubbed her tears and hugged dilshad and said €œphoopi!! Thank you for being my ammi€ after that she left dilshad room

Zoya was planning to cheer them up and then she thought of Mr khan then she prepared his black coffee and then she went to Mr khan room €œMr khan can I come in?€ asked zoya amused by this gesture asad said €œha!! Please do come in€ asad was sitting near window who was busy in his laptop and zoya who went sat next to asad €œcoffee?€ asked zoya. Asad saw zoya face €œthank you€ and took the mug from her hands. Zoya started speaking again €œMr khan I€™m really sorry I did not know that your abbu€ I€™m really sorry€ asad closed his laptop €œIts ok€ asad took a sip of coffee and continued €œactually when you said najma b€™day the only thing that came to my mind is my abbu leaving us and how my ammi suffered, I ve seen my ammi crying silently working day and night to meet our expenses so I shouted€ zoya who was staring at asad €œallah miyan!! How much Mr khan and family suffered€ she thought and zoya started speaking €œI know Mr khan€she was holding asad hand even though asad was shocked but he was happy that some one was giving him some relief from this pain,
€œMr khan can I tell you something?€ asked zoya and asad noded €œMr khan my ammi always said that €˜we will always have sad and joy in our life and only way we can fight sadness is by happiness that is around us€™ your abbu might have left you and this the sad part but best and happiest part is you kid sister najma was born today, you have sister and she loves you a lot, forget the sad part that your abbu left but remember the happiest part about najma so embrace it Mr khan and you are very lucky that you have sibling who loves you , many people are not so lucky€ asad was mesmearised by seeing this part of zoya, he always saw funny and irritating zoya but today he saw something special in her and someone who values relation and with this zoya left and asad to left home.

After few hours:-

Asad came home and started calling €œnajma!!€.najma who was in her room came out and asked €œkya hua bhaijan?€ €œcome to back yard and get ammi and zoya also€ he told and left

Najma, zoya, dilshad went backyard and were surprised seeing ballons , flowers arrenged in the centre their was a cake and candles lit on it..all three came near and saw was written €œHAPPY B€™DAY TAMATAR€ najma seeing this started crying and dilshad gave confused look and asad noticed their confused look and said €œsomeone told me that, €˜we will always have sad and joy in our life and only way we can fight sadness is by happiness that is around you€™ and today is my tamatar b€™day and how can I not celebrate it€ asad turned towards zoya and gave a smile and zoya noded and smiled back. All of them enjoyed cake and asad gave najma presents and zoya noticed that dilshad and najma were smiling and were very happy. Asad said €œwe will have a grand party tonight€ zoya and dilshad smiled €œbut bhaijan aj party? Nahi bhaijaan , we will keep some other day I ve college assaignments to write soo but can we have bonfire? Its been so many days€ asked najma then asad noded €œyes we will have, what ever my little sister wants€ then dilshad turned towards zoya €œthank you again€ zoya gave confused look €œphoopi I did not know about this celebration,its not me phoophi its Mr khan who did this€ dilshad smiled and said €œits because of you asad did this or else we would never celbrated her b€™day€ zoya turned towards asad and smiled and najma went and hugged zoya asad smiled at this

Asad saw a different side of her and is this a new beginning in their relation??

Precap:-Asya dance, bonfire and new entry

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Chapter 1

How destiny meet..zoya and asad meet..

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Chapter 2

Zoya's life.. asad's gloomy life..

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Chapter 3

Asad and zoya meet...what a chatterbox

🤣head injury.new entry plz not tanveer.i hate her.plz pm me next part

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CHAPTER 6:-HE ISNT SO BAD AFTERALL

After celebration everyone went into home. KNOCK!! KNOCK!! Zoya heard a knock on her door come in she said and zoya was surprised seeing Mr khan. He came into her room and was shocked seeing her room , clothes were everywere, her bed was not arranged and magzines were not in order he got irritated with the room Ms farooqui who keeps their room like this?good girl will never keep her room so.asad was searching for words to explain the disaster and zoya cut him off mujhe pata hey!! Mr khan, allah miyan!! Whats wrong with you? You came to my room to scold me? asad realised what he is done and turned towards zoya thank you Ms farooqui.if you wouldnt have explained me I would have never realise the importance of najma bday celebration zoya was gloating and said its ok Mr khan, its my pleasure and by the way how can I see some one so close to me sad infact she is my BFF, my sister and gave dimpled simle and asad noticed her smile and he too smiled and was about to go Mr khan !! actually I ve a doubt, you were planning for a party, right? I doubt do you even dance?? Come on, party means DJ will be their ? so do you know to dance? Asked zoya and asad turned back chodiya Mr khan, mujhe pata hey that you dont know to dance said zoya and went towards her bed.

Asad who switched on a radio which was in zoya room this song is dedicated to all the lovers who are in bhopal a sweet female RJ voice came out of radio, zoya who was moving towards the bed stopped and heard the song

Chaahe Tum kuch na kaho,
maine sun liya...
ke saathi pyaar ka...
mujhe chun liya...chun liyaaa..maine sun liyaa

Pehla nasha...pehla hummar
Naya pyaar hai...naya intezaar
karloo mein kya apna haal...
mere dile bekaraar ...tu hi bata...(pehla nasha...)

Udthaa hi phirum in hawaom mein kahi
yaa mein jhool jaavu in ghattavom mein kahi...
ek kar doo aasman aur zameen...
kaho yaaron kya karu kya nahi...(pehla nasha..)

Usne baath ki kuch aise dang se
sapne de gaya hazaaron rang ke
rah jaau jaise mein haar ke..
aur choome vo mujhe pyaar se...

Zoya suddenly realised asad holding her hands and she turned towards asad and saw him staring at her, he pulled her hands and zoya twirled twice and asad caught her in his right hand and both were lost in their mithwa and asad s left hand was holding zoya left hand and his right and was holding her waist, he was staring into her eyes and she was lost in his eyes and were lost in their slow romantic and passionate dance
the song got over and RJ voice brought them back to their senses asad suddenly left zoya hand and without even once looking at zoya he left her room

ZOYA POV
she smiled after her dance and fell on her bed thinking about their dance she continously smiled allah miyan!! Whats wrong with me?why Im I smilling at the dance sooo much? It was just a dance?i danced with many in my college but I never felt like this before..am I attracted to him? No way he hates me and I hate him and nothing else

Asad pov
asad in his room paagal ladki!! She drives me crazy, my ammi thinks she is bechari and najma likes her, may be she is good at making friends but that girl has no thezeeb and tameez, but why I;m I thinking about her? he got angry went to bath room and turned on shower and stood right below it.
she is good dancer, her smile is sooo good she is like an angel he tought while standing below shower ha badtameez ladki and threw the shampoo bottle from his hand

AFTER FEW HOURS:-
It was beautifull evening and cool breeze sending shivers in everybody and a perfect timing for bonfire . dilsahad and najma were sitting around bonfire and taking up the heat and asad was busy cooking up barbeque, dilshad arrey najma!! Where is zoya? najma was about to reply then she saw zoya ammii!! She came najma and dilshad tunrned to see zoya and dilshad mashallah!! You look so beautifull in saree. Asad who wanted to avoid her after the dance couldnt control anymore after he heard that she wore saree and turned towards her

Zoya was in angelic beauty again she wore a Red chiffon sarree with a black border and saree just intensifed her every curve of the body and her hair let loose made asad heart flutter like a bird wing

Zoya came near dilshad and sat in between dilshad and najma, she turned towards the bonfire and was staring at it, the cool breeze she was feeling just vanished, she could feel heat all around her that beautiful garden she was sitting was nothing but showing her burnt bus, the smell of a flower which was in garden was nothing but smell of burnt flesh, her throat dried up she raised her hand towards the bon fire

Asad noticed something in zoya hand but was not sure what was it

Zoya got up and shouted ammii!! Ammii!!! Ammii ko bachao and started crying.dilshad, najma and asad were shocked at her reaction and just then asad went and caught zoya who was about to fall as she lost her conscious..

After few minutes:-

Zoya got up suddenly shouting ammii and saw dilshad, najma and asad with worried expression. Dilshad offered water and after drinking phoopi Im sooo sorry that I ruined your evening with a appoligy face and dilshad zoya!! We were worried about you and you are asking sorry about the bon fire, paagal ladki..what happened? zoya gave a smile and then with scared expression phoophi I ve arsonophobia(person scared of fire) oh!! You should have told us before we would have cancelled the bon fire replied najma and turned towards najma I din wanted to ruin your bday plans sooo najma replied acctually!! Im sorry you told me that your mom died in a fire accident and I forgot about it, Im sooo sorry zoya najma replied and asad suddenly realised that zoya doesnot have her mom and he scolded them many times for not teaching thezeeb and tameez, asad was shocked at this and he couldnt show her face anymore so he left and zoya was more sad as she was expecting few comforting words from him
dilshad said you take rest zoya , we will go

Midnight:-
zoya was sitting in garden holding a photo in her hand and crying , asad who couldnt sleep after he got to know that zoya ammii died and wanted to talk to her and comfort her so he came out and searched her room he couldnt find her then he noticed her sitting in the garden then he decided to make coffe for her

Coffee? Asked asad, zoya who was crying wiped her tears and turned towards asad just the way you like zoya took coffee from him thank you Mr khan she moved so that asad can sit next to her. After few minutes she took a sip of coffee Mr khan I was very close to my ammii and once she died I slowly drifted away from everyone, my abbu to kept me away from him and he is always busy in work she took one more sip I some times feel that Im alone in this world Mr khan asad who turned towards her Im here Ms farooqui,Ill be always with you and never think that you are alone zoya who was happy hearing this from asad promise Mr khan? promise Ms farooqui.. then he saw zoya wide smile and realised her intention and replied I promise ammi,najma are always with you zoya who stared into his eyes aur aap Mr khan asad who was lost in her eyes me toooand he took out his hand and said its late Ms farooqui, we should sleep..good night!! he said and left. Zoya who finished her cup of coffee making sure that not even a single drop of coffee is left behind and thinking about asad words she smiled and went back to her room.

Next morning:-

As usual everything was normal for najma and dilshad and asad but it was different for zoya someone promised her that theyll be with her all the time .she was smiling, jumping around and enjoying every minute

arrey!!zoya I thought you are unwell but you are fine today may be better than fine asked dilshad and zoya replied ha!! Phoopi someone promised me that Im not alone anymore she turned towards asad. Asad saw zoya and gave smile and dilshad noticed it.

In the evening:-

Bell rang and zoya went to open the door and saw a girl in anarkali suit with her head coverd with dupatta and in other words or asad words ladki with thezeeb and tameez. Zoya with smile asked who are you? with a smile she replied ji!! Im tanveer zoya was about to ask her more question but then dilshad and najma came to all and spoke at once tanveer tanveer went inside and hugged khaala!! How are you? dilshad with wide smile Im fine, how are you? tanveer broke her hug Im fine khaala went to najma hugged but zoya noticed that najma was not so happy as dilshad but still hugged how are you najma? asked tanveer Im fine replied najma and gave weird smile

Then asad came home he saw tanveer tanveer what a pleasant surprise and hugged her tight and zoya got irritated and then zoya went towards ahem!!ahem!! she coughed and then tanveer and asad broke from hug and stared her pls!! freshen up, phoophi arranged table for dinner then asad replied tanveer few minutes,Ill be back and he went

Entire dinner was all about tanveer and enquired about how she is and her bussiness and -how long and tanveer-asad bachapan . no one cared about phoophi except najma who was bust talking to zoya and ignoring tanveer.

Next chapter covers

(why najma hates tanveer?
dilshad is about to die?? Who will save her??)

Tanveer is bad asusual but her all wrongs are in favor of asya
Ill gve a clue tanveer wont be able to stop asya confession of love which will be later. She is just like catalyst for asya and I promise

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