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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Nice update sorry for not being able to put the other one up 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Nice update but too short.
Loved it!
Do continue asap.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Omg zoya and Farhan married?... There has to be a twist...it's suppose to be asad and zoya..Zara and armaan.

Plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Awesome story !!!!!
just read all in one go...
but what about Zoya & Farhaan???? they really married ???
plz continue soon...
Pm me when u update next part plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
it was nice and confusing too
but y too short, plz update long part nxt time and u should ur new ff, i will surely read it and thnx for the pm and pm me for the nxt as well
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

CHAPTER 6

Rehaan: ZAARAA! OMG ZAARA WAKE UP!

He quickly ran and got water and sprinkled it on her face . She gained conscious after like a minute and just kept looking at a really worried rehaan.. But what confused her was the memory she got ..

Zaara: rehaan..

Rehaan: OMG zaara thank god youur awake! I got so scared!

Zaara: lol why so worried ..? Kahin pyaar tho nahi hogaya? ( did youu fall in love with me?)

Rehaan answered unknowingly: haan..

Zaara: KYA??!?

Rehaan than snapped out of his dream land and said

Rehaan: WHAT? Hell no.. Umm what made youu think that? By the way we need to get going.. Our flight is today.. Soo umm go finish up youur packing!

And than walked out of her room.. Thinking

Rehaan thinking: I wish I could tell youu that I really love youu! ..

Right than his phone started ringing.. And he picks it up..

Rehaan: heey babes!

Girl: UGH! Don't babes me! When are youu coming to mumbai! And where is my best friend zaara! God I miss her like hell! And did she find zoya again? God! Me and didi are going crazy cause when youu left youu couldn't call us right youu little ASSHOLE! Ugh I hate youu!

Rehaan:WOAAH! Calm down shilpa! OMG yes she met her sister and yes we are on way back to Mumbai .. And zoya is coming with us too and tell kumud didi not to worry! We will be here tonight! K I gotta run btw did uday Bahi and manyata didi come back?

Shilpa: oh yea and OMG I CAANNTT WAAIITT!! EEEP! K bye!

Rehaan: bye!

Rehaan to himself: OMG girls! God save MEE!

When he was about to go to his room he found armaan peeking into zaara's room.. So he went up to him

Rehaan: youu okay dude?

Armaan: HUH?!? OMG dude youu scared me! And yea I'm fine..

Rehaan: yea well I really don't care. But seriously stay away from zaara understood? Youu already broke her heart once I don't want that happening again..

Armaan was about to say something when rehaan interrupted again

Rehaan: save it. I don't wanna listen to youur bullshit.. So go pack youur things.

With that armaan left and rehaan made his was to his room..

Meanwhile in zoya's room all the girls were huddled up in one corner and were texting someone and that Someone was non other than tanveer

Text: hey there BILLI! I know youur dirty little secret.. So if youu wanna keep it safe so youur child gets a father than do what i tell youu or else! -

Zaara: what initials should we put?

Najma: umm why not Z ?

Zoya: NOO! She'll find out its me!

Aisha and zaara: what about A!

Najma and zoya: A?

Zaara: yea A for A-N-O-N-Y-M-O-U-S! ;)

Najma: nice one!

Aisha: OMG did youu watch pll?

Zaara: OMG yeea! Aria and jake are SOOO cute together! I hope that Ezra doesn't come in between!

Aisha: same here! Ugh did youu see his beard .. EWWW!

Zoya: GUYS! Lets get back to work!

Zaara an Aisha: oh yea sorry!

Text: hey there BILLI! I know youur dirty little secret.. So if youu wanna keep it safe so youur child gets a father than do what i tell youu or else! - A

**clicks send**

Zoya: Okay so we are done!

Zaara: yup! Btw I'm soo excited!

Aisha: why?

Just than rehaan and farhaan enter

Rehaan: cause shilpa called and told me that she was missing youu and same with kumud didi and manyata bhabhi and uday bhai is back too!

Aisha and zaara: OMMGG! EEE WE NEED TO GET BACK NOWW! OH HOW I MISS THEM ALL! EEE!

Zoya: umm wanna fill me in?

Zaara: OMG Appi!! Shilpa and kumud didi are our best friends we are like sisters! An they live with us cause they're parents passed away when they were small! So Khala adopted them! Like she adopted us and uday bhai is there brother and manyata bahbhi is his wife! It's soo much fun with them like last time we-

Suddenly she saw two cockroaches and screamed her lungs out

Zaara: AAAHHH COCKROACHH!!!

Aisha jumped on the bed screaming

Aisha: AAAHHH WHERE IS ITTT!!!

Zaara clinging on to Aisha screaming

zaara: THERE! BY THE CLOSET! AAAHHH MOOOMMMYYY!

Zoya and najma turned around and saw that the two little cockroaches makin they're way to them the quickly jumped on the bed screaming and same with rehaan and farhaan

Zoya: NAAJMMAA SAVEE MEE!

Najma: BHAAAIIIJAAANNN AAAMMMIII ARMAANN BHAIIYYAA IM DIENIG SAAAVVEE MEEE IT'S GONNA KILL MEEE AAAHHH!

Rehaan: BHAIYA SAVE ME PLEASE!

Farhaan: REHAAN SAAVEE MEEE!

Zaara , Aisha , zoya , and najma were just staring at the guys unbelievingly ..

zaara: WHAT THE HELL JIJU AND REHAAN! YOUU'RE SUPPOSE TO SAVE US WHY ARE YOUU CRYING FOR HELP!

Zoya: OMG FARHAAN! WHAT THE HELL!

Aisha: BHAIYA AND REHAAN BHAIYA I DIDN'T EXPECT THIS FROM YOUU GUYS

When Aisha turned to look at the cockroaches again she saw them coming closer to the bed and started screaming which made them all scream

ALL: AAAHHH HEEELLLPPP IT'S GONNAA KILL MEEE!! AAAHHH

asad armaan dilshaad tanveer zaiba zeenat and Anwar ran into zoya's room where the saw all of them on the bed clinging one to each other like they're life depended on it

Zeenat: OMG why are youu guys screaming!

Rehaan: APPII COCKROACHH!!

With that Anwar burst out laughing

Anwar: AHAHAHAHAAHHAH OMG YOUU GUYS ARE SCARED OF COCKROACHES!

Zaiba: OMG farhaan rehaan youu too! Ugh! Allah help me!

Zoya and zaara: JIJU PLEASSEE HEELPP!

Najma: BHAAIIJAANN ARMAAN BHAII! PLEASEEE HEELP!

Asad: najma stop screaming and come down stop behaving like a two year old ..

Najma nodes her head in denial

Anwar: fine don't worry I'll pick them up and put them out side happy ?

All: Yeess!

Anwar picked both the poor cockroaches up and was about to go to the door but suddenly stopped and started coming closer to zoya and zaara and Aisha

Zoya and zaara and Aisha: OMG JIJU STOP NOO PLEASE OMG

with that zoya and zaara foot slipped and rehaan and farhaan tried catching them but failed and fell on top of them ( rehaan on top of zaara and farhaan on top of zoya) and had an eye lock for what seemed like forever ! While asad and armaan were burning with jealousy and dilshaad and najma weren't liking their closeness while the rest were smiling and giggling

And tanveer was just looking at them and thinking : why does zoya always have to get the best guys.. And now her sister too! Ugh!


Guys chapter 7 will be up in some hours and I know youu want asya together but like I said its an asmud types ff :$ so yea I hope youu like it ! And thanks for the comment guys! <3
like and comment! Thanks! <3


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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Amazing lovely part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Wow lovely partt
Thnx 4d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Thanks for the beautiful update... nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
It was an awesome update
Loved it loads.
Hahaha they all were scared of cockroach.
Poor asad and armaan are burning in jealousy.
Manveer are also there wow!
Wonderfully written.
Do continue asap.
Thanks for the pm.

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