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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#831

RES

Okay dont' kill me. I'm really busy you know? Okay. Scratch that. I'm an ass hahaha 🤣

Anyhooo I loved it!!! And I like that you added more to him carrying her! 😳

Thank you for the realistic problem with Zoya's breathing. I was wondering why the CV's didn't think being buried alive wouldn't have MORE consequences. And loved that he took care of her as his wife

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THERE WILL BE A SEQUEL!?!?!?!?!?!?!? ARE MY EYES DECEIVING ME?!?!?!?!! 😲 😲 😲 😲

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!

Continue soon hun!!! I'm really excited for the Three Shot 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago

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janestone6

@janestone6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#832

Sadie this is your best work so far.

I love the ending but I was like the confession would come now, now now but you made my day for having a sequel to it:)

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#833

Wow update!!!!🤗

sequel??!!! Ahhh *jumping with joy*

looking forward to it!

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#834

Hey ...

This was fantastic !!! :)

OMG !!! I'm so looking forward to the sequel ...

Thanks for the pm ... :)

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 30

Posted: 11 years ago

#835

Yayyy sequel main toh ye sunkar hi khush ho gayi

awesummm

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Tadibaaaz

@Tadibaaaz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#836

I am waiting for the sequel

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#837

Wow, that was a seriously fantastic last chapter! 👏 👏 👏

Asad's concern, desperation, and helplessness, AsYa being mistaken for a married couple, the super-nice driver guy, everything was so beautifully portrayed!

I can't wait for the sequel, so please start that when you can! ❤️

-Fari 😳 ❤️