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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Ohk firstly i am so so so sad for commenting so late😭...i know you won't mind but my heart broke a little...the one day that i wasn't constantly stalking your post and i missed it,your best and your favourite wala update i guess and i missed it and by so much😭

Well coming to the update...it was amazing as usual and so so unpredictable...i didn't expect a leap and that too a five year long leap😲and well at first wen i read zoya being addressed as a mom my heart leapt with joy thinking is asa really back coz i knew for sure that zoya couldn't have moved on with her life but then wen her ayaan addressing her i feared that the most dreaded scenario has come true but two lines into into conversation nd i knew no no nothing like that has happened and l knew for sure that Farhan is not zoya's son...

A karan wahi fan are you di?😃well i knew Dilshad couln't stay mad an angry at zoya foreever..I think she is hurt more for hurting zoya...she did everything for zoya and her future only if she knew asad n his family were and will be her everything😊Zoya paid for dilshad's traetment well that wasn't a surprise a daughter would do anything for her mother but m glad ilshad has finally agreed to meet zoya...

yes,my asad is back and yes yes yes my guess was right he did end up in Dubai😃and i have a strong feeling that the tip off was from Zeenat as she had visited Dubai the same time...

Agar zinda raha, tho hamesha unke paas rahoonga aur agar nahin, tho unse aur zyaada door kaise jaa sakta hoon?"this line brought tears to my eyes di and i am still pretty shooken up...M proud of asad a true soldier of his nation...so asad is going to come across his past really soon...him driving by his house and getting overwhelmed was beautiful di and how unfortunate that a brother couldn't be present wen her sister ha been proposed for marriage..."Kyun umeed rakh raha hoon main? Of course she won't be here. Five years is a long time. Only if he knew that fo zoya time has stool still since the day he went missing..

i love how zoya his helping Farhan to live as a normal child reminds of the serial 'aapki antara'...the idea of her Taj Mahal and being only estricted to her and Farhan shows the purity and sanctity of the relationship that has grown stronger over the years...the monologue was beautiful di...lagta hai yeh painting bhi aapka intezaar kar rahi hai!"you manage to moisten my eyes and give me goose bumps yet again👏

I knew zoya would develop a geat bond with Rashid...my go m on fie...my guesses are coming true..aren't they?😃gaffur just left zoya never ever bothered to check up on her😕

So zoya doesn't know about Rashid's illegal activities and his involvement in asad's disapperance...i wonnder what turn their relationship will take wen she comes to know the truth..ohk so ayaan and zoya have a strange relationship expected...she loved humeira's son which I guessed in the beginning as her own but Humeira being Zoya's half sister was a complete shocker...so i guess Razia and gaffur have two daughters Zeenat and Humeira assuming Gaffur wasn't that a ladies' man😆

Ohk so zoya developing such a strong bond with Farhan and humeira being no where in this update i think either she passed away or she is really really sick but i hope its neither

So finally the brothers are face to face..i wonder wen will asad come fact to face with zoya and discover that his father is alive and has been in mumbai all along... will he misunderstand her wen he comes to know that she has been living with Rashid all along?

P.S.-I know i can't possibly explain how brilliant this chapter was👏i love you bass🤗and m sad and zorry for being so late😭i failed as a stalker this time😭

Edited by anushreemishra - 12 years ago

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-
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Dhamakedaar update!! Amazingly written!!

Never did I expect a 5 year leap!!..and it started with Farhan calling Zoya Ammi..I thought what twist now?? later relaxed when I knew he was Ayaan's son!!
Hmm so Dilshaad was harsh to Zoya for her own good..and now she wants to meet her again..Good!!
And Karan Wahi??😆 That was a surprise!!😉
Ok so, Asad was imprisoned all this while and wants to complete his mission first!!
Zoya and her studio's part was very well written.
Good that Zoya knows the relation between Asad and Rashid and is also curious about Rashid.

I have a doubt though..Humeira being Zoya's half sister...Did I miss something in the earlier parts??😲 Thanks honeybunch. I will reveal details about this relationship later...just wanted to throw it in so u guys might wonder why Zoya is so close to Farhan

And Asad will look out for Farhaan now..Next update sees Zoya???

p.s-Apt song "Main Jahaan Rahoon" for this update!! Thanks,...i love that song

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: me2you
Haila!!! 😲 A five year leap?!!! Zor ka jhatka hai zoro se laga!

The first paragraph got me shocked: Farhan is calling Zoya 'ammi'. But then meri brain ke light bulb got on and I knew that Farhan must be Ayaan and Humeira's son. Does that mean that Humeira is no more? wait for next few parts on this one..

So let me get this straight: After the ship accident, Asad landed in Dubai and got imprisoned.

he was held captive by someone

The question is for what? Someone from Istanbul helped him. Anwar jiju ya phir Zeenat appi?

possibly😉

DIlshaad ammi and Najmi are thinking that Asad is dead and he has not tried to contact them in those five years.

he couldn't because he was in captivity...he just got released...details later

The Taj Mahal...what a nice way to bring this memory of Asad and Zoya back 😳

The Dilshad-Najma scene was really touching. I knew that Dilshaad ammi can't be that insensitive. She still cares for Zoya and vice versa. Love the way Zoya sees Mr.Khan's family as her responsibility. True, Rashid has helped her a lot with it but still woh apne aap ko Mr. Khan ke pariwaar se alag nahin kar sakti. Is Rashid trying to find a way for his redemption by secretly helping out Dilshaad? yes, he is

Bechara Arjun is no more 😭 He had a small role in this one but I am glad that he held a great importance in Asad's life. Arjun is out and Karan Wahi is in aur woh bhi Najma ke saath, cute couple 😳 Thank God, yaha koi Imran naam ka ladka nahin hai...

umeed aur yakeen ke saath hi maine zindagi jeeni seekhi hai. (And she is still living in that hope and trust that Mr. Khan will come back)

"Kyun umeed rakh raha hoon main? (Don't lose hope Mr. Khan. Issi umeed pe toh Zoya aaj tak aapka intezaar kar rahe hain. She still remembers her promise)

Kismat is bringing Asad and Zoya back together. Wait... Eid is coming up, does that mean that Asad and Zoya will meet at this holy day again? One thing is for sure: Asad ko bhi zor ka jhatka lagega when he comes to know about what has happened in all these years, especially with Zoya. No doubt about that one😆
Asad will be the bodyguard of Farhan...entering Ayaan and most importantly Zoya's life. I can see a lot of turns and twists coming up. Ayaan's character is still a bit vague, is he a bit shady? He might turn out to be negative when he finds out that Asad is his stepbrother?

wait and see...yes, Ayaan is not a completely white character

This was a very unexpected chapter, Di. It is very well written. Some things are clear but there are still lots of questions marks, but I am sure waqt aane par we will get those answers as well😉 I can see a lot twist and turns coming up and I am ready for it. Drama, tears, separation, unexpected love and romance, I am ready for anything! Bring it on 😃

yes, I know there were a lot of details in this one...i will start clarifying things gradually. I wanted to make sure Asad and Zoya were covered in this chapter and a little bit of the events that happened in past 5 years. Now the web shall start untangling😃

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aish-au

@aish-au

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

love ur storyline, can't wait 4 asad and zoya 2 meet

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

😲Sangeeta, now that update was a stunner! Fast paced tho pehle se hi tha, is mein tho 5 saal ka leap! Wah! Twist isse kehte hain! Completely unpredictable! 😉

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Some highlights for me:

Farhan: Bless you for saying Autism is not a handicap. Loved the way Farhan is OK with physical contact with Zoya and dabbles in finger painting. Normally such kids avoid social contact, right? Shows how special Zoya is! Aren't autistic kids also gifted, meaning their brain is especially developed/advanced in something? Ex. Dustin Hoffman's character in Rainman had a photographic memory. Will Farhan have a "gift"?
Main jahaan rahoon: What a beautiful song! I am currently listening to it! It actually made me cry thinking of the lovers separating!! Where's that box of Kleenex when you need it? As you said, we are getting unpredictably emotional as we "age"!! Damn the Fateh Alis (No offense meant. I am a big fan). Their songs are so good. The emotional ones are so soulful and moving!
Humeira: is Zoya's half sister?! Huh?! 😕 From which parent? Siddiqui? Who's the mother Razia? That would make her Zeenat's sister. Another mother? Siddiqui had 3 women in his life? How did Rashid allow Siddiqui's daughter to marry his son? Why do I feel Humeira is Zainab's daughter? Did that contribute to her suicide? Where is Humeira? Multiple personality disorder issue? Did she "inherit" some faulty genes from Zainab?
ASAD IS BACK! Woohoo! Poor thing was a POW. Tip from Istanbul? Hmm! Anwar? Or someone who knows Rashid? Waiting for AK to come face to face with Zoya. Hope he does not misunderstand Farhan to be her son. But, she will recognize him, beard or no beard! Waiting to see how it unfolds.
Asad said "Agar zinda raha, tho hamesha unke paas rahoonga". Will he quit the Navy after this mission is completed? So, he does not remember (yet) Ayaan Khan or the Art house. Interesting! Of course, 5 yrs of being a POW has taken a toll. I guess it will click in place when he meets Zoya. He was instrumental in getting her there. So, indirectly he did help her in her time of need. Has Zoya been calling the Navy periodically for news about him? She knows the body was not his. Do Dilshad and Najma know?
Zoya: is a champ! Made a life for herself, bonded with Rashid, anonymously funded Dilshad's treatment, is taking care of an autistic child and above all has made a Taj Mahal for her Mr. Khan! What a woman! 👏
Rashid: glad he took in Zoya. But, he is still a weak man if he took to drinking! Lets hope he had a hand in the tip from Istanbul. Loved the fact that he still took in Zoya in spite of knowing she is Siddiqui's daughter! Only for Asad, Najma and Dilshad!!
Karan Wahi? Really? 🤣
Dilshad Najma scene was nice. So Dilshad is not against Zoya.

I love how your dialogues keep in mind the Muslim/Urdu way of speaking, so one sentence felt out of place:

Ayaan touched her shoulder slightly, "mujhey garv hai tum par."

I think "naaz" would have been more appropriate than "garv"! Hey, you wanted some critique to keep you grounded. That's all I could come up with!!😆

Will wait for all the questions to be answered in future updates. Love your story! Please update soon if possible!! 😊

Edited by webuser7 - 12 years ago

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#736

oh this was AAAmazing.. I went through the previous pages thinking I missed a chapter but no. this was indeed a leap. oh boy, I just couldn't digest the fact that Farhaan & Zoe had a blood relation but now it's ok, but still I didn't get it how?

tears kept running down till the end of this part. the Dilshad Najma convo was so emotional.

I really appreciate Rashid's help to Zoe in letting her settle down here. his story is really heart wrenching though it was his mistakes that caused it.

Asad was held hostage. I knew of course Asda was alive. I know he must be dying to see Zoe after his indirect proposal. he'll be so proud of his love, the day when he sees her living only with his memories.

Zoe's Taj mahal really had me crying and instilled a hope in me too that someday your deepest wish would come true. I ust hope to see them together soon. is Asad going to be in disguise?

now the extremely interesting part is gonna come up when Asad meets Zoe as Farhaan's bodyguard and sees him calling her ammmi.

plz update soon.

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Prash_FF

@Prash_FF

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

What an update!!! Every bit of it worth the wait of 3 days. I have no words to express how awesome you and you story are. Continue to take us for a ride as always!!!

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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-RM-

@-RM-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

You can compete Gul in givin twists 👍🏼

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-
Could this FF be any more epic?! I can't find a worthy adjective for your story. You deserve standing ovations and rounds of applause. 👏

thanks dear...that's very sweet of u😊
I thought Ayaan married Zoya until Asad's monologue (which was all kinds of awesome btw). You made me hold my breath for confirmation. I could have died you know. 😆
I was thinking Dilshad was way too callous with Zoya. Now I know why.
Farhan's autistic. interesting.
I can't get the song outta my head now. So apt. I died of feels!
Zoya gave her own Bone Marrow to Dilshad. *Feeling proud!* No, she just assisted with the finances...Dilshaad probably had an anonymous bone marrow donor
Can't wait for Zoya to find why Rashid blames himself for the accident. Good thing that they've bonded. 👍🏼
Zoya's personal Taj Mehal sent me straight to AsYaland! Still very much there. 😆
Please maintain your pace of updating the FF. 😊

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#740

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..
You know when I started reading this part, I thought Zoya married Ayaan and Farhan is their son but I knew you wouldn't do that to us😆 5 years leap was a surprise but so much happened:O Loved Dilshaad and Najma's convo. It was very emotional and Najma has found someone for her. Awwwhh<3 Karan Wahi😆 Perfect!So Asad was imprisoned?:O Good to have him back and OH MY GOD! He'll be in Ayaan's house. Another shocker our way when they both see each other! I wonder how Asad will react to all this and when he finds out about Rashid. God this is all so exciting. Can't wait to read more! Zoya's Taj Mahal<3 Loved this update as usual. I won't lie, I teared up in some parts!<3 Can we expect Asad-Zoya to meet in next update? Do I needa comment on your writing skills? You write so well and you choose perfect songs<3 Kudos and Continue soon!

Thanks Kirann...yes, I wanted to shock all of u with that opening line😆

Yes, of course they have to meet now😳