FAASLE II: QH FF. Links to Threads I and III pg 1 - Page 68

Originally posted by: cheezluver98

I seriously don't know what to write today. That update nearly had me at tears and when I listened to Bhula Dena in the background I nearly cried. The emotions were so palpable. When Zoya went to the morgue I felt like I was there with her and I wanted to sob. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. 👏

Originally posted by: KiwiShake

Oh boy! I just logged in on IF after months and saw that you've started another story. I've been waiting all these months for you to continue writing A-K fanfic. (Yup. Still a crazed AK fan. lol) Unfortunately that hasn't happened. But oh well AsYa works too. 😉

Originally posted by: aashiqua

this was a brilliant
update...you are a
fabulous,fantabulous and an
amazing writer and if this was
the one of the challenging thing
that you ever had to write then it
was the one of the challenging
and heart wrenching piece of
work that i ever had to read...i
you have portrayed each and
every emotion so so so
beautifully..

Originally posted by: Aye12345

Oh my God!! How do you do it? I was nearly in tears when i was reading the first part in the morgue!! And you are right, Zoya is just AMAZING!! Her strength, her will power, her determination, everything about her is just BRILLIANT!! As if, Rashid told her he has a rishta with Asad, God i wonder what her reaction will be and Asad, please bring him back soon, even if they don't get together, at least he can be safe and nobody will be so distraught and sad!! I hope the bitterness that Dilshad has for Zoya will be soon forgotten and she will accept her, i can't stand seeing Dilshad act like that towards Zoya, they're both such GREAT characters and they need to support each other!! Please update soon, i can't believe you left it till there!! I'm really eager to read on, thank you for this and for the pm!! Thanks a bunch!! x

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

i LOve You So So So much... I hav been a huge fan of ur writing skill...how can you make an FF such a beautifulll...i jus cannot speak a word after reading ur FF... todays update was really a hrt breakinggg... Awww..now ZOya wud be working as a family member...i jus luv her confidence...never give up Attitude..

luvd it...

update soon... n plz do PM mehhh...

Originally posted by: Annu..

"Officer, main apne Mr. Khan ko aap se zyaada jaanti hoon. I know he is alive and will be back soon. Mujhey maloom hai jab bhi main museebat mein hoti hoon, wo mujhey dhoondh hi lete hain. Ab ki baar bhi dhoondh lenge. Yeh mera yakeen hai."

shouldn't it be the other way round? musibat mein toh Asad hai naa.. he is missing here.. dhoondne ka kaam toh Zoya ka hua, nahin?!

Zoya kaise jaayegi bhai dhoondne. It's the Indian govt responsibility to find him...this is a defense issue

ishq ne Ghalib nikamma kar diya, warna hum bhi thay aadmi kaam ke.. Zoya literally proved this sher wrong.

yes, that's why I hate characters who become nikamma or devdas after falling in love...love should help one grow and get better, find a meaning in life

. her transformation from immature brat to mature responsible girl is quite amazing.. all of a sudden she is a new person it seems.. i am still figuring out that when and how she fell so hard for Asad.. aik adventure trip aur mumbai yaatra ki waja se kisi ko doosre se itna gehra ishq bhi ho sakta hai ke koi apne parent ke against hi chala jaaye, ye pata nahin tha..

aapne shayad kahani poori padhi nahin abki baar Annu. Did u see her struggle with abbu? From part 1 onwards she has had issues with him. Aur pyaar karne ke liye do pal hi kaafi hain. How many times did Asad save her from crisis? That would be enough for any woman to fall head over heels for a man like Asad😳

and the way Najma has become dependent on Zoya now.. just wondering how did she use to deal all the Dilshad emergency situations in the past during Asad's absence..

Let's assume Asad was posted in town when Dilshaad was diagnosed with cancer😉

hope Zoya gets the DNA test result soon otherwise her optimism that Asad is still alive will look unreal..

yes, I will make sure she gets that result....but she wouldn't be surprised

Originally posted by: webuser7

Zoya is in museebat too. From Princess to Pauper. Dilshad kicked her out of the house, her Abbu wants her to get married to Akram, she's penniless and almost homeless. Her hope is that Asad will come and rescue her and accept her in his life. Also, she does not want to think of Asad in danger. I can see why she would make that statement.

@bold Nice one. 👏