FF: Through The Monsoon #2 - Link to #3 on pg 1

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ForbiddenFruit

@ForbiddenFruit

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#801

A vampire bit u or wat? Look how fast u r updating!!!!!
Oh Zoe plz don't cry! Asad stop being such a slow motion wala dilwala...just go sweep her off her feet!( wich is not difficult coz she is sooo adorably clumsy)
I wish u wer d writer of d show! ( I bet u get dat a lot). I really love how u write abt der chemistry...just d simple action of Asad rubbing ointment on her is enough to get zoe all fired up!
This line " He cupped her face with his palm and stroked her cheek lovingly,before pecking her lips casually as if its was the most normal thing to do"...awww...dis line hd me melting lyk an ice cream! I sooo want to see dis in d show! The way u build up der chemistry is just booom booom fffooosh wooosshh*fire crackers exploding* dhamakkka!!!!
Eeeh...I love dis story! And Kabhi khushi kabhi gham...I get it! Aftr all d wonderful fluff galore v hd...I don't mind a lit a littl bit of angst! Bitter-sweet is in! *gets teary-eyed* *sniff sniff* I hv a whole box of tissues ready here...waiting for a 'mooh dho daala by aaasun ' update!
P.S: once more I loveee ur story!
P.P.S: since u r updating at a vampire speed...I won't pester ya to update soon!
P.P.S: heck,no! M bribing u wid my moms home-made chocolate chip cookies to update soon! Can't wait for d update!

Edited by ForbiddenFruit - 11 years ago

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: webuser7
😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Kya yaar, kaisi rondhu part dedicate ki Monica aur mujhe?

Here I have to agree. Bechari Zoya ko rula diya, aur woh bhi itna sara 😭 (Par phir bhi abhi to usse tasali dedo! She has to know he's a doorknob who doesn't realize what he says and when he says it 😆)

Allah Miyaan, what's wrong with Mr. Horny umm I mean Mr. Romantic Ahmed Khan? Emran Hashmi ka bhoot aaya hai kya unpar? 😲 Kiss pe kiss barsa rahe hai! A kissing spree!! ❤️

🤣

That is all.

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: ForbiddenFruit
A vampire bit u or wat? Look how fast u r updating!!!!!
Oh Zoe plz don't cry! Asad stop being such a slow motion wala dilwala...just go sweep her off her feet!( wich is not difficult coz she is sooo adorably clumsy)
I wish u wer d writer of d show! ( I bet u get dat a lot). I really love how u write abt der chemistry...just d simple action of Asad rubbing ointment on her is enough to get zoe all fired up!
This line " He cupped her face with his palm and stroked her cheek lovingly,before pecking her lips casually as if its was the most normal thing to do"...awww...dis line hd me melting lyk an ice cream! I sooo want to see dis in d show! The way u build up der chemistry is just booom booom fffooosh wooosshh*fire crackers exploding* dhamakkka!!!!
Eeeh...I love dis story! And Kabhi khushi kabhi gham...I get it! Aftr all d wonderful fluff galore v hd...I don't mind a lit a littl bit of angst! Bitter-sweet is in! *gets teary-eyed* *sniff sniff* I hv a whole box of tissues ready here...waiting for a 'mooh dho daala by aaasun ' update!
P.S: once more I loveee ur story!
P.P.S: since u r updating at a vampire speed...I won't pester ya to update soon!
P.P.S: heck,no! M bribing u wid my moms home-made chocolate chip cookies to update soon! Can't wait for d update!

@ bold and underlined: Comment was too good! Just hilarious! 🤣

I though Mr. Vampire Ahmed Khan was guzzling Zoya's neck!! 🤣 🤣

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: mochhug

Door knob? I thought he was a tube light!! Zoya needs to "experiment" more to figure out which buttons she needs to press to turn him on!! I meant the tube light! 😉 On second thoughts, she doesn't have to try too hard!! 😆

Bahut masti mazak hogaya. Aaj ke liye kaafi hai! I enjoyed exchanging posts with you after so long. Take care kiddo! Smile! It increases your face value!! 😃

Edited by webuser7 - 11 years ago

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#805

Aww!! Zoya 😭...and Asad is oblivious😡 and now Zoya feels Asad thinks of it as an experiment?? 😔

Zoya's hurt/pain and Asad's oblivion was very well written!!👏

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Manchalateriore

@Manchalateriore

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#806

great update sad though but i love it cause i was feeling sad anyways

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#807

awesum update ...its sad ..but i guess zoya wont b able to keep it to herself for long ...lets c how asad reacts to his stupidness ...
waiting for d nxt part ...update soon ..

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sgksg3

@sgksg3

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#808

Sad yet nice part ...nice to see asad acceptance towards love and showing his love in casual manner not exaggerating kiss topic ..
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Its cute ..i hope yeh QH mein bhi asad hug scene se aagey toh badhe...lol

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LaVita-E-Bella

@LaVita-E-Bella

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#809

Ahhh!! Both the updates! Amazingg! I loveeedd it! But soo sad :(.

Ugh stupid Ayaan, why did he have to ruin everything! I was actually hoping he saw them, that would have been hilarious. I knew there was a misunderstanding coming though. No cute moment happens without something following it lol. I hate Asya misunderstandings :/. I hope you get everything cleared up next update! I want some more sweet and cute Asya moments (especially since God knows what will happen next week in the actual show!)

Poor Zoya, she thinks he just wants to have fun and experiment with her since she made it seem that way. Aww I totally felt what she was going through though. After a first kiss and first moment of intimacy, a thousand thoughts cross the mind, if he'll ever talk to you again, what he thinks about you, if he's even serious about you. You feel like an idiot. But she should still think about why he's still being so caring towards her! At least she didn't go off on him (unless you have that planned for next update).

Poor Asad too (even though he had it coming, should've just told Ayaan the truth!) He's an idiot if he can't figure out why she's upset. Obviously she heard you, she was right in the bathroom! He's so caring though..I love this Asad, naughty but sweet. Seriously I like him better than the current Asad in the show right now. I actually love this whole story better than what's going on in the show right now! I can picture everything and see it happening! You're such a good writer!

Btw did Zoya fall asleep in Asad's room? What if Dilshaad and Tanveer see her there? Uh oh.

Loved how Asad pecked her on the lips as if it was the most normal thing ever. Everything he did was just so natural.