AsYa SS ~| Reliving Mangalpur |~ LAST PART on PAGE 123 - Page 83

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...

Story finished 😭 😭

You'll be starting another one* squeals*
I always wanted a mangalpuri zoya 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...👏Loved every word of it!
Doctor calling Zoya as Mrs.Khan is just perfect.And Asad dint bother to correct her!⭐️They finally came home...homely feeling is the best feeling!
My favourite scene in QH is wen AsYa lift their hands thinking that they are still handcuffed⭐️
waiting for Mangalpur sequel TS:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
i missed two parts?? TWO parts?!?! Its official, i hate my internet connection!!

Coming to the updates, i loved loved loved them to bits!!! First for part 9:
What i liked best was the convo asad and zoya had before she was buried... This is what i felt was missing in the episode. Asad's thoughts in the car were very well expressed, and his reactions were just brilliant. I loved the fact that you removed aarti and yash and made it totally an asya scene. Very very beautifully written! And about ur aunt'sfrnd, i'm pretty sure she was complimenting you... Coz serial script writers need to be illogical,which, very fortunately,you are not 😃

Part 10:
An awesome ending for a suupeerrr se bhi oopperrr interpretation of THE Mangalpur!! First,the car ride. Kya driverhai yaar!! Aise log kahan milte hain aaj kal!! Loved how asad took care of zoya and how he didnt care whenthe nurse thought zoya the his wife !! The ending was just awesome when asad told zoya that she either had to travel in a wheelchair or his arms! And her reaction!! Very very very beautifully written!! And now i wait patiently (Or not so patiently) for your next mangu!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Can't believe it ended.. 😔
Continue the sequel soon.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
There is that perfect ending!! ;)
With a chance of a TS!! :D
Now can it get any better than this??? I doubt it!!
There was Asad panicking n praying for Zoya... I loved every bit of the hospital scene...
The sneak peek into the new story made me so excited... I've always wanted a Mangalpur Zoya... now I'm gonna get that!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
just loved it,,,

and yes am waiting fah the MAGALPUR IN REVERSE!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely
n sequel news was great
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Posted: 11 years ago
I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!I OVED IT!I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!😳
UPDATE KARIYO...BUT PEHLE GIVE MY UPDATE OF WOH ACTUALLY..BUSS IS BUSS!!!!😡😡

N NO LONG COMMENTS TILL U UPDATE DAT!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
When an amazing writer writes on an amazing track, this is what you get!! ❤️

Absolutely loooved it!! You captured Mangalpur's essence and gave it the closure which it lacked in QH.

Asad's emotions were much less complex and clear in his mind. Zoya didn't question why Asad didn't correct the doc.
They are tied to each other exactly.

You perfected the nearly perfect Mangalpur! 👏

Really excited for your TS! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. Love it. U write every emotions of asad perfectly. I just love the driver. Waiting for sequel now. Update soon. Thanx for pm

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