FAASLE II: QH FF. Links to Threads I and III pg 1 - Page 72

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

151.5k

Users

140

Likes

2.7k

Frequent Posters

bheegi thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
Part 27...continued from above (see first section above)


ZOYA'S HOUSE:

Zoya unlocked the door to her private studio and led Farhan in with her. She bolted the door behind them.

"Here Farhan," she took out a baby canvas and some finger paints, "yeh tumhare liye hai bachcha. Do what you want."

Farhan resisted the paint on his hands but once they started making fun patterns, he enjoyed the art, his little fingers imprinted on the canvas. Zoya was pleased to see the progress. Till a few weeks ago, Farhan would have a temper tantrum each time his hands got dirty or a different texture touched his skin but gradually, he was beginning to enjoy normal childhood activities. Finger painting was the best way to help him learn how to feel and accept the world around him.

Once Farhan was settled, Zoya sat in front of her incomplete painting, lost in her thoughts as usual. This studio was her sanctuary, her private world that no one had access to, but her (and now Farhan.) To keep herself distracted, she had a full time career and now responsibility for Farhan but this was her time with herself- without which her day was unfinished and her desire to live incomplete.

This was where her Mr. Khan resided.

Kahin to dil mein yaadon ki ek sooli gad jaati hai

kahin har ek tasveer bahut hi dhundhli pad jaati hai

koi nai duniya ke naye rangon mein khush rehta hai

koi sab kuchh paa ke bhi ye man hi man kehta hai

kehne ko saath apne ek duniya chalti hai

per chhup ke is dil mein tanhaai palti hai

Bas yaad saath hai

teri yaad saath hai

teri yaad saath hai

teri yaad saath hai

The walls of the studio are covered with numerous paintings and enlarged photographs of Asad from the cruise and their Mumbai darshan trip. Each time she walked into the room, she felt heart swell with happiness and her faith in her love reinstated.

With a brush in hand, she caressed the incomplete portrait in front of her. Soon, she was lost in an imaginary monologue with Asad,"It's been almost five years since I saw you on the Skype call. Was it just yesterday, I received the letter in the mail that they were not able to match your DNA sample to the corpse in the morgue? While everyone was relieved, I was not surprised. Even though people think I am in denial, I know you will come back one day. Jaante hain Mr. Khan, if it were not for Rashid uncle, my struggles in this city could have been more agonizing. I was nave to think I could do it on my own. At 21, the world seems more conquerable especially for a young girl who was (and still is) madly in love with you. I sometimes wonder when and how did I fall so irrevocably in love with you, Mr. Khan? Perhaps, I will never be able to answer that question but when I look around at the walls of my Taj Mahal, I know why. I have been working on your portrait for the past five months but just haven't been able to get that expression right- wo jo aap mujhey dekh kar choti si smile karte the- the one you were trying to suppress but couldn't!" She pouted and tried a few strokes on the canvas, " lagta hai yeh painting bhi aapka intezaar kar rahi hai!"

Kahin to beete kal ki jade dil mein hi utar jaati hain

kahin jo dhaage toote to malaayein bhikar jaati hain

koi dil mein jagah nayi baaton ke liye rakhta hai

koi apni palkon par yaadon ke diye rakhta hai

kehne ko saath apne ek duniya chalti hai

per chhup ke is dil mein tanhaai palti hai

Bas yaad saath hai

teri yaad saaath hai

teri yaad saaath hai

teri yaad saaath hai

.

Five years ago, when Rashid had revealed his relationship with Asad, Zoya didn't know how to react. She sat staring at the man responsible for her phoophi's miseries but was shocked when he wept like a child for his son. That day, he had poured his heart out to Zoya. He was a man misunderstood; a man who had been betrayed by others and by fate. He had taken some bad decisions in life but had been punished harshly for these mistakes. While Ghafoor had deceived him in business, in a moment of weakness he had betrayed Dilshaad's trust by cheating with another woman.

It didn't take long for Zoya to befriend everyone at Rashid's house.

At first, Shireen didn't strike her as a typical home wrecker but Dilshaad's pain prevented Zoya from ever developing a deep bond with Shireen. Zoya often wondered if a man should suffer all his life for mistakes made years ago? She discovered that Rashid's tremendous love for Dilshaad, Asad and Najma had helped him survive the seventeen years of separation. For her, it was an irony that Dilshaad rejected her because of her abbu but Rashid accepted her despite of her abbu. Rashid's pain from the separation was worse than his animosity for Ghafoor Ahmed Siddiqui.

Zoya was indebted to Rashid as Ghafoor left her to fend for herself and learn to 'grow up' before returning to the US, but her adopted abbu, Rashid made sure she had a home and family in Mumbai.

Their mutual love for Asad, Dilshaad and Najma helped them bond very quickly. Although ostracized by Dilshaad, both took care of her from afar.

Zoya was hurt by Najma's snub but later sensed her predicament was a result of Dilshaad's wishes. Zoya often followed them to their hospital visits to make sure all was well. Dr. Ali became an ally and kept her informed of Dilshaad's progress. He would download her reports from the cancer department and email them to Zoya.

When Zoya found out about her Dilshaad's relapse, Rashid helped her raise money by selling some of her paintings at a decent price. As an anonymous donor, Zoya was happy to assist with the cost of the expensive but life saving bone marrow transplant.

Five years ago, Rashid helped Zoya set up a new division at the Bombay art house- a studio to encourage budding artists display their talent at the prestigious gallery. If Asad was the first person to recognize her talent on the ship, his father helped blossom Zoya's talent to new heights. In these past five years, she has established herself as a leader amongst the circle of young artists and painters.

Rashid and Zoya have also bonded over exchanging notes on Asad, Dilshaad and Najma. As a result, Zoya knows a lot about Asad's childhood and Rashid has gotten to know his son's tastes, habits, caring nature and immense sense of righteousness and love for his family.

Despite becoming good friends with Rashid, there is a part of his life Zoya is completely oblivious of.

She often wonders-

"Why does he have a separate office in the basement?"

"Why does he never give interviews to the press?"

"Why does he never show his face in public?"

"Why does he not attend any of our exhibitions?"

"Why does his name not appear on any of our official documents?"

"Why does he not pay for phoophi's medical expenses and insist they are paid through my account (not that I mind)?"

"Why did he send his personal bodyguard in guise as phoophi's chauffeur? Was there a threat to phoophi's life?"

"Why does he feel guilty about Mr. Khan's accident? It wasn't his fault the ship had an accident"

These are just some questions about him that still remain unanswered.

Her equation with Ayaan is a little different. Just like his love hate relationship with his elusive half brother, his relationship with Zoya has gone through various ups and downs.

Finally, they have become friends now.

It happened because of two reasons-

Humeira- Zoya's half sister

and

Farhan- Zoya's nephew.

AYAAN's OFFICE:

"So, Mr. AK- is that how you want to be addressed?"

'Yes Mr. Ayaan." Asad sat across with his sunglasses and a deadpan expression.

"I like that you have a background in the defense services. You are retired now?"

'Yes, I am."

"Alright. I will introduce you to my son Farhan. Please meet me at my home tomorrow."

"So, I have the job?"

"Yes AK!"

Both men shook hands and smiled at each other.

'to be contd...
Edited by bheegi - 12 years ago
-LazyLamhe- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Res :)
Unres


Dhamakedaar update!! Amazingly written!!

Never did I expect a 5 year leap!!..and it started with Farhan calling Zoya Ammi..I thought what twist now?? later relaxed when I knew he was Ayaan's son!!
Hmm so Dilshaad was harsh to Zoya for her own good..and now she wants to meet her again..Good!!
And Karan Wahi??😆 That was a surprise!!😉
Ok so, Asad was imprisoned all this while and wants to complete his mission first!!
Zoya and her studio's part was very well written.
Good that Zoya knows the relation between Asad and Rashid and is also curious about Rashid.

I have a doubt though..Humeira being Zoya's half sister...Did I miss something in the earlier parts??😲

And Asad will look out for Farhaan now..Next update sees Zoya???

p.s-Apt song "Main Jahaan Rahoon" for this update!!


Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago
metoyou thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Haila!!! 😲 A five year leap?!!! Zor ka jhatka hai zoro se laga!

The first paragraph got me shocked: Farhan is calling Zoya 'ammi'. But then meri brain ke light bulb got on and I knew that Farhan must be Ayaan and Humeira's son. Does that mean that Humeira is no more?

So let me get this straight: After the ship accident, Asad landed in Dubai and got imprisoned. The question is for what? Someone from Istanbul helped him. Anwar jiju ya phir Zeenat appi?
DIlshaad ammi and Najmi are thinking that Asad is dead and he has not tried to contact them in those five years.

The Taj Mahal...what a nice way to bring this memory of Asad and Zoya back 😳

The Dilshad-Najma scene was really touching. I knew that Dilshaad ammi can't be that insensitive. She still cares for Zoya and vice versa. Love the way Zoya sees Mr.Khan's family as her responsibility. True, Rashid has helped her a lot with it but still woh apne aap ko Mr. Khan ke pariwaar se alag nahin kar sakti. Is Rashid trying to find a way for his redemption by secretly helping out Dilshaad?

Bechara Arjun is no more 😭 He had a small role in this one but I am glad that he held a great importance in Asad's life. Arjun is out and Karan Wahi is in aur woh bhi Najma ke saath, cute couple 😳 Thank God, yaha koi Imran naam ka ladka nahin hai...

umeed aur yakeen ke saath hi maine zindagi jeeni seekhi hai. (And she is still living in that hope and trust that Mr. Khan will come back)

"Kyun umeed rakh raha hoon main? (Don't lose hope Mr. Khan. Issi umeed pe toh Zoya aaj tak aapka intezaar kar rahe hain. She still remembers her promise)

Kismat is bringing Asad and Zoya back together. Wait... Eid is coming up, does that mean that Asad and Zoya will meet at this holy day again? One thing is for sure: Asad ko bhi zor ka jhatka lagega when he comes to know about what has happened in all these years, especially with Zoya.
Asad will be the bodyguard of Farhan...entering Ayaan and most importantly Zoya's life. I can see a lot of turns and twists coming up. Ayaan's character is still a bit vague, is he a bit shady? He might turn out to be negative when he finds out that Asad is his stepbrother?


This was a very unexpected chapter, Di. It is very well written. Some things are clear but there are still lots of questions marks, but I am sure waqt aane par we will get those answers as well😉 I can see a lot twist and turns coming up and I am ready for it. Drama, tears, separation, unexpected love and romance, I am ready for anything! Bring it on 😃

Edited by me2you - 12 years ago
Surish thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Edited by Surish - 12 years ago
WaqtZaya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 12 years ago
And the birthday cant get any better 😎
-khaleesi- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Could this FF be any more epic?! I can't find a worthy adjective for your story. You deserve standing ovations and rounds of applause. 👏
I thought Ayaan married Zoya until Asad's monologue (which was all kinds of awesome btw). You made me hold my breath for confirmation. I could have died you know. 😆
I was thinking Dilshad was way too callous with Zoya. Now I know why.
Farhan's autistic. interesting.
I can't get the song outta my head now. So apt. I died of feels!
Zoya gave her own Bone Marrow to Dilshad. *Feeling proud!*
Can't wait for Zoya to find why Rashid blames himself for the accident. Good thing that they've bonded. 👍🏼
Zoya's personal Taj Mehal sent me straight to AsYaland! Still very much there. 😆
Please maintain your pace of updating the FF. 😊






Edited by -KSGsmitten- - 12 years ago
jasminerose thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...five years leap...I didn't expect but its a great idea. Again an amazing update with lots to unfold in future. Looking forward to read whats up next.
Gudduluvs thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...amzing uodayte..u took 5 yrs leap...waitng for asad zoya meeting...hope asad doesn't take zoya wrongly...thnks...
.Kiran. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
You know when I started reading this part, I thought Zoya married Ayaan and Farhan is their son but I knew you wouldn't do that to us😆 5 years leap was a surprise but so much happened:O Loved Dilshaad and Najma's convo. It was very emotional and Najma has found someone for her. Awwwhh<3 Karan Wahi😆 Perfect!So Asad was imprisoned?:O Good to have him back and OH MY GOD! He'll be in Ayaan's house. Another shocker our way when they both see each other! I wonder how Asad will react to all this and when he finds out about Rashid. God this is all so exciting. Can't wait to read more! Zoya's Taj Mahal<3 Loved this update as usual. I won't lie, I teared up in some parts!<3 Can we expect Asad-Zoya to meet in next update? Do I needa comment on your writing skills? You write so well and you choose perfect songs<3 Kudos and Continue soon!
.Kiran. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
Btw someone helped 'em in Istanbul? Was it Zoya's jeeju?;)

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".