[DISCONTINUED] AsYaFF: Rishta.Com || UPD! CH. 4 'Soft Pink Lips' - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz cont soon and pm me i had send u buddy request
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zoya's two miles a minute talk was funny
And her demands... 😊

Isha and Rohan are really cute!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing VM and grat update.Temple run line was sooo appropriate
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Posted: 12 years ago
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both vm and update r awesome mindeblowing .
loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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"A light from the shadows shall spring,"

-J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellow Ship of the Ring

Chapter 3

"Care to Share?"


(another new VM at the bottom!)

"Hello,"

"Hello," Mr. Khan replied with the same awkward tone as always.

"My name is Nasifa Siddiqui," the young woman, blushed.

Mr. Khan backed up a few steps just to make sure he didn't accidently make any form of physical contact to cause the furious blush.

"Hi, I'm Asad Ahmed Khan," he introduced nervously sweating at what he was expected to do next.

Shake hands. Actual physical contact. God no, please no.

Suddenly a light shone from the heavens, and as if he were Mr. Khan's guardian angel Rohan jumped in with the popcorn, "So how's it going you guys?"

"The movie's starting let's go!" Isha barged in forgetting that they were with clients.

"What the hell man, they are are just the trailers."

"I don't like missing anything alright!" She explained, "And anyways I paid in full for the ticket," she mumbled the rest.

"Kanjoos kahi ki,"

"Shut up, meri film jaa rahi hai," she pulled, no yanked him over to Theatre 14.

***

He turned around to check and make sure Rohan and Isha were still sitting there behind him. Alright, he could do this. Just one date next to a stranger he would possibly marry. No big deal.

"Hey, if you don't mind can I share with you?"

"Huh?" he looked over to see the same woman with rosy pink lips who made him a public laughing stock the other day.

"Look, I'm staying at a hotel, and it gets pretty expensive alright. And I didn't want to waste money on popcorn so can I just have some of yours?"

"Um... sure!" He literally shoved the bucket in her face out of embarrassment.

"Hey... I know you! You're pretty boy!"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he muttered trying to hide his face with his not so long hair.

"We met at Rishta.Com remember?"

He decided it was futile denying it. "Oh yeah... I think I remember you, yes indeed. Of course... that encounter was rather... err... hilarious!" He tried to whisper that out in the most non-uncomfortable-sounding-way possible.

"Yeah, anyways, shut up now, the film is starting," she dug her hand deep into his bucket trying to get as much as her two hands would allow,

"How about you take the bucket, I'm really not that hungry anyways,"

She awkwardly smiled realizing what led him to the offer, but she was hungry. "Um... thanks... I- I'm not usually like this but see I'm kind of tight on money and this was Ranbir Kapoor so I couldn't miss it and-,"

"I understand, now shut up the movie's starting," he quieted her from giving an unneeded explanation.

Unknown to her, he caught her smiling.


To be continued. I mean I have the next few parts written but (I don't normally say this kind of stuff like other writers) I need people to actually read it. This is probably my second/third favorite piece of work by me, so I'd like to write it for an audience other than myself and Dippy.


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Made a new VM!

DO NOT and I repeat DO NOT watch if you plan on watching Rishta.Com because it contains major spoilers.

(watch all the people who aren't supposed to watch it, watch it, lol temptation is a bitch)


Damn. I'm guessing they blocked it to be embedded anywhere else,

here's the link to go watch it on YouTube:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TmWnY_FjrfY


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Hope you liked it!

-Shweta <3
Edited by -ForeverYours- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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edit****

GUESS WHOS BACK, BACK AGAIN?

DIPPAYS BACK, TELLA FWEND.

GUESS WAAAT?

IM FIRST.

WUNSAGAIN, DIPPPAAAY IZ THA FIRST!!

YEEHAW!!!!

thanks for the link love 🤣

Asad Amed Khan is like the definition of goddamn awkward here 🤣

He caught her smiling.

does that mean --WAIT.

IS THAT NASIFA? CHICK THERE TO SEE IF MR KHAN IS A GOOD MATCH FOR ZOOE?

DID I JUST FIGURE OUT FIRST ONE FIFTIETHS OF THE PLOT????

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whats ya first and second favourite pieces of writing by you?

imma love to read it <3

In place of the VM, Blocked Plug-in is placed.

Google Chrome and safari are major lil' shits.

ps.

i plan on giffing this comment with Marshall Mathers after i come back from the loo.

Edited by Irresistible. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
This is just such a great concept and you have captured the essence of Rishta.com, at least what I recall. I am really looking forward to the Asad Zoya interactions in these settings. So much of the Asad Zoya chemistry has been left unexplored in the show, so I am eagerly looking forward to your updates.
Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Awesome update, loved it! 👏 👏 👏
But so short!
Lol, Zoe's SO cute. 😳
She stole Asad's popcorn! 🤣
I think he's more interested in her, than his date! 🤣
This is one of my fave stories right now! ❤️
Also, I loved ur VM! 👍🏼
Anyways, update super-super-super soon! 😉
-Fari 😳 ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guess whaatt!?! I finished Rishta.com like 3 days ago and ever since then its like I have ABSOLUTELY NOTHING to do with my life anymore :( It is probs one of THE best indian tv shows I've EVER watched and its all thanks to you :D If I hadn't checked out this SS I would've never known about it! Thank you sosososo much for introducing the show to us! Oh and I cried buckets in the last 2 episodes! Ahhh... seriously why can't they have a season 2!?! And I miss Kavi Shastri's accent soo much as well as RoSha's nok jhok :(

Anyways now to the update... loool I loved it! Its kinda like actually watching Rishta.com and its helping me overcome my sadness of having finished it! Pleasee do continue soon :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loveee it!! Just read the last 2 parts! Makes me feel i am watching rishta.com again! :D
Lmaooo the popcorn scene was so hilarious LOOLL!!
Please let me know how rohan survived through this movie! :
Waitinf for next part :))

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