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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for all the comments guys i really apreciate it! :) and I'm soo sorry that I won't be posting my next chapter after some days cause I'm really busy as school is starting ..ugh! Lol anywho thanks once again and ill try to post as soon as possible when I get the chance thanks! And love youu <3 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing...can u plz identify all the characters that u have introduced..I know kumud..but rest I m not sure. I just thought to put a picture on their faces while reading this story.
Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG Awasome story!! Read all the parts
PlZ pm me wjen u update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: abaiya123

Thanks for all the comments guys i really apreciate it! :) and I'm soo sorry that I won't be posting my next chapter after some days cause I'm really busy as school is starting ..ugh! Lol anywho thanks once again and ill try to post as soon as possible when I get the chance thanks! And love youu <3 😊




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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 8

They all got out of the car when kumud was getting out she was about to fall but our asad was there to catch her yup that's right she fell in Asad's arms they had a eye lock for like forever but broke out of it when they heard Rohan talking they let go of each other than kumud spoke

Kumud: well, well, well look whose here the Asad Ahmed khan..

Asad: excuse me do I know youu ??

Kumud: ever since youu became the biggest business tycoon youu forgot youur friends eh?

Asad kept looking at her than realization dawned at him it was his dumuk!

Asad: OMG DUMUK YOUU!

Kumud: oh god asad or I mean dasa? Lol

He went over and gave her the longest hug ever! While tanveer was burning with jealousy ..

Asad: OMG look at youu , youur a girl!

Kumud gave him the wired look.. Than he corrected himself

Asad: youur dressed like a girl!

Kumud: lol time changes youu..

Asad: yea.. Yes it does

Zaara: didi are we gonna talk outside ? Come in now!

Kumud: ohgod zaara I'm coming lets go!

Meanwhile asad couldn't stop staring at her he knew she was beautiful! She was his first love but told no one about it .. And than she left him too..

Dilshaad: ASAD!

Asad: huh? What?

Dilshaad: I have been calling youu for the past minute .. Where have youu been?

Asad: sorry ammi I was just thinking something.. Umm lets go inside ..

When the khans and tanveer entered they saw the house beautifully decorated

Zoya: why is the house decorated ..?

Shilpa: cause we planned a welcome back party for youu right bhabhi!

Manyata: right shilpi!

Zoya: aww that's so sweet of youu! I'll go find my room

While zoya was finding her room she had this weird feeling that she has been in this house before she unknowingly walked into this room which was covered with white sheets she pulled off the white sheets and got the shock of her life.. She saw a wedding picture.. It was hers! It was her and farhaan .. She took off the rest of the white sheets and looked at the pictures than memories started flooding her head and than suddenly everything went black

After an hour

Zoya woke up on a bed and looked around to find no one except or farhaan sleeping peacefully on the sofa she got up to wake him up so she could talk to him .. She remembered everything now she remembered that she was married to the love of her life .. What she felt towards mr.khan was just attraction cause farhaan used to be just like him.. But than he changed .. She was married and so was her sister than she thought does her sister remember we marriage than another memory came back to her and this one was about the accident

**FALSHBACK**

Zoya: zaara hurry up youur jiju and my cute little devaar must be waiting for us at the hall!

Zaara: aha coming Baji!

Than zaara came rushing down and they both went and sat in the car and drive off while zoya was driving her phone started ringing so she reached for it while another car was speeding towards there car Zoya couldn't control the car and crashed .. But before she fainted she remembered hearing someone say something

Someone: mam the job is done ..

**FLASHBACK END**

What shocked her more was that someone planned that accident .. She and her sister were in danger...

**While in the other room**

Kumud and asad kept talking and tanveer kept getting jealous

Kumud: ohgod dasa! I missed youu so much so how's life ?

Asad: it's good but kumud I want to tell you something ..

Kumud: sure asad go ahead

And than asad tells her everything she quietly listens to everything and tells him

Kumud: asad I don't think youu would ever do that .. I know youu inside and out .. Youu said that youu don't remember anything right ?

Asad: yea..

Kumud: I think there is something hidden and we need to figure it out .. Asad are youu sure that its tanveer .. ?

Asad: yes I'm sure it tannu .. Why?

Kumud: asad I wanted to tell youu this but.. I met tanveer some days ago .. Actually she's staying here at our place but she's gone out with some friends .. And of course her fianc .. Asad the tanveer with youu isn't the real one ..

Asad was shocked beyond his wits so the person that was staying at his place was an stranger and that stranger lied to him about being his childhood best friend..

Asad:how can this be possible.. OMG it can't be true right?

Kumud: I'm sorry asad.. But it's true..

**kumud's phone rings**

Kumud picked it up and smiled the widest smile she could

Voice: hey babe!

Kumud: SARAS! OMG WHEN FID YOUU COME BACK!?! AN WHY DIDN'T YOUU TELL ME!

Saras: sorry kumud! And I just ane back like some hours ago.. And now I'm on my way to youur place happy?

Kumud: yes very happy! Youu know how much I missed youu!

Saras: I missed youu too! K I g2g bye see youu tonight

Kumud: k bye and yes youu better! :)

Saras: lol Kay love youu!

Kumud: love youu too!

And than kumud put her phone down and turned to find a confused asad

Kumud: oh that was my boyfriend saras! And I have to go but I'll see youu around

Asad was heartbroken .. He felt as if his whole world came crumbling Down he wanted to cry and scream.. Of course he still loved kumud she was the first girl that ever came into his life.. Even before tannu and what he felt towards zoya was just plain attraction cause she was just like kumud .. But she wasn't her ..

Meanwhile in shilpa's room

Armaan got out of the washroom with only his towel on and as soon as he got out shilpa entered and when she saw armaan in just his towel she screamed

Shilpa: AAAHHH!

Armaan got scared and turned around to find the most beautiful girl in the world! He just kept staring at her and she just kept screaming!

Shilpa: WHAT ARE YOUU DOING IN MY ROOM!

Armaan got out of his trance and realized that she wasn't wearing anything except his towel and kind of for embarrassed

Armaan: what do youu mean your room! I was told that I would be staying in this room..

Shilpa: what?!? Are youu sure?

Armaan: yes I'm sure now can youu please turn around? I know I'm vet handsome but I don't feel comfortable .. Just saying ..

Shilpa: ugh seriously youur such an ass.. And who told youu looked hot ? Cause youu don't..

Armaan: than babe I think youu need glasses

Shilpa: oh really?

Armaan: yup!

Shilpa: huh stupid .. And was about to walk away when she tripped on her dupatta that was on the floor and was about to fall when armaan was about to catch her but to their bad luck they both fell and landed on top of each other and had an eye lock

Just when zaara walked in and got the shock of her life .. Armaan on top of shilpa..


So guys how did youu like it? Please comment and like :) thanks! And thanks for the comments too! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
hmmm... zoya is married to farhaan ... and asad is all alone..
this is getting weird..

thanks for update...pm me.. thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmmm.. so tanveer is not tanveer... imposter ??

zoya is getting her memory back... and the accident

Who is trying to kill her?? more suspense

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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Wow..getting more and more confusing and complicated. Plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice
thanx for pm
continue soon do pm me for the next part

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