AsYa SS ~| Reliving Mangalpur |~ LAST PART on PAGE 123 - Page 33

Originally posted by: -BadtameezDil-

Aww Sadie another amazing update! loved how Asad loosened up abit and actually listened to Zoya. Excited to read the next update. Cont soon.

Originally posted by: delena90

Good update! I can't wait for chapter 7. I really like the way Asad and Zoya are developing in your story.

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

Beautiful beautiful part Sadie!!! Loved it!!!

This was wayyy better than the show wala Mangalpur night... this was simply BRILLIANT!!!

The last part made me really emotional... I loved the fact that Asad listened to her patiently and let her hug him and cry... senti ho gayi main😭

Update soon!!!

Originally posted by: mochhug

RES

NOO! Oh well, damn the internet. And the fact that I forgot to take my glasses with me this morning didn't help. But second is still good,

I wholeheartedly agree with you. This is some of your best work. I was so shocked at Asad holding her hand but so happy. I was so moved by Zoya's thoughts and her sudden lunging at Asad. It was really touching and sweet and cute and amazing. And I loved how you make him admire her, and not just feel guilty. 😉 🤗 Whoa, i love it when someone tells me exactly the things they liked reading. thank you so much for this feedback! i love long wale comments 😆😆

The way she thanked him, the way he responded, his remark about "living if somethig happened to her," was a pleasant surprise. I LOVE your version of Mangalpur seriously. You've made my favourite scenes in Qubool Hai that much better. I really try to make this better than Mangalpur. don't want it to be the same thing that we saw! glad you are liking it 😃

I loved this sooo much 🤗

Can;t wait to read what you come up with for the dedication series too 😳 Ahh that! The plot was something that i had written for the Mills and Boon aspiring indian authors contest the winner's book was to be published but i was disqualified since the age criteria was 21 and i was only 15 at that time 😭

And thank you for the dedication! 🤗🤗🤗 Your wel wala come 😆 🤗

Originally posted by: s120

Res 😆

Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-

OMG wow! 👏 Its so beautiful, really emotional and absolutely poignant! Loved it!

Continue sooon! 😊

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Ahh that! The plot was something that i had written for the Mills and Boon aspiring indian authors contest the winner's book was to be published but i was disqualified since the age criteria was 21 and i was only 15 at that time 😭