AsYa SS "Be With Me" Part 1-14 link to #2 pg 1 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow.it was good..please update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arey please write the next part as soon as possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome and thanks for the pm!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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intresting
continue fast...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry guyz for updating so late. actually it was a three shot so i thought to give you a long part but i can't because firstly i am so lazy😆 and secondly it's ramadan so i can't write continuously so i decided to turn it into a SS so i will give you a short but fast update😊. btw plz pray for my result, i am very greedy😉 i want ur wishes so plz pray for it.

P.S:-guyz i'm not a buisness woman even i don't knw it's "ab" so u have to bear what i write😉

Part 3:-
function was started, guest were arrived but asad,ayaan,najma and imran were waiting for her from last 30 mins at the entrence. ayaan was completely fed up so he wispered to imran "hum yahan kiya kar raha hai imran?"😕
imran:-idiot, zoya ana wale hai😛
ayaan:-han to wo andar khud a jayege hum yahan kyun khara hai?
imraan (to himself):-ise samjhana bhans ka aga been bajana hai😆
imran to ayaan:-ayaan tujhe khara rehna hai to reh warna andar ja.
ayaan:-nahe mai tum logon k sath khara hun.
imran:-to khamosh raho

imran again join asad and najma. and just after a minute a car came and stopped infront of the four. driver came out and open the door of back side when ayaan saw girl's shoes he again wispered to imran:-ywr kiya haseena khala na sonia gandhi ko bhe invite kiya hai?😆
imran(irritatedly):-chup ayaan😡
ayaan became silent and that girl came out and she was no one other than zoya, their zoya. the four standing there opening there mouth.She was wearing a light green colour shalwar kameez and decent but designer jwellery. they were just looking her with a shocking expression
zoya(to herself):-i knew it ye sab bht ajeeb react karenge. pichle 2 minute se mai yahan khare hun or ye khamosh hain.
finally ayaan broke the silence
ayaan(confusingly):-tum zoya hi hona?
zoya:-han mai zoya hi hun.
zoya trying to avoid their expression moved and hug ayaan and then imran and then najma. when she moved towards asad, she becomes nervous she was unable to hug him so she just say "hi" he also replied "hey". Ayaan signed imran and najma to leave them. the 3 left and now they were alone but still they were silent just looking into eachother eyes. it was looking like there eyes were talking.

asad and zoya eye to eye conversation
asad:-kahan chale gaye or kyun?
zoya:-bus ek majbori tumse dor legaye mjhe
asad:-par bata to sakte the.
zoya:-nahe, bus jana zarori tha kise ko bata he nahe sake
asad:-tumhare bagair mai bht akela hogaya tha.
zoya:-jante hun
asad:-kaise
zoya:-kyun k tumhare bagair mera bhe wohi hal tha.
asad:-kiya jana se pehle ek bar bhe mere bara mai nahe socha?
zoya:-socha tha, lakin kise or k bara mai bhe to sochna tha, or ise liye jana para tumse dor
asad:-par?
zoya:-nahe please koi or sawal mat karo mai jawab nahe de sakunge, bht mushkil se apne dil ko yahan ana k liye razi kiya hai dobara kar pana mushkil hoga.
asad:-theek hai tumhare liye mai tumhe apna sawalon se azaad karta hun.

tears were pouring down there eyes they were smiling that they met after a long time and were crying that they can't express that actually what are they feeling at that time.they were silent from couples of minutes but then zoya broke the silence.

zoya:-aa wo nikhat kahan hai.
asad coming back into his sences:-wo apne room mai hai, chalo tumhe lekar chalta hun.
zoya:-ya sure.

they start walking towards nikhat room because najma and ayaan were there and imran was attending the guest

zoya:-so tum kya karte ho?
asad:-nothing special, bus abu k sath buisness mai...that's it.
zoya:-hmmm, shaadi ki?
asad:-nahe...tumne?
zoya:-me...ummm no, not yet.

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they were in nikhat's room, nikhat was still applying some makeup because she was so nervous, najma was helping while asad, ayaan and zoya were standing silently. just then zoya mobile rang.
ayaan asked:-kon hai?
zoya:-a wo mere PA ke call hai, shayad kuch kam ho.
she picked it up
zoya in a bossy way:-what the hell is this varun, i told you that don't disturb me.
varun:-i'm sorry mam but Mr.Mehta mere baat hi nahe sun raha tha, he was arguing continuously infact wo abhe tak office mai hai.
zoya:-ohkay, wo jahan bhe hai call shift karo.
varun:-ohkay mam
he followed her command and shift the call now it was Mr.Mehta
mehta:-hello mam, mjhe apse pochna tha k...she intrupted
zoya(frowned):-Mr.Mehta apko yad hoga k aj subah hi humare meeting hue or apke is deal se related jo questions or worries tha mai sab ka answere diya. but ap ab bhe satisfied nahe? i'm sorry mai ap jaise irresponsible logon k sath kam nahe kar sakte. this deal is cancelled now.
mehta:-par ap is tarah deal cancel nahe kar sakte, ap jante hain isse humare companies ko kitna loss hoga
zoya:-shayad ap ko yad ho k is deal se apko 3 crores ka faida to ab apko 3 crores ka nuksan hoga
mehta:-par nuksan to apko bhe hoga
zoya:-i knw 1 crore ka, don't worry Mr.mehta i'll manage now can you please transfer the
call back to varun.

now varun is on the line

zoya(angrily):-varun just cancel the deal
varun:-but mam
zoya:-i said just cancel it.

she cut the call but while talking she did'nt realized that the four were watching her and
listening her conversation, she turned and that 4 four were looking her in a shocking way

zoya with altitude:-what?
najma came forward:-zoya tumne ek call ki wajah se deal hi cancel karde? tumne apne company ka 1 crore ka nuksan kardiya
zoya:-1 crore k nuksan se mere company loss mai nahe chale jayege najma, and itne irresponsible logon k sath karne bhe mera nuksan hoga, mere time ka nuksan hoga.
no one replied
zoya:-guyz tum pareshan kyun ho raha ho company ka matter hai to mai kal ise dekhlunge.

they became normal accept asad, he was just staring her, even zoya was feeling so
awkward

najma:-you r right. btw lets go nikhat, or kitna ready hoge?
nikhat:-nahe ho gaya.

they all came out, after engagement ceremony ayaan introduced zoya to everyone. now
they all were sitting together

asad to najma:-najma, ami or abu kyun nahe aye abhe tak?
zoya get scared, she was sweating but no one noticed it
najma:-nahe wo a nahe sakte.
zoya feel reieved
ayaan:-btw zoya tum apne company mai kis post par ho?
zoya:-actually ye company mai na delhi mai join ki the, or ab mai is company ki bhopal ki branch ko handle, is company ka koi decision mere sign k bagair final nahe ho sakta

they all were apreciating her, she gave them a small smile asad noticed.

zoya:-guyz ab mjhe chalna chahie, it's too late and mai rehte bhe akele hun so.
najma:-zoya please thori dair bad chalejana hum tumhe drop kar deinge.
zoya:-nahe mere pas driver hai par mjhe kal 8 bje office bhe pohachna hai ek bht important meeting hai
nikhat:-acha theek ab phir kab miloge
zoya:-i promise u sweety, whenever i'll get free time i will to meet you guyz.
ayaan:-hmmm, theek hai

zoya says bye to all and left

asad:-najma huma bhe chalna chahie
najma:-bhaijan ap jaye mai nahe a rahe
asad:-kyun?
najma:-aj raat mai yahe rahunge
asad:-theek hai, mai ja raha hun

asad left too.

on the road
asad was driving but he stopped when he saw zoya's car. he came out and move towards her car,when zoya saw him she too came out the car
asad:-kiya hua?
zoya:-kise?
asad raised his eyebrows:-tumhare car ko?
zoya:-nothing just puncture
asad:-so tum ghar kaise jaoge?
zoya:-driver mechanic ko bulana gaya hai, ata hoga tum jao
asad:-mai tumhe aesa akela chor kar...he stopped after some time "i mean tum kab tak aesa akale ruku ge yahan, mere sath chalo mai drop kar deta hun tumhe?
zoya:-nahe asad zarorat nahe iski...
asad:-come on zoya tum university mai bhe mere he sath jate the
zoya:-nahe wo bat nahe, tumhe to mera address bhe nahe pata.
asad(confusingly):-zoya! tum bata sakte ho mjhe.
zoya touched her temple:-oh ya ri8
asad:-lets go

asad locked her car and zoya called her driver to bring the car at home after repairing it, asad sat on the driving seat but zoya sat at the back side,zoya was so nervous

asad(shockingly):-zoya, i'm not ur driver.
zoya:-umm, wo i knw
asad:-so come and sit in front
she came in front and also told him her address, he droped her and left, he was not shocked this time when he saw her house because now he finally understood how much rich she is now but the question is "how" the story she told about her job was not completely true he know she is so hardworking and intelligent but still he don't believe.

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zoya's room
zoya cameout wearing her night gown, she led on her bed just thiking about asad,
zoya(to herself):-kitna sawal the uske ankhon mai, kitna dard, takleef or najana kiya. mera bas chalta to mai tumhe sab kuch bata date lakin mai tumhe kuch nahe bata sakte asad, mere zindagi to badal gaye lakin mai tumhare sath aesa nahe hoga. agar maine tumhe sach bataya to tum apne zindagi k ek bht khubsurat rishta ko kho bethoge.

~~finished~~
guyz part 2 finished here
i hope you like it.plz give ur feedback😊
Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really awesome update
I jst want to know why Zoya is so nervous in the presence of Asad n whats the secret she's hiding,how does she become rich?
Iss storyline mein bohut saara twist hain
Thnx 4d pm
Keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyy... awsome one... plz pm me for the next update... waiting...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow nice story just read it all yhe parts good start... Nw dying to knw what happen to zoya why she behavibg like tht...
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interesting.. Nice concept... Cont soon
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awesome post... Really interesting... Plz continue soon and pm me...

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