AsYa FF: On the Island CHPT.15 on pg.87-31/3/14-FINAL

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

waoo..superb yr...tht passion...asad's confusion...zoya's ...kiss...loved it..

i m sure she will not regret it later

thnsk 4 d awesome update dear..& 4 pm too

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ZUBIDUBI1

@ZUBIDUBI1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

HOW WOULD IT BE IF I PICK UP A DAGGER FOR U ?😡 😆
its nt fair... updating so so late n stopping it here lik seriously here ? 😭
anyways the upda te was awesome!

i literally squeald seeing it! 😆
yeah u better do that !u better update it quick otherwise yanna raskala mind it! 😆

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SOWMYA

@sowmy18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

tht was freaking hot!

loved it somuch!

do update soon!

im eagerly waiting!😳

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

thanks for updating...this was really awesome...but why she kissed him??? wanna know...
continue soon

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Hi. Thank you for the pm.

I've read all 5 parts in 15 minutes...Interesting story...Asya stranded on an island together...All alone...It's a wonder they haven't killed each other yet.

Beautifully written...

I do hope that your writers block has cleared and you update soon as you have me hooked on another one of your super stories...:-)

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Oh my, i feel so sorry for them!! I hope they get rescued in the end, and they don't die there. I'm so glad Asad found that hut and all the other resources, at least now they'll have somewhere safer than the beach to stay. And whoa, i did not expect the end at all, what on earth?! That took me by surprise, but thank you for not making it too graphic. Hope you can update soon and if possible please can you pm me? Thanks a bunch!! x