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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#821

Originally posted by: sadafchoudhury
great update sad though but i love it cause i was feeling sad anyways

I'm glad you liked it, but why are you sad?? ): Hope you cheer up soon!!

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

Originally posted by: LaVita-E-Bella
Ahhh!! Both the updates! Amazingg! I loveeedd it! But soo sad :(.
Ugh stupid Ayaan, why did he have to ruin everything! I was actually hoping he saw them, that would have been hilarious. I knew there was a misunderstanding coming though. No cute moment happens without something following it lol. I hate Asya misunderstandings :/. I hope you get everything cleared up next update! I want some more sweet and cute Asya moments (especially since God knows what will happen next week in the actual show!)
Poor Zoya, she thinks he just wants to have fun and experiment with her since she made it seem that way. Aww I totally felt what she was going through though. After a first kiss and first moment of intimacy, a thousand thoughts cross the mind, if he'll ever talk to you again, what he thinks about you, if he's even serious about you. You feel like an idiot. But she should still think about why he's still being so caring towards her! At least she didn't go off on him (unless you have that planned for next update).
Poor Asad too (even though he had it coming, should've just told Ayaan the truth!) He's an idiot if he can't figure out why she's upset. Obviously she heard you, she was right in the bathroom! He's so caring though..I love this Asad, naughty but sweet. Seriously I like him better than the current Asad in the show right now. I actually love this whole story better than what's going on in the show right now! I can picture everything and see it happening! You're such a good writer!
Btw did Zoya fall asleep in Asad's room? What if Dilshaad and Tanveer see her there? Uh oh.
Loved how Asad pecked her on the lips as if it was the most normal thing ever. Everything he did was just so natural.

Who doesn't hate it when Asad and Zoya have misunderstandings haha, but I needed it for the story for the time being :p I'm so touched that you like it better than the actual show despite it being sad in my story too!! Oh and Asad carried her to her room, haha so no problem when Dilshaad and Tanveer come home (: Really glad you liked it!! (:

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#823

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Asad miyan what have you gotten yourself into. I am too excited to see zoya lash at him and then the angry Asad manaofying her... that would be just amazing. Just keep updating in this pace please. I love to read this.

Doubt I'll be having a big showdown between Asad and Zoya haha, I have something totally different planned. Hope you like it anyway!! And glad you're enjoying it thus far too (:

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sonia555

@sonia555

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

Nice update plz continue soon 😊.

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

So sad.. for zoya.. she think the kiss is a experiment...
Asad have no idea... what zoya is thinking... and he still think
everything is fine..

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

Kya??? Another update??? Tum theek toh ho, goingreen ji?

Girl, you are on FIRE!!!

Itni sad update 😔 Bechari Zoya...I feel for her. Lekin, now she has to open her mouth and just say whatever she wants to and what she feels. Communication is key to a better and healthier relationship (no no, mein koi counselor nahin hoon, this is just my own logic wala knowledge) 😆

He pressed his body against hers and dropped a kiss on her neck

(As much as I want be upset with Mr. Khan but if he keeps doing stuff like this then even I won't be able to resist)

The last paragraph was just sad 😔 I really hope they will talk to each other ASAP. If Mr. Khan really feels something for her and wants this nikaah to happen, then he better take some action before its too late.

By the way, as much as I hate to ask it, lekin yeh Tanveer kaha hai? Its a bit scary that she has not been there for the last few updates, so I am scared that she might be back with an evil plan just the day before Friday or on the day itself. 😕

I am ready for the gham thing, only because you have promised that it wont last for too long...warna, I know where to find you! 😈😆 I don't think its necessary to say, lekin phir bhi formality ke liye keh dethi hoon: update karo jaldi se, please!

Thank you for this quick update 😃🤗

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

Originally posted by: mochhug
Goingreenji (Thanks me2you 😉) Aap zarah update karne ki merbhani karengi? 🤣

Welcome ji 😊 I think its because of the izzat we give her that we are getting the updates one after the other...kuch toh asar hua hai 😆

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#829

Aw, bechari Zoya!! The more she tried to stay away from him, the more she accidentally goes closer to him. I hope her foot gets better and she gives a big mouthful to Mr. Khan, he totally deserves it!! But, i hope he clears the misunderstanding she has, because he doesn't really believe it either, so he could at least tell her that, i guess!! Anyways, thank you for this wonderful update, lots of love.x