FAASLE II: QH FF. Links to Threads I and III pg 1 - Page 69

Originally posted by: blessed4

This was amazing. I don't have

Words to express how beautifully you

Write. ONLY one complaint why did you

Deprive us from your writing style from

Last two years . Hope you keep writing

Till eternity and we just keep craving for

More. Take care

Originally posted by: srashti_kul

bravo!!! I've been following this ff on tumblr...but this update made me too emotional...it was heart wrenching...every dialogue was so realistic as if I was watching it live...u r a brilliant writer...
I hope asad comes back soon...loved zoya's heart to heart talk wid herself...true love indeed!!!
plss continue soon...We all r waitin

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..

OMG DIII!!!!!!
I LOVE YOU...I LOVE Y SOOO MUCH!!!!!
you are just AMAZING!!!!
the update was fantastic...u wrote it soo well...their emotions...loved when Dilshad leaned on zoya subconciously...this showed that she really loves her...
the song 'bhula den'...I love it so much...really wanted it to be played on AsYa... my selfish wish lol...nd u fullfiled it...I could so imagine asad smiling nd blowing kisses
it was really damn beautiful and yeahh continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: s120

This was just excellent di 👏 Such a gripping update. And so heartbreaking 😭 This was one of the best updates so far IMO.

Originally posted by: hsvs

Hey, this was a fantastic update! Got to read it only now as I have been terribly busy today.

So does Rashid tell Zoya the truth? And when does Asad get back? Of course hero kaise mar sakta hai! 😆

Update soon... this story is very addicting and I want to know how this ends! 😃

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

i had braced myself after reading the disclaimer...but i could not stop the tears in my eyes throughout the update!!!!😭

i cant believe it...zoya must be going through hell!!!!

to top it Dilshaad's gussa n rudeness is heartbreaking!!!😭

Najma is trying to bridge the gap btw phoopi n zoya bt is gonna be hard!!!!

I knew it Rashid wud be shattered!!!

plz bring hope in the net update..Asad ki kuch khabar plz...its hard to think that Asad cud...die!😭

you indeed did a commendable job in this update!!! u brought all those emotions through ur words...fabulous job dr!👏

thnks so much for the pm!

Originally posted by: Annu..

if that is the case then I think while talking to the navy officer she was being selfish, thinking abt her Abbu, Akram, Phooppi, getting homeless etc etc.. coz apparently Asad is in danger, he needs to be rescued asap, not Zoya.. agar hamara koi close one missing ho, toh hum uski kher kheriyat ki fikr karte hein, naa ke apni qismat ka rona le ke beth jaaein..

@ bold.. is Zoya this much naive? if Asad is not dead, not in danger then where he is.. vacationing in the Bahamas??

when people go missing in a war situation, the family members can't do much except hope...they can't go down hunting for them. I am sure they are all forcing the Indian govt and navy to find the missing person...I have just not written about it. It's implied. The Navy is more worried about it's officers too

Thanks for liking the sher..😊 aik aur arz hai.. for Zoya!

dil e muztar ko samjhaya bohat hai dil e muztar = a restless, impatient heart

magar is dil ne tadpaya bohat hai

qayamat hai ye tark e aarzu bhi

mujhe aksar wo yaad aaya bohat hai

tabbassum bhi, hayaa bhi, berukhi bhi

ye andaaz e sitam bhaya bohat hai

wah wah Annu!

Originally posted by: Love_Surbhi

I cried buckets.. I cried my heart out.. It's heart-breaking 😭 😭 Specially the hospital segment..Zoya's breakdown..but she still managed to handle the matter and stay strong.. Poor Dilshad..wonder how she'll feel once she realise the truth.. 😭 Asad been missing still is creating a lot of suspense.. But I'm sure he's alive.. Guess lots of twists coming up 😃
Yet again brilliantly written.. Everything sounded so realistic.. I got addicted to your story.. Even while watching the real QH, I'm wondering why is Dilshad behaving so normal..isn't she ill? LOL 😆 . Thank you so much for this awesome story.. Loving it.. Eagerly waiting for the next update. And thanks for the PM 😊

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

this whole update was so beautiful !
you wrote everyone's sorrow perfectly :')
and the song !!!!!
i was on the verge of tears !😭


OMG !!!
arjun's dead !😲

where's asad now ? i hope nothing bad happens to him !
raashid still loves his first family a lot
& ayaan still hasn't seen asad ?

loved the whole update !
please continue soon :)

Originally posted by: bheegi

T<font color="#3300cc">hanks vidhi. Hope they don't use bhula dena in the serial because that would mean a very sad track but yes, it suits them very well and was perfect inspiration for me to write this part</font>