SS:Reminiscing mangalpur. updated! ch5. pg29.(23/09) - Page 24

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

So so sorry Urja,

See what lame ass tracks of QH do to my thought process, I can't even get a name right.'😡

My sincere Apologies Urja, now I am digging a pit to hide into that dark hole.😳

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

awesome! very nice, loved it

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

awesome update

pm me when u next update

Originally posted by: aish-au

gr8 update, loved dat u wrote story from dilshad's pov as well.

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

"Zoya spoke almost in a whisper "phuppi? peas?? Dinner's on me huh??? Managing to give out a soft smile

Asad choked out a strangled laugh, he could not believe this woman-girl. Cracking jokes at her own expense. Trust zoya to lighten the mood even when she is suffering. How he wished he could take her suffering away. Envelop her in a hug and comfort her. He gently placed a hand on her throat ,jolting at her burning skin.

"You are too hot zoya!" he exclaimed.

"Why thank you Mr.khan . I try my best! " Zoya said with a dopey grin.

Shaking his head at her dismissal of her ill state."

Loved these two bits of conversation. the update was sooo cute.

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet

"Someday her son would no longer live in the shadow of the past. He will never be his father's son but his mother's pride .

Because she was sure, Zoya's Asad may not follow her, but Ms.Farooqui's , Mr.khan will never let her out of his sight."

Lovely update! So interesting, and super cute!

Dilshaad's perspective was nice to read! 👏 😃

Update soon! 😊

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever

ur an amazing writer! it was beautiful and I just loved it!

Hi Urja!! You know feel free to hit me, thrash me all black and blue for I deserve every single scolding!! I am just so bloody caught up with my classes and my nose running wild! a bad cold, broken laptop and oodles of classes make this bachii pull all her hairs apart!!

Originally posted by: Meself

Hi Urja!! You know feel free to hit me, thrash me all black and blue for I deserve every single scolding!! I am just so bloody caught up with my classes and my nose running wild! a bad cold, broken laptop and oodles of classes make this bachii pull all her hairs apart!!

Anyways the update! It was beautiful...though I half expected Asad's monologue to take over but chalega! Dilshad is grace personified...she is an open book yet remains a mystery. I believe the only sane character in QH. It was really nice to see her emotions run wild for once. Her love and concern for Zoya is simply out of the world and she can so easily sense the fast changing scenes around her. This chapter was quite a treat. I look forward to the update!