FF: Through The Monsoon #2 - Link to #3 on pg 1

Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Agay aap, goingreen ji! Aur kaise! Dhamakedar update ke saath 🤣 (Sorry ji, aaj humne thode bohot films dekhe hain, toh hum bhi thod se filmy hogay hain 😆)

Can I hug you please? This was so sad I want to cry along with Zoya. Oblivious Ahmed Khan!!! 😡😡😡 Well thats all men actually. But yeah, he's a little more clueless than some 😆

Please tell me he heard her through the door? He couldn't have gotten that far after shutting the door, right? Ugh!

*Edited: I just reread it and realized she waited for the FRONT DOOR to close 😆 Oh well. He better get an earful when he comes back. Blind Ahmed Khan! 😡*

Aww but I loved it nevertheless. The way you portrayed her hurt, and her realization (albeit totally mistaken, but still understandable) of why he must be acting like this. But Zoya, darling, why would he peck you again, if it was just one experiment? Or hold your hand? Sigh. I can't blame her though. After hearing that from his mouth, even I would misconstrue every action as an act of pity, or as Zoya put it, experiment.

And THANK YOU for the dedication

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#792

hum bhi hai line mein

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-Aswini-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#793

yea I was correct in predicting to whom this update ll be dedicated😆

ll read the update and edit my comment😉

My poor Zoya😭 Asad don't yo know wat the hell yo just did? man he is kissing her so casually😆 I don think Prude khan ll be able to do this in the show😆

Great update😃 I know yo wont let them suffer fr a long time😳

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hsvs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#794

Cliffhangers pe chhod dena koi aap se seekhain! 😆

Sad part - yes, please continue ASAP - Since today is Sunday, can we please request another super fast update? 😆

Yes, yes we are greedy - and you are a wonderful writer! 😃

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anushreemishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

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What an update...this was a sad but a beautifully written update...so comedy and romance isn't the only thing that you excel at...everything is your forte and you proved it today...
Aww my poor zoya heard everything 😭
So even after such a long making pot session Mr.no longer prude Ahmed khan hadn't had enough...he is so busy in nuzzzling his nose in her hair that he doesn't even sense that something is wrong with her...he is still slow and oblivious...oh so I was right Mr.khan dis take zoya's complaint under advisement and shed off some of his clothing layers...making things easier for zoya Mr.khan but the next time may not come so soon you have just made things a lot harder for yourself...
The classic fall and catch...hayee I missed these...must have been really hard for zoya to control her feelings when she was so cloe to him...poor zoya she wants to get away from him asap but her feelings have a mimd of their own when she is in close proximity with him...as if falling in his arms wasn't enoufh of a torture that he had to carry her in his arms coz of her twisted ankle...
I thought he actually left after giving her his trademark glare but he went to get the appointment...he really is oblivious...he can't see that she is not in pain because of het twisted ankle but something else
I just loved how you portrayed zoya's feelings here...she is so hurt by his words that instead of lashing out which she would normally do she has shelled herself...I was nothing but an experiment;these lines broke my heart...my poor zoya...the moment she thinks she means something to her mr.khan her dreams are shattered
I just hope asad sees through her soon
So excited for the next one...

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Jassieg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#796

That was awesome yet sad. Update soon.

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Hafizakhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Another great update. Thanks for doing each update so quickly!

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Curiousmind

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Posted: 11 years ago

#798

Poor Zoya. Dumb Asad. Frustrated reader. Brilliant writer.

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Maryam Hassan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#799

Wow superb update
Its a little sad bt its okay atleast u updated early
Poor Zoya...even if anyone was in her shoe he/she would ve thought on the same line cuz after the moment they share he's still saying that their nikaah is nakli so she's bound to be sad

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webuser7

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Posted: 11 years ago

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😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Kya yaar, kaisi rondhu part dedicate ki Monica aur mujhe? Meri Zoya ko rulakar, aapko kya mila? 😡 Dedicate karna hai toh ek jabardast romcom kardijiye na, please! 😃 Now I know the reason behind your username. Previously, I thought it was something to do with being environmentally friendly, but now I know you are going green with jealousy! 🤢Aapse Zoya ki khushi dekhi nahi jaati kya?! Kahi Mr. Khan pe dil toh nahi aagaya?! Bechari Zoya ka dil tod diya aur ankle bhi twist kiya! Bahut dardanak!!!

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Sorry if I went a bit overboard. It was completely in jest. 😉 Koi mujhe report mat kardena!! 🤣

Jokes apart, you are a fantastic writer and I am a big fan and have been an avid reader from the start! Thanks for the special mention! 🤗

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Allah Miyaan, what's wrong with Mr. Horny umm I mean Mr. Romantic Ahmed Khan? Emran Hashmi ka bhoot aaya hai kya unpar? 😲 Kiss pe kiss barsa rahe hai! A kissing spree!! ❤️

Ayaan did one redeeming act before leaving and that was leaving the water puddle behind. Bhai ho toh aisa! Zoya had her typical almost fall and Asad caught her in the typical RK (not me but Raj Kapoor!!) pose. This time he carried her in those strong arms. Wonder when we'll get to see that on the show. It's been sooo long. I digress!

Zoya ki akal uski ghutno mein hai kya? Ankle pain has transferred to the knees??!! Why can't she see how concerned he is and how much he cares? Silly girl! 😡 Wish she'd point blank ask him about his feelings and then it would be worth watching Asad's reaction! As he is now ready to take on the mantle of serial kisser (only with Zoya 😃), I would hope he doesn't stammer "Woh... Mein ... Actually"!

Anxiously waiting for the "KaBhi" Khusi portions! Until then👍🏼👍🏼

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