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Sadie

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Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes
Yeh hui na baat Sadie...picture abhi baaki hai...👏

hehe thanks 😃

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#812

Amazing update! Your version, with medical attention, was much better than the show one!!

A sequel!! Squeal! 😃

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Sadie

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Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: asyafreva
IT WAS PURE AWWEESSOOMMEENNEEESSS...!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE U SOOO FREAKIN MUCH FR DIS SUPERB UPDATE... ND ALSO D WORLD'S BEST NEWS DAT U WILL ATLEAST WRITE ANOTHER 3-SHOT.. A SEQUEL... I LITERALLY SCREAMED WEN I READ DAT... ND MY MOM"S LYK GIVIN ME A DEADLY GLARE SAYIN HV U LOST IT..??!! bt yes plz plz plz try nd start soon...!! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
IM JUZ SOOO HAPPY... U REALLY MADE MY DAY...!!!

awww thank you so much! Probably the first time when people ain't asking me why did i end the fiction 😆

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Sadie

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Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#814

Originally posted by: webuser7
Amazing update! Your version, with medical attention, was much better than the show one!!
A sequel!! Squeal! 😃

i felt zoya did need medical attention c'mon man she was buried she possibly cant be alright! thanks for the comment 😃

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EkPagliLadki

@EkPagliLadki

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#815

loved the end. eventhough i love the mangalpur track bt i still feel that it didn't hv an appt. end. i loved the way u ended it nd looking forward to mangalpur in reverse.

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Amna

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#816

Amazing end 👏 cant wait for the sequel

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#817

superb!!

yippeee!!

you gonna give sequel!!

jumping!!

thanks for the pm.

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#818

Aillah story khatam Awww

Aisa nahin hosakta

hahaha its was so beautiful sadie

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#819

omg!!

I was upset when it ended but the note has made me jump in delight

I am so looking forward o next part

You described Mangalpur perfectly

luv you

Mahi

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#820

Great update! Loved your version of mangalpur! But I just felt maybe he should have kissed her on the lips, and then she would have awoken! Looking forward to next update! Really wants to see some passionate romance!