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@Zola029

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Posted: 11 years ago

#841

i'v just read your ss in a go ! that was awesome !!!

your teaser seems really interesting ! eager to see zoya afraid to lose asad!

please do pm me when u update

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@Zola029

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Posted: 11 years ago

#842

i've just read your ss in a go ! and that was awesome !

your teasaer seems ineteresting ! eager to see zoya afraid to lose her mr khan !

do pm for your next update please .

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#843

Lovely End of Beautiful SS..
Loved it..
Mangalpur in Reverse..Waiting for that..Start soon..
Thnx for PM...

--MARIAM--

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#844

Just finshed readin it all...n mazaa aa gaya...made me forget to go and sleep..thats how much lost I was readin ur SS...loved it..all..very well written..😃

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#845

totally amazing...

was totally glue to the story...

it fabulous...

brilliantly written...

eagerly waiting for mangalpur in reverse...

thx fr the pm...

its mind blowing...

Edited by jazsidhu - 11 years ago

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Sohini Dasgupta

@.SoHu.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#846

Originally posted by: --starstruck--
sohu pehle aati na :P

main aa gayi🤗
via phone??😳

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#847

Interesting ending but woohoo for a sequel

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Gauri

@Gauri...

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#848

Omg!! That ending was amazing!!
Cant wait 4 d sequel!!
Thnx 4 d PM!!!

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#849

Super ending and a new beginning...

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#850

Heyy

I have told you already that I love your work but again I can't stop myself from praising you and your work. This was just amazing, read it all in one go. I think you have given a better picture of Mangalpur then Qubool Hai. Hats off to you !!!

I liked the fact that you showed that he took her to the hospital, even I feel like that was needed in Qubool Hai's episode. And I seriously loved the way you have wrote about the whole night. That was beautiful ! I never felt bored for a single minute while reading this whole SS.

Keep writing. Will be waiting for its sequel.

Love,

Bubble