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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#341

oh this was mind blowing. lets start with the end, it was so perfect. it made me cry, thinking of all the emotions playing in their hearts.

it was a fantastic part. I couldn't believe that Asad had heard Zoe without a protest. it is commendable. i'm glad he let his guard down for a while and immersed himself in the moment.

I seriously love this part a lot.

cont soon.

love.

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janestone6

@janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

I swear I wasn't expecting a calm Asad. I thought when she'll be done with explaining why they were in this situation. Asad would yell at her, but but this was beyond beauty. I'm speechless. I love this Asad he is so dreamy This is SS my fav atm.

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hsvs

@hsvs

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Wonderful update... you are developing Asad and Zoya really well in this story. Please update soon...

There is another of your FF that i remember reading - one in which Zoya and Asad are childhood friends and Zoya was to land up in the Khan villa. That one is also very interesting and well written... Whats its name? Can we expect an update soon?

Thanks! 😊

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Awwweee... that was such a cute update! I looveedd itt and I'm sure the night isn't over just yet ;) Anyways please do continue whenever you can and thanks sooo much for the pm :))

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

" I'm sure you didn't miss the subtle way in which I've been praising MY Zoya through YOUR Asad since the very first chapter. "

How much i love these LINES ❤️ 🤗 :')

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

The explanation part was nice and the
understanding between them...

Asad listening to zoya... what a twist 🤣

waiting for the next update..

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lover1998

@lover1998

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Amazing storyline.. pm me when you update plz

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lover1998

@lover1998

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Amzing storyy... plz pm me when you updatee

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#349

Ah such a torrid prt even I cried ...with it
It is actually vry reliving and soothing one.
Zoe impulsive hug was so romantic... Even
Asad enjoyed it. She trust him and luv him
And she can cry on his shoulder fr ever
Awesome update