Qabool hai FF

K so I wanna write a story on qabool hai but idk if I should .. ? So should I ??

K so this is my first qabool hai story! I'm a bit nervous but imma try and it's gonna be different from the show and my story is gonna start from where he says he's gonna marry the evil BILLI..

Asad: ammi.. Mein t-ta-tanveer se nikaah karunga... (Mom I'm gonna marry tanveer)

Dilshad couldn't believe her ears .. Did he just say that he's gonna marry tanveer.. On the other hand zoya couldn't help it and broke down right in front of him..

Zoya thinking: how could he..? How could he say he wants to marry tanveer and not me?? Zoya got so angry that she got up and made her way to tanveer and gave her a tight slap across the face and ran to her room and cried her heart out

Meanwhile in Asad's room ...

*Asad's phone ringing*

Asad : hello?

Guy: beta??

Asad could recognize that voice anywhere cause he hated that man a lot he was about to hang up when

Guy: I need to talk to youu it's really important!

Asad: what's so important Mr.Rashid Ahmad Khan...? That you called me at this hour ?

Rashid: Asad beta meet me at the gudiya factory in 5 minutes it's really important! It about your brother... And the line goes dead

Asad: brother..? Is he talking About Ayaan?? Is Ayaan okay? I have to go!

With that asad rushes out the door!

*5 minutes later*

Rashid: there youu are! How are youu beta?

Asad: what about my brother .. ? Is Ayaan okay? Did anything happen to him?

Rashid: no it's not about Ayaan..

Asad got annoyed if its not about Ayaan .. Than what's the matter..

Asad: WHAT? than why did youu say it about my brother ??

Rashid takes a deep breath.. And says..

Rashid: youu have another brother asad.. His name is Armaan Ahmad khan..

Asad couldn't believe it .. He had another brother .. That to his REAL brother..

Asad: why didn't youu tell me before..? And I don't believe youu.. If I had a brother I should have known about him.. ?

Rashid: cause I didn't know he was still alive.. The doctors told us that our son had been kidnaped from the hospital..asad remember when najma was born.. Well najma wasn't only born that day youur brother armaan was too yes asad najma has a twin .. But than he got kidnapped and we tried finding him but couldn't .. But I found out he's alive.. He lives in Mumbai .. go get him asad.. Go!

Meanwhile In Mumbai

Girl: HOW COULD YOUU KHALA! YOUU TOLD ME SHE WAS DEAD! HOW COULD YOUU LIE TO ME !

Old lady: I'm sorry beta! We thought she must have died in the fire with youur mother but we were wrong ! We didn't know beta we just found out a month ago..

Girl: WHAT YOUU KNEW FOR A MONTH! AND YOUU DIDN'T TELL ME ! WHAT THE HELL KHALA! .. Wait is that why youu called me to India?

Old lady: yes that's why I called youu to India I'm sorry beta for not telling youu before that youur sister is alive .. I'm really sorry!

Girl: it's fine! But I'm gonna go and find her .. Khala book my tickets .. I'm going to Bhopal.. !

Than the girl says in a whisper.. : I'm coming Appi youur sister zaara Farooqi is coming to youu!

And with that zaara left to go pack her suitcase

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Index:
Chapter 1 pg 1

Chapter 2 pg 1

Chapter 3 pg 3

Chapter 4 pg 4
Chapter 5 pg 7
Chapter 6 pg 9
Chapter 7 pg 10
Chapter 8 pg 12
Chapter 9 pg 14

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CHAPTER 2

**meanwhile in Bhopal**

asad entered his house all broken and hurt.. Today was the worst day in his life cause he found out that he was gonna be a daddy and that too with his best friends child and second he had a long lost brother ..
He slowly made his way to his ammi's room where he found najma and dilshaad crying

Asad: a-ammii..

Dilshaad looked up at her son with pure hatred in her eyes..

Dilshaad: najma iss se keh do ke ye yahan se chale jaye! ( najma tell him to get out of here!)

Asad: ammi mere Baath tho suniye! (Mom just listen to me!)

Dilshaad: aur kya sunana hai asad! Ke hum bhi tumare zindagi se nikal jaye? (What else do youu have to tell us asad? That we should also lave youur life??)

Asad: ammi! Ofcourse not! I just had a question..

Dilshaad: whaat?

Asad: do I have a brother ..? I mean.. R-REAL.. Brother?

Dilshaad was shocked cause she didn't expect this from asad she thought he was gonna talk to her regarding what just happened but how does he know about armaan??

Dilshaad: yes.. But we don't know where he is .. But how do youu know about him??

Asad: ammi Mr.Rashid Ahmad khan told me... Ammi I know where he is .. I'm going to Mumbai to get him..

Dilshaad was beyond happy to find out that her other son was alive that he didn't die and soon he would be with them! Forgetting about all her anger towards asad she gave him a hug and told him

Dilshaad: go beta go bring my son back home !

And with that asad went into his room to pack and booked a flight to Mumbai for tomorrow early in the morning ..

** In zoya's room **

Zoya was sitting on the floor looking at some pictures of her and her mom and this other girl who she doesn't seem to remember but would brush it off saying it was probably a really close friend of mine ..
But whenever zoya's Appi use to look at this picture she used to get tears in her eyes but zoya thought it was cause she missed her friend (zoya's mom was zeenats friend and khala) but the real reason was that zeenat used to miss zaara .. Wondering if she was alive than zoya would have someone right now but she just couldn't tell zoya because .. She didn't want zoya to suffer more.. So she just didn't say anything about it

** Tanveers room **

Tanveer was litterally jumping up and down with joy today was the best day of her life .. But she didn't know that destiny had other plans for her..

**Mumbai**

Zaara was walking on the side walk until she bumped into someone

Zaara: allah Miyan what's wrong with youu dude can't youu see and walk .. Ugh!

Guy: hello excuse me.. It wasn't my fault that youu were lost in youur thought jungli BILLI ..

With that zaara got furious.. But than remembered only one person used to call her that.. And it was

Zaara: armaan.. Armaan Ahmad khan ??!!??

Armaan: oh wow now youu remember me

Zaara: whatever.. I don't got time to remember the losers.. Idiot and walked away ..

Armaan to himself: what the hell does she think of herself .. Such an idiot.

And with that he walked away ..

** Next day **

Asad woke up and got ready cause he didn't want to miss his flight so he left as early as possible leaving a not for his mom behind

While in Mumbai a girl was boarding on her flight to Bhopal and thinking how she will meet her sister .. Or does her sister even know about her..


I know this was a really crapy update .. But I promise ill post another one in some hours ! Kthanks bye! <3

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NOTE: guys I've decided that armaan is gonna be a year younger than asad and armaan isn't gonna be nahma's twin.

CHAPTER 3

**Mumbai airport**

Asad got out of the airport and made his way towards his car asked the driver to go to the Khan mansion (armaans home) the car pulled in the drive way and asad made his way to the front door and rang the bell.. And a handsome guy opened a door which was none other than armaan .. Asad started tearing up .. Cause he was meeting his brother after a really long time..

Asad: a-are y-you armaan..?

Armaan: yes! I am .. Uh may I he-

He was cut of cause asad took him into a crushing hug and armaan stood there confused ..
After some time asad backed off and apologized

Asad: I'm really sorry.. I know youur probably wondering who I am... Look I know this gonna be really hard for youu.. But .. I-I am y-your older brother.. Asad Ahmad khan..

At first armaan was under shock but finally got out of it and asked ..

Armaan: how can youu prove that??

Asad: from a DNA test..?

Armaan: Kay..

Asad than called a doctor in asked him to do the DNA testing .. While armaan was thinking

Armaan thinking: wow this dude was prepared..

**after an hour**

Armaan took a look at the reports.. Got shocked ..

Armaan: y-you really are my brother..

Asad: yea.. Look I know this is really awkward for youu..but I want youu to come back home.. Our home..? Will youu?

Armaan: yes! Ofcourse! When do we leave.. Bhaijaan.. Umm woh.. Actually umm can I call youu bhaijaan..?

Asad smiled at his 'woh actually'

Asad: yes youu can
And than again they hugged after that both started packing cause their flight was tomorrow back to Bhopal..

**Meanwhile in Bhopal**

Zaara was at the door of khan mansion.. She rang the door bell and a really pretty girl opened the door.. And that was none other than our najma..

Zaara: umm does zoya Farooqi live here..?

Najma:umm.. Yeaa.. But may I know who youu are??

Zaara: umm can youu please call her.. You'll soon find out who I am..

With that najma called zaara in.. And went to get zoya after sometime najma came with zoya and zoya's Appi.. When zoya's Appi looked to see who it was she stopped dead in her tracks And tears started forming in her eyes.. While zoya looked confusingly at her Appi than at the girl who looked A LOT like her.. Zoya was about too ask who she was when she heard that strange girl yell BAJJII! And jumped on her giving the bugged shock to zoya.. With that dil shad and tanveer came out of their rooms cause of the scream.. When they found zoya's Appi in tears with shocked expression in her face and a girl hugging zoya and crying while zoya had a shocked expression in her face

Tanveer thinking: ab ye konsi musibaat tapak gayi .. Kya ek kaam this Jo Dusri bhejdi ..? Ugh! (Now who is this trouble maker .. Wasn't one enough ?)

While zaara got out of the hug and wiped her tears away and apologized..

Zaara: I'm sorry for hugging youu like that I couldn't help it .. I'm really sorry..( Giving her killer dimple smile just like zoya's) ALLAH MIYAN WHAT'S WRING WITH ME! I forgot to introduce my self .. Sorry guys .. Umm I'm zaara .. Zaara Farooqi ..

With that zoya spoke..

Zoya: F-Fa-Farooqi ..?

Zaara: umm yea Baji.. Well I didn't know youu were alive.. I thought that along with ammi youu died in the fire too...

Zoya gave a confused expression.. Thinking how the hell does she know about my mothers death ..

Zaara looked over zoya's shoulder to see zeenat Appi standing there

Zaara: zeenat Appi.. Aren't youu gonna give me a hug?

With that zeenat came running to zaara and hugged her like there was no tomorrow !

Zeenat: zoya yeh tumari behen hai ... Hum samje the ke yeh bhi uss aag mein mar gayi par nahi yeh zinda hain! .. We didn't tell youu because youu had already gone through so much! (Zoya this is youur sister , we thought that she too died in the fire with youur mom but no she didn't shed alive , we didn't wanna tell youu cause youu Had already been through soo much! )

Than zoya started having some flashbacks where this girl would call her Baji and she would call her zaaru and with that zoya started crying and gave her sister a big hug that lasted for hours! .. Najma who was quite for a long time spoke up..

Najma: youur zoya's sister OMG are youu taking zoya back??!? Please don't! And where were youu all these years??

With that zaara started laughing than said

Zaara: I was in New York :) and no I'm not taking her don't worry! I'm gonna stay in a hotel until I find a house

Than dilshaad interrupted ..

Dilshaad:arre! Nope not at all youur gonna be staying here with us! Youur just like my daughter like zoya and najma

Dilshaad than went over and kissed zaara's forehead

While tanveer stood there shocked and angry at the same time ..

Tanveer thinking : mujhe to kabhi apne Betii ke Tara nahi Samja Khala be aur zoya ki behen bhi hai..?

Zaara: umm can we all introduce ourselves?

Najma: ofcourse! OMG now I have two sisters! YAAY!

Zaara: same here yo!

Zoya: allah Miyan what's wrong with youu two! I have two sisters Aswell!

And with that everyone started laughing .. Well except for tanveer..

Finally dilshaad spoke

Dilshaad: well I'm dilshaad Ahmad khan! And thats my daughter najma! And I have a son named asad Ahmad khan! And my husband Rashid left me ...

Dilshaad tells her the whole story and by the end all the ladies are in tears .. Exept for the BILLI!

Zaara: wow phupee .. Youur a really strong woman! Umm btw IM HUNGRY!

Zoya: same here phupee!

Dilshaad: aha okay what would youu like to eat

Both of the sisters at the same time: PIZZA! WITH DIET COKE!

Than both again at the same time

Both sisters: JINX YOU OWE ME SODA!

Both sisters: I SAID IT FIRST!

Zaara: no I said it baji!

Zoya: no zaaru I said it

Zaara: no I did!

Zoya: no I did!

Zaara: I did!

Zoya: I did!

Zaara: I did!

Dilshaad: BAASS!

Both of the stopped arguing at looked at dilshaad..

Dilshaad: OMG stop it both youu!! Youu both will get youur sodas and pizza! Okay

With that both of the ran and hugged dilshaad and said
Zoya: aww thanks phupee youur the best

Zaara: IKR my phupee is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G !

Najma: oh I feel left out!

And with that zaara pulled her in the group hug the only person left out was tanveer and no one really cared about her when they pulled out of the hug zaara noticed a weird looking girl standing in the corner and said..

Zaara: umm yeh yahan ki massi hai ? ( is she the maid of this house??)

Zoya najma dilshaad and zeenat tried to control their laughter but couldn't and burst out laughing but no one cared to correct her so zaara assumed that she was the maid of this house..

Zaara: Baji what's her name?

Zoya: her name.. Is tanveer..

Zaara: oh.. Umm okay

Dilshaad: zaara let's go show youu where youur room is

Zaara: umm.. Can I share the room with Baji..?

Zoya: ofcourse zaaru! And najma wanna Join ?

Najma: YESS! OMG it's gonna be a total sleep over!

Zeenat: okay than I will take my leave take care zoya and youu too zaara!

Both: bye Appi!

**In zoya's room**

Zaara: WHAT!?!? Youur brother did that to my sister! How dare he! And that bitch! Ugh god I hate her already! .. But I don't think youur brother could do that.. I mean I think he was setup.. It something..

Zoya: that's what I'm trying to tell youu mr.khan was set up I mean nothing happened between the two..

Najma&zaara: what?? Than why don't youu tell bhaijaan/jeeju?

Zoya: the problem is that he won't believe me.. Until she confesses.. But how is she gonna do that??

Zaara: oh I know a way (smiling evilly)

Zoya: what's youur plan sissy! Spill it out!

Zaara: k so whose seen pretty little liars..?

Najma and zoya: I have!

Zoya: but who cares about that we need to expose tanveer and how come it related to .. Wait a second are youu thinking what I'm thinking ?

Zaara: ohyes!

Najma: whaat are youu thinking ?

Zoya&zaara: we are gonna be A!

Najma: whaat? That isn't gonna work! She will know it's us!

Zaara: no she won't! Trust me! And it will! We will send her threats and that will make her spill out her little game.. Isn't that amazing ? Huh? And If youur scared to get caught than use my SIM card well I have one with a private number on it I keep it just incase and I have an extra phone it's an blackberry we could use that to text! Huh? So what say?

Zoya and najma: PERFECT!

Zaara: okay so out youur hands in say it with me

All three: "ALL FOR ONE AND ONE FOR ALL"

And with that the three started laughing!

**Meanwhile in mumbai**

Armmaan: hmm so that's what happened.. I don't hate youu for what youu did but I think youu have been set up .. Idk why I think that but I just do and seriously bhaijaan think before youu make any decision okay? And what youu told me about Abbu I can't believe he could do that..

Asad: IKR and Kay I will btw it's really late now I think we should go to sleep goodnight chotu!

Armaan: goodnight bhaijaan!

End of chapter three so how'd ya like it ??

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