'the other part of me' an asya fiction part 14 11/11 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tsering2013

Awsome!!!! Finally ASYA going to meet. Will they know eachother??? They jve their things exchanged wth eachother rt???? Omg i'm so excited... Keep updating.
Thanks for pm


wait fr next part but i can say that if they get to knw then vrs the fun in it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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coool great story, do pm me
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CHAPTER 3:- IS THIS MY FAMILY?

Asad was in airport as his company is one of the best and biggest construction company in bhopal and was handling government project for expanding bhopal airport . since it was one of the biggest project for his construction company he made sure everything is on time and proper,even though project was in final stage he made sure that he supervised it.

Around 6:00pm zoya landed in airport,even though she was breathing fresh air but she could smell the fire that burnt her ammi and all her memories came rushing through her eyes as tears but then she remembered her ammi last words "zoya!!remember we will always have sad and joy in our life and only way we can fight sadness is by happiness that is around you"

And that made her smile remembering all her sweet memories she had with her ammi before everything happened

Zoya came out of the airport saw a man near Audi Q7 car who was well built, what itseems like Gym body ,his perfect jaw line his perfect physique made her mouth wide open "ya allah!! Bhopal has such nice model and he is very handsome" and talked to herself and she suddenly remembered and started searching for address which was kept in her one of her leather bag…

Asad who was near his Audi Q7 was searching for keys in his pocket and then a gush of wind blew across him , he turned to wards his left and that was it "its an angel,she is having amazing hair and she has perfect curves" he thought

Zoya lifted her head to see the man and saw him staring at her and both were lost and suddenly a vehicle parked in between and brought them back to their senses

Asad was going back to his home and only thing he can think about her "wow!! She is beautifull, she is definitely heart breaker and why I'm thinking about her? she was wearing jeans omg!! She has no thezeeb or tameez, ache ghar ki ladki aise nahi hoti" even though he denied that she has no thezeeb and tameez there was something that was itching his heart

KHAN MANSION:-

Dilshad worried about zoya as it was 7:00pm and but still she wasn't around . asad came back "saalam walikum ammi!!" . "walikum asalaam, go freshen up we will have dinner" told asad and asad noded and went to his room

Zoya arrived at khan mansion and she was invited by dilshad and najma initially both were shocked at her attire but mesmarized by her chirpyness and bubbly nature. "zoya!! Freshen up and come we will have dinner"

Asad went to take bath he turned his tap on stood below the shower all he can think about is that girl he saw near airport

Dilshad, najma and zoya were seated in dinning table "wo au…..actually can I call you phoopi?" dilshad nodded and said "ofcourse beta".everyone heard foot steps sound zoya turned towards the sounds and was shocked and asad lifted his head anly to be shocked and he was moving slowly towards the table his everystep was taking more than a minute and both of them were staring at each other.najma looked at her bhaijaan "asad bhai why are you walking slowly,did something happen to your legs?" both came back to their senses.

Asad came to dinning table dilshad and najma were sitting towards his right and zoya towards his left and asad was avoiding seeing towards his left and dilshad served his dinner and broke the silence "asad , this is zoya she is going to stay with us" asad was again shocked and asked "she is really here?" "what" najma asked "nothing"told asad and turned towards zoya…zoya gave her dimpled smile to asad and turned towards phoopi and started talking "phoopi you are very beautiful and mujhe pata hey if u would have gone to miss india you would have won it!! Najma you are so prity , phoopi you have a nice home and I think this italian marble but who ever planned it they are very good at designing at homes,wow food is amazing, you prepared najma? So tasty, mujhe pata hey phoophi prepared it and doesn't mean that najma food will be bad? By the way najma what do you do?? Mujhe pata hey you very young so goin to college? She turned towards asad "mr khan!! Can I call you mr khan? Mujhe pata hey that I can call you and you don't mind me calling" asad " ms…??" "mera naam zoya farooqui, I thought you know my name , mujhe pata hey that I'm not celebrity but still I'm staying in your home and you should know my name" asad "ms farooqui can we have dinner?" was staring with wide open eyes.. "haha!! You can have!! Mujhe pata hey that I did not block your mouth but still I'm still giving permission" asad anger was at peak "ms faroooqui!!" shouted "if you please stop talking I can have my dinner peacefully" zoya who was blabbering stoped and told to her self "Akudu khan"

After dinner zoya went to her room and asad to his room. Dilshad "allah!! She talk to much but pyari ladaki " najma nodded and told " ammii!! Bahut pyari hey"

Zoya was in her room "I ve reached bhopal and its time I find out answer about my mmi death, allah!! Please help me find answer" she took out taviz and a photo was crying at it "allah!! Please help me to find the person in this photo" suddenly her door was opening she hid the taviz and photo, wipped her tears…
dilshad opened her door slightly "did I disturb you?" " no phoopi, pls comin" she try to hid her sorrow that was in her voice….dilshad came in and saw zoya and her eyes were red and understood that she was crying, came near sat next to zoya and extended her hands towards zoya chin "zoya!! Kya hua?" "kuch nahi phoopi" said zoya…"if you want to talk to anyone I'm here, I'm always here your phoophi and don't ever feel your alone in this home " kissed zoya head and left

Zoya "phoophi, I feel like I know you before..why do I feel I can share anything with you?" thought zoya who switched off her light and slowly drifted to sleep" "why do I feel that this is my family and phoophi is my ammii?"

Asad in his room and was on his bed "this girl will drive me crazy, kitna baat karte hey"

And he was thinking about how she was standing in airport and how hair was dancing with the wind and "why I'm thinking about her and she does not have tameez or thezeeb" covered his face with blanket

Precap:- asya fight
zoya was about to kiss asad? Will this happen?? Have to wait

(next few chapter is all about asya)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice story..pls pm me the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update can u plz pm me when u next upate
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome contniue soon and please pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😳kiss 4rm zoya?i want asad 2 kiss zoya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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she does have the taveez..
and how can zoya be zoya without being a chatter bug..
looking forward towards asya fights..
thanxs for the pm
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CHAPTER 4:- MY MEMORIES TURNED OUT TO BE TEARS

It was 8:00 am and dilshad and najma were arranging on the dinning table and asad came from his room and was looking around. €œsit down asad€dilshad told asad who was busy searching for zoya. €œjii ammi€ nodded asad.

Dilshad sat on the right of asad and najma on the left €œ ahem!! Ammi is your guest not joining us??€ asked asad. €œwo..she€™s here€ dilshad turned towards zoya and asad saw zoya. €œGood morning phoopi, hi!! Najma,€ she gave her dimpled smile and turned towards asad pulling her chair backwards which was next to najma €œgood morning Mr khan€ and gave him stern look, €œgood morning Ms farooqui€ nodded asad. All started to have their breakfast €œMs farooqui breakfast is at 8:00 am so be on time€ told asad. €œallah miya!! Whats wrong with you, is this some kind of joke Mr khan, mujhe pata hey that this not joke but y?? is this hostel? The way you are saying that €˜Ms farooqui breakfast is at 8:00 am€™ I feel like I€™m in some hostel, ha!! Mujhey pata hey that this is not hostel and phoopi I forgot to tell you that this aloo paratha is amazing and where was i€..? zoya was talking but asad broke her by shouting €œMs faroooqui!!€ but zoya continued €œ haha!! Mujhey pata hey, Just because you live by rules doesnot mean everyone should€€ again asad shouted €œMs farooqui!!€ but zoya continued her talk €œhaha!! Mujhey pata hey, mera naam Ms farooqui and not Mrs asad ahmed khan€ asad couldn€™t tolerate anymore and shouted €œbus!! Ms farooqui what the hell are you talking about€ but dilshad noticed anger in asad face so she tried to deviate the matter €œzoya!! Are you going out?€ and zoya turned towards dilshad and nodded

Rest of the breakfast went in silent zoya finished eating and was about to go €œBye phoopi,Bye najma€ and gave angry look at asad and left

€œya allah!! Please help me find the person who is responsible for my ammi death€ and was walking
she knew her mom was an IAS officer so she thought of starting her search from her office so she went to union public service office
she reached her office but she had no idea to whom to talk their and then she suddenly noticed a female who is middle aged with noticable wrinkles near her eyes walking towards the clerk office and zoya knew she€™d seen her but couldn€™t remember her so called out €œexcuse me maam€ but the attender who was outside one of the office told €œshhh!! Hey IAS ka office, pls don€™t shout€ zoya turned towards him €œallah miya!! Whats wrong with you I know this office€ she turned towards that women and called out €œexcuse me€ that middle aged women saw her with confused looks €œsalaam walikum ji!! I€™m zoya faroooqui€ gave her dimpled smile €œI€™m raveena €œ zoya €œactually I ve some work so I thought that you could help me€ , €œji boliye€ told raveena €œ I€™m searching information about one of the IAS officer who worked here and her name is Zarina€ and raveena told oh yes €œI worked as PA for her so sad she died in fire accident€ €œI€™m her daughter€ replied zoya and raveena was happy €œoh!! You have grown up so much and your so beautiful€ told raveena lifting her chin

Zoya explained everything to raveena and raveena agreed to help her so she took zoya to old file section so that she can see all the file that her mom handled while she was a officer and to make a list of people who had fight with her mom€hours passed by and zoya noticed that it was 7:00 so she requested raveena to find all the files and give her list so that she€™ll be able to find the person

While coming back from old file section which was in the cabin of IAS officer she noticed a wooden board were all IAS officer name was written and one particular name that was her mom name caught her attention and she went near the board . she touched her mom name and was smiling then she suddenly noticed her name which was written next to her mom name which she wrote when she visited her mom in the office , all her memories came rushing through as tears and couldn€™t stand any more she left the place

While going back all she could remember was her memories with her mom made her sob continuously

IN KHAN MANSION

Asad was fuming on her ammi for zoya not being in home before 8. €œasad she is a guest and doesn€™t know any rules€ dilshad was trying to protect zoya €œbut ammii those are not rule, koi bi sheriff kandan ki ladki is waqt ghar mein who na chahiye atleast ek call karna chahiye€

Zoya came hiding her tears and sorrow €œhi phoophi , hi najma€ and was going towards her room. Asad €œ ms farooqui!! Time kya hai€ zoya €œallah miya!! Whats wrong with you, theirs wall clock on your left so you can see€ asad couldn€™t control anymore €œMs farooqui is this the time you come home? You have to be in home by 8:00 Ms farooqui€ zoya was already exhausted with day work and memories of her mom so she shouted €œMr khan not everyone is robot€ it crossed asad limits €œMs farooqui if you are living in some house then you have to follow their rules and I know very well about your kind of girls€ zoya €œmy kind of girls? What do you mean?€ asad €œ people who were such clothes and you don€™t have any thezeeb and tameez and I don€™t know what your mom was doing with out teaching you all this€ that was it zoya who tried controlling her tear couldn€™t resist any more and ran towards her room.
asad went to wards his room

Dilshad went to zoya room and she saw her crying , €œ zoya I€™m really sorry for what asad said you€ zoya rubbed her eyes €œphoophi why are you asking sorry its nothing€ and dilshad told €œzoya I saw you crying€ zoya couldn€™t control anymore €œphoophi mera ammii nahi hey€ she started crying out loud dlishad rubbed her tears from cheek €œarrey!! Pagal who told you don€™t have ammii, I€™m there here for you,I€™m like your ammi ,am I not? Dilshad asked €œji phoophi you€™re my best ammi€ zoya told hugging zoya
dilshad was about to go but turned back to zoya and told €œzoya please asad ko galat mat samagana, he is just worried about you€ gave a smile and left

(I know I told you about asya scenes and even zoya about to kiss asad but I€™ m sorry
I€™m quite busy as I€™m getting engaged next week sooo busy with shopping n all and I promise next part is full of asya and I€™ll be bit delaying )
(I€™m nt free to write asya scenes because it requires lot of time but these simple chapters are fast sooo)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on your engagement ...

waiting for the next update...

Edited by Linsie - 12 years ago

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