Why I Want To Watch You Sleep? ASYA OS

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: _vineeta_
So cute Sangeeta, thats pure Zoya and Asad. Their bickering like teenagers and then resolving that with most sensual talk..

And I want that last dialog and that hug in the end☺️ ONSCREEN too..

thanks vineeta. I couldn't resist writing this after I saw the spoiler on Asad's wish...he is really cute and weird😆 so tried to incorporate both aspects here

I wouldn't count on the hug but yes, I can imagine that last dialogue😳

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: webuser7
🤣 🤣 🤣

Sangeeta, first of all thanks for mentioning my name. 🤗

AWESOME! HILARIOUS! AWW! SUPERB!

Super cute OS. I loved it. Wish I had time to write more. Have to run to conduct an interview.

👍🏼 👍🏼 2 thumbs up from me!!

Thanks for your snoring idea. That's what got me into my imagination world...keep giving me some material like this😆

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: me2you
Of course...there is a romantic scene on its way, aur Sangeeta Di kuch na likhe aisa ho sakta hai kya?! 😉

Lovely, super cute and sweet, romantic, cute, AsYa-licious 😳 teasy-licious (okay, the last one I just made up myself) 😆 I just love this badtameez dil-wala Mr. Khan😳
"Haan, main dekh raha tha, aap drool bahut karti hain." (As if you, Mr. Khan, were not drooling while watching her)
'Bolo Zoya," he whispered, "iska kya matlab samjhoon main?" (Hayee...mein mar gayi)

Thank you Di for bringing us again into your fantasy world full of love and romance. Your place is not here, aap tho CV ke jaga hone chahiye. I want everyone to know what a talented writer you are. Success is guaranteed!

Mein soch rahi thi ke itne din ho gaye hain without an OS of yours, finally it is here 😃

🤗

Thanks Narges...I just need some inspiration and this wish of Mr. Khan did it- I found his wish really weird but cute at the same time😳 You are always very sweet but creatives are the first inspiration for all of us...we are just chelas😆

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: rajnid68
simple..
hilarious..
awesome. .
seductive. ..

Thanks...😊

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: jasminerose
This is just wonderful. You always come up with so innovative ideas and you write so well that its a complete delight to read your piece. Just amazing. I was mostly a silent reader but writers like you have prompted me to participate. Thank you

Thanks jasmine...welcome aboard😃

Mr.Khan and his weird/cute ideas are the inspiration😛

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: neenabinu
so sweet...bheegi...typical asad and Zoya...
I want that hug onscreen...bas

CVs will tadpao us for a long long time...😆

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: zara-KSG-malik
Amaaazinggg
loved it
but i know nothing of that kind will happen in QH , next day they wont even talk abt it :(

That's why we have fan fictions and OSs😊

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

@ Ankie...yeh mute mode mein comments kyun hain? lolz

where is my jalebi?

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NainaAlex

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: bheegi

CVs will tadpao us for a long long time...😆

Cvs just love to tadpaofy us... 😛

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-Shormi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

OMG!!!wat an awesomistic OS bheegi👏
luvd da way asad ws irritating her...i mean dat rolling on da floor,snoring & da drooling comment😆...asad miya ap toh bade badmash nikle😉...i want sumthing lyk dis 2 happen on da show😛...plus da dialogue asad gave almost at da end of ur OS MASHAALLAH woh mere dil ko chu gaya❤️
all in all maza agaya padke😳