SS:Reminiscing mangalpur. updated! ch5. pg29.(23/09)

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anushreemishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: zoas91

Anushree getting a compliment like that is really encouraging!!
thank you so much!!!😳🤗

glad you like it!! and yes asad is very much aware of his desires for her! :D

you are welcome🤗well a work is worthy of this kind of appreciation...i am glad you find it encouraging😃

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madhvi4gurti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

AMAZING piece of work!!!👏

simply love how you described Asad's feeling n turmoils...all the flashbacks...gave me goosebumps!!!😳

Brother and sister? NO!!! Definitely not! 🤣

awaiting the next update!!!

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princee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

superb ...detailing is gud...thnks 4 d pm

pari

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

great chapter! The feelings were very.well
Described .each. Word described asad plight
Bro.and sos. 😆 no rakshabandhan fr the, 😆

Edited by cutiesanya - 12 years ago

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Wow

Awesome

Feelings were well expressed

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Nai

@zoas91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
you are welcome🤗well a work is worthy of this kind of appreciation...i am glad you find it encouraging😃

😃 mighty hugs! coming your way ! 🤗

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Nai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti
AMAZING piece of work!!!👏
simply love how you described Asad's feeling n turmoils...all the flashbacks...gave me goosebumps!!!😳

Brother and sister? NO!!! Definitely not! 🤣

awaiting the next update!!!

hahahaha well i had to induce that ! becos he was thinking of kissing her on her brows like a brother wipes away the worries a sister feels. though i am not implying asad has any brotherly feelings towards zoya. def not :P atleast not after today's update!🤣

btw...thank you so much. happy you liked the update!

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Nai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
Wow

Awesome

Feelings were well expressed

thank you mahima!! 😃 really glad!

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Nai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: princeegoyal
superb ...detailing is gud...thnks 4 d pm

pari

thank you pari!😳

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rishk

@rishk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

you pretty lil thing! you updated!!!

*yay*

though i still a lil pissed cos you updated late!! 🤔and now see what i got here. no chance of commenting first! *sighs*

what am i gonna do with you!

but but but, my dearest this update was F.A.B.U.L.O.U.S!!!

omg! asad and his pervy brain!!!! way to go. i rather like his thought process😆.

and for a fact i know you do too!!! even more than me...you gutter brained bunny!

such a beautiful blend of emotions and pervyness 🤣

and did you just mention brothers and sister wala feeling? now seriously what have you got there!!! in***t? nevermind i know that idea is just puckish.

coming to the end . the stranger thing. that took my heart away. so aware about the attraction he had towards her but so distant from the feeling lo love that is boiling inside him. so beautifully described. BUT PLEASE. dont call that bench a strange bench!!!

i love that bench!!! *pouting*🐷

i could sit on it forever and count stars. and haunt asad and zoya 🤣

overall, beautiful beautiful update.

ps: pssst when will zoya wake up? it been like what ? 6 days already? 🤣😛

i love you!!!🤗

rishika