Without You?- An AsYa OS. Last updt-Pg 9. - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Loved it
Too sad but written beautiful
do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
This what we called awsome šŸ‘šŸ¼ too gud os really wanted second part so plz update nxt part asap and pm me when u update 😊 and also update ur ss soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
You wrote something !? Like really ? 😲 And nobody told me ! šŸ˜”

Haha...forget it !! I'm soo happy !! šŸ˜†

Because your OS was the first thing I saw as soon as I came to the forum ! 😳

I completely loved the whole thing...!! Beautifully written. šŸ‘

You killed Dilshad momma ? 😭 Awww... I guess it was needed. But it made the story so damn sad.

Loved the way they both cuddled up to each other crying for his loss. She knows so much abt him and he's started falling for her too. Hate Zoya's Abbu !!!

You portrayed Asad so weak in this story... I just hope he gets back his Zoya in the next update ! 😃
Hope !?!? No wait !! I WANT him to go and get her back in the NEXT update ! šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜†

You know what... Pehle toh I was sooo shocked that you ended it just like this... Infact I was angry too ! But then I read your note below and cooled myself down. 🤣

I'm eagerly waiting for the next update... And the Happy Ending !! :P
Show mein waise bhi aaj kal bohat rona dhona milta hai dekhne ko... Spare us here atleast !! 😳 šŸ˜† Rest is your choice baby !

Btw I'm waiting for All the time tooo !! 😃

Thanks for the touching story. šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Pls pls update second part its amazing os
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Ok you HAVE to update. You can't
leave it like this. Not with the way
the current track is going.
Please???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
u jst contonue it...u can't leave it like this...yr dosto ko satana acha nhi hain...


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update & pm me

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
awsome please continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
wow.. Loved it.. Its so very interesting. You must continue asap.
Will be waiting.

Dee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
It was simply super duper awesome gurl... ā¤ļød it... Dil se ā¤ļø...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
hey tis is really beautifully written...totally luv it...felt all the emotion u potray in asad n zoya...
its amazing...please continue soon n do pm me...its mind blowing...

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