'the other part of me' an asya fiction part 14 11/11 updated - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
I love this story❤️ Truly awesome. Lovedto see a different Najma here and also the fact that she hates Tanveer.😃 Can you please send me a buddy request? Then it will be easy for me to follow the story. I'm not able to send one due to some error. Please continue soon and do pm me when you update.😊
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Chapter 7..
Like it zoya and najma combo... so fun

How both girls mock asad and tanveer...

Zoya .. helping Dilshad... sad ending


aaa precap very interesting...






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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr8 update 👏
continue soon😃

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Just loving it...its too good...update soon...plz pm me
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zoya J..not getting attention. .
najma does not like tanveer...
bread and jam..once again...
love v/s arranged marriage. .
zoya alert..about her whereabouts..
helps dilshad in breathing. .
asad slap...
interesting update. ..thanks for the pm
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Originally posted by: Cindrella3

I love this story❤️ Truly awesome. Lovedto see a different Najma here and also the fact that she hates Tanveer.😃 Can you please send me a buddy request? Then it will be easy for me to follow the story. I'm not able to send one due to some error. Please continue soon and do pm me when you update.😊


they have very special bond
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wonderful update
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Waiting For next Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this is getting intresting plzz upd soon
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CHAPTER 8:- HUG SAY'S IT ALL

After few minutes, what it seemed like hours for zoya, najma and asad, doctor came out of the special ward and turned towards asad "who did that procedure on ammi? Asad" asked Dr punith aka asad friend and najma replied "zoya did" asad was irritated and his face was covering with anger he turned his head to search for zoya and saw her standing very far at the end of the floor and asad tried to walk towards her to confront her again for doing some procedure on his ammi... "amazing" replied Dr punith, asad was surprised and and turned towards his doctor "what are you saying?" asked asad, "asad, nurse explained me about the condition of your ammi and I think zoya saved your ammi and I don't have much to do, she is done everything you should be thankful to her, I'll give some medicine and ammi is stable so I'll remove the tube in the evening and you can take her home after 3 days and you can see your ammi now" said Dr punith... asad, najma and tanveer went inside to see his ammi awake

Even though dilshad was awake she couldn't talk and asad tried to control his tears but still few escaped and najma cried out loudly. Tanveer, even though she was not happy seeing dilshad alive but still managed to put some glycerine in her eyes and started crying out loudly, seeing this najma was shocked "ammi is trying to sleep, please go out" said frustrated najma and tanveer went out immediately as she had no intrest to cry any more.

Zoya who was still sitting at the end of the floor tried to get as much as information from nurses who were working on that floor she was happy that phoophi was stable, even though she wanted to see her phoophi she couldn't go as asad was angry at her and asked her not to go near.

After few minutes:-

Asad came out of his ammi room and he saw zoya who was sitting and he decided to talk to her and ask her forgiveness and walked towards her but then zoya noticed asad coming towards her so went away from that place avoiding him as she didn't want anymore complains from him, asad saw this and was confused at her

After 3 days:-

Its been 3days, dilshad was about to get discharged, zoya spent most of her time in hospital with dilshad and najma. Whenever asad used to come to hospital she used go to home and get her clothes, asad understood that she is avoiding him, if dilshad , najma and zoya are having fun and in case asad drops by then and she used go away with some excuses, asad tried to call her but never picked up and even though he tried to talk to her in front of his ammi she avoided him by some lame reason

Asad grew restless since he couldn't ask her apology and she was completely avoiding him...najma noticed this but she knew her brother deserved it and hence she kept herself out from their fight..

Around evening on day 3 of hospital:-
"phoophi, I ve packed your bags" said zoya smiling at dilshad , "thanks!! I need to get out of this hospital, I hate hospitals" replied dilshad with smile on her face, zoya was happy seeing dilshad smile and replied "phoopi I always want to you to smile like this. i'll make sure my phoophi smile" said zoya and went to sit next to najma who was sitting on the sofa which was kept for visitors... "thank you beta!! I know you only saved me I did not want to die soo soon, I want to see asad nikha and my grand children and after that let anything happen to me..." Dilshad was talking to zoya "phoophi!!" shouted zoya and continued "phoophi don't dare talk like that, even after your grand children's are born but still I nedd you phoophi...I lost my ammi I can't loose you to phoophi" said zoya with sad face...

"ammi!! Bhaijaan nikha can happen anytime but we need you ammi" replied najma... "I'm sorry I'll never talk like that but its just that I'm worried about asad nikha he never talk about it anything and whenever I ask he say's I'll marry the girl you choose but..." replied dilshad with sad face and just then asad came to the hospital and was about to enter in to room but zoya started to talk so he stood near the door and was trying to listen to their conversation

Zoya wanted to cheer her phoophi so she replied "phoophi if you are worried about your son nikha then I'm ready to marry him right now, all I want is to see you happy" and started laughing but najma replied "zoya meri bhabhi!! I love that" and dilshad replied "mujhey pasand hey" replied dilshad happily , asad who was standin near the door was very happy that zoya likes to marry him and was happy how his ammi and najma likes zoya...
"but phoophi!! Mr khan won't accept me he thinks that I don't have thezeeb and tameez anyways I was just joking" replied zoya and all three smiled at each other

Even though what zoya told was true but hearing this from her made asad feel a pinch in his heart and thought "Ms farooqui is total misfit for my family"

Asad went inside the room and was staring at zoya but she ignored him and went near by dilshad "lets go phoophi" said zoya

Parking lot:-
najma and dilshad went and sat behind and only front seat which was next to asad was free and zoya noticed this "phoophi I have some work, I'll come after some time" said zoya and asad understood that zoya was avoiding "Ms farooqui its 7:00pm what work do you have?"asked asad with irritated face, zoya with angry face turned towards najma "najma I'll come after some time" replied zoya and went inside hospital but seeing this asad was frustrated "Ms farooqui!!"shouted asad but najma knew that this may turn into fight tried to save her "bhaijaan!! Zoya told me that she has some work since she did procedure on ammi she should sign some papers"

Zoya was hiding behind the pillars and was listening to everything and she thought "Mr khan you misjudged me again and told me not to show your face sooo, anyways I can come on my own"...asad left with najma and dilshad to their home and once they they were gone zoya took auto

While driving, asad could only think about how zoya behaved with him and it made him more angrier every minute..
zoya in auto though felt guilty for behaving with asad but still she knew that he deserved it

At home:-
asad, najma and dilshad came near the door and rang bell but their was no reply but asad rang bell again and tanveer opend the door. Asad who was already irritated with zoya behavior showed his frustration on tanveer "how dare you!! Why can't you open the door soon ammii is standing out for soo long, how can you be soo irresponsible" shouted at tanveer and went towards the door
tanveer was irritated with asad but composed herself "khala how are you?" befor dilshad reply tanveer saw zoya got down from auto and tanveer asked "zoya why are you coming in auto?" dilshad was surprised at her "if it was so small work we would waited for you" replied dilshad "phoophi lets go inside you shouldn't stand out for too long" and came inside,
asad saw zoya coming home within minutes after they came home made him more frustrated he went inside room slamming his door

At dinner table:-

Asad was still frustrated with zoya but he was sitting at his usual place and dilshad and tanveer was sitting right to asad and najma left to asad, zoya came at the table and gave stern look at asad and turned towards dilshad "phoophi I'll eat later and don't forget tablets and I ve already told you which tablets to take so take only those" and she left even though zoya was hungry she didn't want to eat with asad and najma understood why zoya was behaving oddly and najma replied "if you want I'll serve food to your room" and turned towards asad to see his reaction and asad who was very angry left in between dinner and went

Tanveer noticed that both asad and zoya were not talking to each other she smirked and was very happy

In asad room:-
tanveer wanted to use this situation so she went to asad room "jammy can I come in?" asked tanveer and asad who was angry said "you are already in room, you should knock before coming in and I thought you had those basic sense" though tanveer took aback at asad behavior but still she wanted use the situation to separate asya and come closer to asad "jammy!! I'm sorry for not opening door soon enough" she went near asad and put her hand on asad shoulder but he jerked her hand off but tanveer continued "jammy I'll promise to take care of khala she is like my ammi and I know its because of zoya that khala is in hospital and I'll make sure that zoya won't do it again"...asad who was frustrated with zoya and he knew it was not her mistake and asad remembered that tanveer telling that she prepared food showed on her "enough!!enough!! it was because of zoya my ammi is alive and it was not her who prepared it was you so enough stop blaming her and you are suppose to stay away from my ammii and please get out" tanveer was shocked how her plan back stabbed her she left room immediately and went to her room

tanveer POV

"ha!! Suddenly he remembered that I prepared food, why is luck not with me? I have to do something before asad send me out of house" tanveer spoke to herself standing in front of mirror

Asad POV

Asad "enough!! I ve to go and talk to zoya and she cant avoid me and I cannot stay like this with her and I ve to talk to her and sort out all things" thought to himself and left his room to go to zoya room

Zoya POV

How come Mr khan never realized his mistake, akudu khan never thinks before talking and how come he judged me like this?how dare he even think that I'll hurt phoophi?i'll never forgive him for this

Najma POV

I ve to do something now its time that zoya and bhaijaan stop fighting and become friends and I should talk to zoya first

Dilshad POV

When I was in hospital something happened between zoya and asad and why is zoya avoiding asad and why is my son angry at her? I have to find out about it. Let me go and talk to zoya first

In zoya room

Zoya was sleeping on her bed heard a knock on her door "please come in" zoya said and got up from bed and saw asad her expression changed to anger

Meanwhile
dilshad and najma go to zoya room to talk to her and both of them arrive at the same time.."you at this time?"asked dilshad..."ha!!ammi I need to talk about fight between bhaijaan and zoya so came to talk to her"replied najma dilshad gave a smile "even I came to talk about it and to find about it?" said dilshad and both turned towards the door but door was slightly opened and saw asad standing in front of zoya and stood behind the door peeping into room to see what was going on

Back to zoya room:-

Zoya saw asad in her room and she tried to go out of the room but asad caught her left hand and pulled her near but she tripled and was about to fall when asad caught her with left hand and both of them were staring at each other for few minutes

Zoya came back to her senses "Mr khan let me go" said to asad and asad freed her from his hands and said "I need to talk to you" but zoya folded her hands around her chest "ji boliye" said zoya with anger on her face..."wo...actually...wo..."asad was stammering and was finding difficult to find words... "allah miyan!! Whats wrong with you? And you are not able to tell anything Mr khan and please go out of my room, I cant bear any more humiliation from you and I cant have any more judgmental looks from you Mrkhan, and you told me not to show my face to you and I'm trying my best to avoid and Mr I came here for some important work once it is done I'll go out of your life" said zoya with sad face but stern voice and asad understood how she felt but when zoya told I'll go out of your life' it was like thousand needles pierced his heart and couldn't think about it anything else he just caught her left hand pulled towards him and hugged her...

"no I can not let you to go out of my life, I need you"said asad to zoya who hugged her so passionately that zoya forgot for what she was fighting and prayed to allah that time would freez forever

Dilshad and najma who were shocked seeing this gave smile to each other and went back to their room

"Mr khan I'm not able to breath"said zoya struggling but enjoying his hug but still asad was lost in his world about loosing zoya did not free her but zoya shouted back "Mr khan!!" and asad released from his hug and saw zoya gasping for breath and asad stared zoya for few seconds and left the room

"allah miyan!! Whats wrong with him" thought zoya who went near mirror and was trying to remember everything and a smile appeard on her face,"whats wrong with me? Why am I smilling and I should be angry at asad,, omg did just call him asad I mean Mr khan why did he hug me?" thought to herself

She saw her door open and Mr khan was their again "why did he come here again?" thought zoya to herself and was waiting for asad to talk but she saw asad walking towards her and zoya moved back till she touched the wall then asad came near but zoya tried to move away from him but then asad put his both hands on either side of zoya and their body was few inches away fom each other and asad was staring at her and zoya was staring in asad eyes few minutes passd by then zoya moved her hands towards asad collar pulling his lips towards her and zoya slowly stood on her metatarsals to kiss asad and as she moved towards asad lips a gush of air passed by breaking zoya from her dreams and saw herself standing on metatarsals and hand in air folded in fists and her head bend towards left and her lips slightly parted

"allah miyan!! Whats wrong with me? Do I like asad? noo ways may be I'm attracted to him"
"yes I'm attracted to him"

In asad room:-
as soon as asad came to room he went to bathroom and stood below shower after few minutes "why did I hug Ms farooqui? Am I attracted to her? May be I'm but why did I feel that prick in my heart when she told that "I'll go out of your life" what is happening to me?what is wrong with me? Why I'am I thinking about her?i'm going mad may be I need psychiatrist for treatment"

Asad came out of bathroom went to his closet to take his night suit and saw a wooden box and opened it slowly there was a gold chain in it and asad was staring at it and he felt that their is some connection with this to zoya "what the hell is wrong with me? How can this gold chain be related to zoya she is from London and not Bhopal and I definitely need a psychiatrist"

In zoya room:-
zoya couldn't sleep she got up from her bed "allah miyan whats wrong with me? Why I'm I thinking about Mr khan" she went near her closet opened taviz which was hidden inside one of her bags "you have always helped with problems, whenever I see you you give me strength to fight any problem or help me to do right thing n now I'm attracted or may be i like Mr khan and I need you to help me to find out about this relationship" she said to taviz and took taviz to her bed and slept with it

In dilshad room:-
najma and dilshad were sitting on bed "ammi!! I think bhaijaan likes zoya"said najma and dilshad saw najma nodded "then why is he not confessing to her?" asked dilshad "we should do something so that he'll confess" told najma but dilshad was lost in thought and replied "before we do anything we should know how zoya feels about asad and how asad feel about zoya, and I have a plan"said dilshad
dilshad and najma discussed about their plan and smiled at each other

(next chapter:- tanveer nautanki
najma and dilshad plans for asya
zoya realization that she loves asad
what about asad?u ve to wait )

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