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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow it was superb di tooo beautiful 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks guys

I guess the scene in the morning was a bit different in the show...but kinda smiliar in some ways. Teasing followed by sweet talk :)

but no hug Neena and Vineeta...tadpo tadpo...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks guys


I guess the scene in the morning was a bit different in the show...but kinda smiliar in some ways. Teasing followed by sweet talk :)

but no hug Neena and Vineeta...tadpo tadpo...:)

Wow ! Its like you read my mind... and changed it to something so beautiful...
For their fictional world I am sold...
but as we both know practically It is so different and I for one am glad that its different...
good physicals of my kids are way more satisfying than a candle light dinner...
you write very beautiful and mature stuff .. never OTT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gossipgirlxoxo

Wow ! Its like you read my mind... and changed it to something so beautiful...

For their fictional world I am sold...
but as we both know practically It is so different and I for one am glad that its different...
good physicals of my kids are way more satisfying than a candle light dinner...
you write very beautiful and mature stuff .. never OTT


Thanks dear.

Our candle light dinners usually end up in conversations about kids anyways😆

I am glad you liked this version :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Funny, sweet and beautiful!
Great work! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks guys


I guess the scene in the morning was a bit different in the show...but kinda smiliar in some ways. Teasing followed by sweet talk :)

but no hug Neena and Vineeta...tadpo tadpo...:)


I loved both: your version and Gul's version!! 😛

The teasing was very cute: in yours it was more of Asad teasing Zoya. I literally cracked up at Zoya's:

"Kal aap kahenge ki main aapko nahaate waqt dekhna chaahta hoon to see aap paani kitna waste kart hain?"

Asad turned red at that comment. Zoya realized what she had blurted without thinking. Embarrassed, she ran away to her room."


On the show, Zoya started the teasing and Asad ended it! Equal footing!! I adored Zoya singing those hindi "neend" songs. So cute. And the smiles and looks Asad was giving her! When he started teasing her, I loved how he cocked his head slightly as if saying, "Here's payback sweetheart. What do you say now?"

I missed your review today. Wanted to see what your reaction was to Raziya's masala peesing instead of chakki peesing!

They finally discussed BB's health and the need for medical attention.

Ghaffur's behavior is so confusing! Are they trying to redeem his character to pave way for Zoya's entry into SM?! Raziya's out for now!!

Najma-Imraan poised to be exposed soon... Will the classmate reveal something or will Najma spill the beans as she does not want to marry someone else? We'll see! No more guessing!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sooo sweet & beautifully written
loved it 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: webuser7


I loved both: your version and Gul's version!! 😛

The teasing was very cute: in yours it was more of Asad teasing Zoya. I literally cracked up at Zoya's:

"Kal aap kahenge ki main aapko nahaate waqt dekhna chaahta hoon to see aap paani kitna waste kart hain?"

Asad turned red at that comment. Zoya realized what she had blurted without thinking. Embarrassed, she ran away to her room."


On the show, Zoya started the teasing and Asad ended it! Equal footing!! I adored Zoya singing those hindi "neend" songs. So cute. And the smiles and looks Asad was giving her! When he started teasing her, I loved how he cocked his head slightly as if saying, "Here's payback sweetheart. What do you say now?"

I missed your review today. Wanted to see what your reaction was to Raziya's masala peesing instead of chakki peesing!

They finally discussed BB's health and the need for medical attention.

Ghaffur's behavior is so confusing! Are they trying to redeem his character to pave way for Zoya's entry into SM?! Raziya's out for now!!

Najma-Imraan poised to be exposed soon... Will the classmate reveal something or will Najma spill the beans as she does not want to marry someone else? We'll see! No more guessing!!


thanks RK...my version was PG 11 whereas Gul's was PG5😆

i didn't make a review post yesterday. That masala peesing was hilarious for sure but I am sure she will call one of her baddie friends like Tanu or Vikram and get released like she did from the mental asylum...that means a bigger game down the road :(
I think Gaffur is a politician...can't trust that man yet
Is that Imran at the door? Let's see
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bheegi


thanks RK...my version was PG 11 whereas Gul's was PG5😆

i didn't make a review post yesterday. That masala peesing was hilarious for sure but I am sure she will call one of her baddie friends like Tanu or Vikram and get released like she did from the mental asylum...that means a bigger game down the road :(
I think Gaffur is a politician...can't trust that man yet
Is that Imran at the door? Let's see


Imran was Najma's classmate? How many years did he fail in school? it better not be Imran at the door with his family!! Asad will go on a tirade.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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So cute story. Asya r adroable. Love it.

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