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cheeselova

@cheeselova

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#691

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Originally posted by: KiwiShake
Oh boy! I just logged in on IF after months and saw that you've started another story. I've been waiting all these months for you to continue writing A-K fanfic. (Yup. Still a crazed AK fan. lol) Unfortunately that hasn't happened. But oh well AsYa works too. 😉

Hello AK fan...good to see 'old' friends here

This ff was originally a AK ff but I have modified it for Asya. In fact, even now when I write some parts of this ff, I can sometimes visualize Iqbal Khan as the navy officer😆

I am not sure if u read the original Faasle

Yes. I read all your AK fanfics including Faasle. :-) I've yet to start reading this one though.

Edited by KiwiShake - 12 years ago

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#692

Originally posted by: Annu..

if that is the case then I think while talking to the navy officer she was being selfish, thinking abt her Abbu, Akram, Phooppi, getting homeless etc etc.. coz apparently Asad is in danger, he needs to be rescued asap, not Zoya.. agar hamara koi close one missing ho, toh hum uski kher kheriyat ki fikr karte hein, naa ke apni qismat ka rona le ke beth jaaein..

@ bold.. is Zoya this much naive? if Asad is not dead, not in danger then where he is.. vacationing in the Bahamas??

Thanks for liking the sher..😊 aik aur arz hai.. for Zoya!

dil e muztar ko samjhaya bohat hai dil e muztar = a restless, impatient heart
magar is dil ne tadpaya bohat hai

qayamat hai ye tark e aarzu bhi
mujhe aksar wo yaad aaya bohat hai

tabbassum bhi, hayaa bhi, berukhi bhi
ye andaaz e sitam bhaya bohat hai

First, awesome sher.👏 Is that your own or borrowed? Zoya ko bhi sikhaeye!! 😆

Reading back what I wrote previously I can understand why you took it the way you did. It was not clearly expressed. I focused more on defining how she is in museebat.

I don't think Zoya is being selfish. What I meant was that she cannot imagine he is in danger or worse that he is dead. There is nothing she can do physically to bring him back. Some may call it being in denial, some may say its her confidence/belief that he is alive. That's her way of dealing with the horrifying news: he will not abandon her (by dying) but will be back to "rescue her". That's my POV or interpretation! Obviously, the author is in the best position to justify Zoya's statement. 😆

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks RK. Zoya has never been in so much museebat and in the past, only Asad has saved her from any crisis...so that was a natural reaction. This will be the first time she will have to handle all this museebat herself

P.S...Annu has been a reader of my ffs for a long time. She is my one genuine critic and keeps me grounded😃 warna aap sab tho mujhey aasmaan par chadha dete ho.

Love ya Annu... keep finding the loopholes in my ff as that helps me fix my mistakes😃

LOL! Creativity needs criticism to be grounded but also needs fandom to be inspired!! 😉 A good blend of both is the best scenario. Overdose of one or the other can be detrimental! 😆

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Nisha

@nisha150

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#694

superb dii...vry well written d emotions of zoya najma rashid...najma's lines were very nicely written ki "aap mein aur bhaijaan mein koi farak nahin hai.Aapka dono ka dil Zoya ke liye rota hai aur aapki zubaan usey rulaati hai."
amazingg di...bas ab jaldi se asad miljaye ...updateee nxt prt sooonnn..

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Nisha

@nisha150

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#695

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#696

Originally posted by: nisha150
superb dii...vry well written d emotions of zoya najma rashid...najma's lines were very nicely written ki "aap mein aur bhaijaan mein koi farak nahin hai.Aapka dono ka dil Zoya ke liye rota hai aur aapki zubaan usey rulaati hai."
amazingg di...bas ab jaldi se asad miljaye ...updateee nxt prt sooonnn..

Thanks Nisha...will try to update tomorrow :)Next part needs a lot of thought and I don't want to make it confusing...so right now trying to organize the thoughts in my mind :)