AsYa SS "Be With Me" Part 1-14 link to #2 pg 1 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for next

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm racking my brains thinking about Zoya and what made her change so much! Please please please update soon! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4:-


"i hope mai use bata dun k us din hua kiya tha" she thought

~flashback~

she came home with her trophy but was freezed when she saw her father lying on the floor lifelessly, without wasting a second she took him to the hospital it was a mild heart attack and what she needed was 3 lakh for opearation she can't arrange it by her own so she decided to call some of her friend and the first name click in her mind was none other than asad she took out her mobile and start dialing his no but she stoped in middle when someone came and stand infront of her her he took some money from his pocket and gave it to her

"ye lo beta ja k doctor ko dedo"

she took the money without thinnking a while and ran towards the doctor gave him money and now the opearation is started she came back to him

zoya:-thankyou so much rashid uncle ap agar waqt par na ata to najana kiya hojata
she said innocently without knwing his intension

rashid:-ara ye to maine apna liye kiya hai
he said giving a smile

zoya:-apne liye
she asked confusingly

rashid:-mjhe nhe laga tha k tum itne bholi hoge, plz ye natak mere samne mat karna jo larki itne bara buisness man k bete ko phasa sakte hai uske chehre par ye masomat, nahe nahe" he said "uncle ap ye sab kiya kaha ja raha hai" she was so serious and hurt "kyun kia galat kaha maine kiya ye sach nahe k asad tumse mohabbat karta hai? mai janta hun sirf mai nhe sab janta hai han wo karta hai or tum...tum jaisa do core ki larki to sirf ameer larko ko phasati hain, tumhe sirf uska paisa chahie

this time he was loud very much this make zoya hurt she can't bear these words for her, she is not like that

zoya:-uncle plz, mai aese larki nhe ap mjh par aesa ilzam mat lagaye
she said crying

rashid:-tumhara ye bholapan ka jadu asad k samna chalta hoga mere samna nahe
he was rude,very rude

zoya(confident):-agar ap mjhe itni hi ghatya larki samajhte hain to phir ye paisa apne kyun diya mjhe?

rashid:-kyun k mai tumse wo karwa saku jo mai chahta hun

zoya:-kiya matlab hai apka?

rashid:-matlab saaf hai in paison k badla tumhe mere ek baat manni hoge

zoya:-kaise baat?

rashid:-chale jao...hamesha hamesha k liye asad ko chor kar, kabhi mor kar mat dekhna, dekhlo agar tumne aesa na kiya to tmhare abu hamesha mere karzdar rahoge or agar tumne asad ko kabhi kuch bataya to tum sabit kardoge k jo mai tumhare bare mai sochta tha sab sach tha
he said and left without waiting for her answere and zoya she was still standing there, she was numb and broken

zoya(to herself):-chale jao, asad ko chor kar, ye to bata kar jata ap k kaisa, kaisa koi apne zindagi ko chor sakta hai, bus kaha or chala gaye...YA ALLAH mai ye kaisa karunge"

she sat on her knees and start crying, that day she cried alot, she stayed in hospital till her father get discharge and then left for delhi without visiting at her home just for once bcz she knows someone was waiting for her. in delhi she got a job in her uncle's office "ilyas uncle" he was rich, zoya and her father start living at there home like there family and now she is in bhopal handling one of her uncle's company"

~flashback ends~

she was back to reality by a call it was ilyas uncle call

zoya:-salam-o-alikum uncle
uncle:-walaik-um-asalam zoya...kya hal hain? kaisa chal raha hai kaam?
zoya:-sab theek hai uncle or waisa bhe buisness k jis kam mai hote hun woha gadbad ka kam(she said in a bossy tune)
uncle:-ye to hum sab ache tarah se jante hai beta
zoya:-par apne call Q ki the wo bhi is wqt?
uncle:-ara wo beta yaseen ana wala hai
zoya(shock):-yaseen? kab? itni jaldi kyun?
uncle:-ara heran kyun ho rhe ho, tumhe to khush hona chahie, wo kal ya parso U.S se ayege or direct tumhare pass hi ajayega
theek hai?
zoya:-ji ji uncle, u don't worry i will manage
unclel:-like always acha ab mai rakhta hun
zoya:-ji khuda hafiz
uncle:-ALLAH HAFIZ

zoya(to herself):-yaseen yahan bhopal ayega, YA ALLAH mere dosto ko pata chal gaya k wo kn hai to???


next morning, dilshaad construction
"asad fast, meeting start hona mai ziada time nhe, ilyas sahab ne bataya unki bhanji time ki bht paband hai" rashid entered in his cabin in an angry mode

asad:-mai ready hn abu bx kuch files sign kr rha tha ab chala

they left and reached at there desired place in 20 minutes, they enter in office and directly ask from the receptionist about meeting room she told them and they left, they reach at the meeting room but before they enter varun came out, he saw them and understood
varun:-sir kya ap dilshaad company se aye hain
asad:-ji
varun:-sir ap 5 minute late hain
asad:-we are sorry for this, can we go in?
varun:-ya u can but mam should be angry
asad:-lets see.

they enter inside, she was siting on the opposite side but a voice came "5 minute late"
asad:-sorry mam.
mam:-apki sorry se mere jo itne important 5 minute waste hue hai wo mjhe wapis mil sakte hai?
asad(mumbled):-akdu
mam:-kuch kaha
rashid:-nahe kuch nahe, hum meeting start karain?
mam:-ya sure waise bhe mere pass waste krne k liye or time nhe.

she gave a little force to her chair and turn, it make everyone shock
asad/rashid:-zoya
zoya:-asad or uske abu

they looked eachother for a long time rashid and zoya were more shocked
rashid(to himself):-zoya farouqui jo apne abu k ilaj k 3 lakh rupe nahe bhar sakte the aj itne bari company chala rhe hai.
zoya(to herself):-rashid ahmed khan 3 lakh rupe mere mun par mar kar gaye the aj 3 crore ki deal k liye mere samne bethe hai, kismat bhe cheez hai

~finish~

so part 4 finish here
finally i update actually the reason is i was ill and m suffering from urine infection so i gave u a very late update and those who r waiting for my other 7 update plz wait a little more i'll update them too and ya i gave u the reason that y she left and how she became rich now start thinking that who is this yaseen till nxt updatešŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
first one to comment... :D

it was a greatt update... but didnt understand one thing.. y didnt she got money from her uncle and returned it to rashid and got back to asad... she can do it now also...

and i think yaseen is her fianance...!


thanx for the pm.. and get well soon and update the other ffs sooon... :D
Edited by Splash-ASYA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
I love your update. You go Zoya!
Get well soon! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a chotta updatee??
Edited by shahala123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update as usual
I cnt believe Rashid could do this bt jst look at what destiny did to him,he's trying to strike a deal of 3 crore with the girl whom he consider is after his son cuz of his wealth n when Asad will find out the reason why Zoya left him is cuz of his dad,i wonder how he will feel.I think Yaseen may be her uncle's son n her fiance cuz her uncle want them to get married...heyy dat was jst my guess
Get well soon dear n give us more awesome update

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