SS:Reminiscing mangalpur. updated! ch5. pg29.(23/09) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: rishk

you pretty lil thing! you updated!!!


*yay*

though i still a lil pissed cos you updated late!! 🤔and now see what i got here. no chance of commenting first! *sighs*
what am i gonna do with you!

but but but, my dearest this update was F.A.B.U.L.O.U.S!!!

omg! asad and his pervy brain!!!! way to go. i rather like his thought process😆.

and for a fact i know you do too!!! even more than me...you gutter brained bunny!

such a beautiful blend of emotions and pervyness 🤣

and did you just mention brothers and sister wala feeling? now seriously what have you got there!!! in***t? nevermind i know that idea is just puckish.

coming to the end . the stranger thing. that took my heart away. so aware about the attraction he had towards her but so distant from the feeling lo love that is boiling inside him. so beautifully described. BUT PLEASE. dont call that bench a strange bench!!!
i love that bench!!! *pouting*🐷
i could sit on it forever and count stars. and haunt asad and zoya 🤣

overall, beautiful beautiful update.

ps: pssst when will zoya wake up? it been like what ? 6 days already? 🤣😛

i love you!!!🤗

rishika




now now my sunny if you would have checked earlier you would have seen i had updated long back!!! 😛. dont you crib now!

as for the bro and sis comment i am ignoring it . whatever you said i am ignoring it!! :P plain and simple.!

as for the bench i love it too!! want me to apologize? here.

hey benchy sorry!!! there you had it.
haunt asad and zoya till eternity i do not mind. but NOT IN MY STORY!!😛. i wont let you do that. besides there might be kids here. they would be scared and never read my ss 🤣

ohk enough of bulls***!

i am so glad you like it!!! 😳😃. and i love you so much for honest feedback. dont worry i saw your pm!

love you back 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Loved it! So beautifully written, I really enjoyed it! 😃
Amazing! Amazing! Amazing!
Can't wait for the next update! 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
This was amazing. Loved the way u decribed the feelings.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
That was lovely. Absolutely amazing. Just loved it. Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Awesome! You write very well!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
thoughts clear and precise..
not jumbled up..
his mixed feelings as of now..
knows of her nightmare.
temptations ..
lovely update. .thanxs for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Lovely...Looking forward to reading more.
Thanks fot the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
My comments are going to be mega short due to my college now. I follow 10 or more FF's and come online for just 30 mins. So please dont think i dont like your FF if i dont commnt or leave a short comment.

Cming to the update, it was pure genius. You write beautifully. Loving the whole tension. <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
awesome...loved your story...oh m a big fan of this story now...looking forward to read more...
please update super fast!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by blasterrr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet

Loved it! So beautifully written, I really enjoyed it! 😃

Amazing! Amazing! Amazing!
Can't wait for the next update! 😊 👍🏼


thaaankkk you so much!!!😃

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